RPGM Headpats & Handholding [v0.16] [Insomnimaniac Games]

[HeathenFilth]

1) so good?

2) Comma after 'cave' not needed.

3) army's

4) Comma not needed after 'what was strange'. creature's

5) single-handedly



This line alone is 5-star worthy.

 

[Insomnimaniac Games]

5) single-handedly
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I missed a hyphen. Spider-Man will never forgive me.

Thanks for pointing out these early typos. I have a hard time catching them. Sleep deprivation sucks chodes.

 

[moonblackhen]

I wrote another short story featuring characters from the game:

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While the two I posted previously were more like scenes from the game this one is more like a typical story. I actually enjoyed writing the non-sexual part more than the sex scene.