Well, if he's rewriting and removing, he needs to start it from the beginning. Anyway, I think I'll pass on this and wish the dev well.
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It was, the dev has redone it and now that scene is not in the current build.
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with the new rebuild the game is nothing special and I dont like it anymore.. so sad.. and he used free DAZ Standard Models.. all girls looking like the same girl in different ages..
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This was a complete rewrite. It makes no sense with what came before, so I hope the Dev has some clue about a totally new direction. If I somehow have to go through 4 years of college with visits and video calls I'm going to stop playing.
Yet if we jump to his return from college and no feelings have changed and no one looks a single day older, that's also going to be horrible.
I don't see a single good way to move this game forward in any way.
DEV No matter what direction you take:
GET A PROOFREADER FOR YOUR SCRIPT.
American English never uses ?. to end a question, just ?
"It's very difficult for her to let us out"
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"It's very difficult for she to let us out."
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Yet if we jump to his return from college and no feelings have changed and no one looks a single day older, that's also going to be horrible.
I don't see a single good way to move this game forward in any way.
DEV No matter what direction you take:
GET A PROOFREADER FOR YOUR SCRIPT.
American English never uses ?. to end a question, just ?
"It's very difficult for her to let us out"
NOT
"It's very difficult for she to let us out."
and
Compliment
not
Cumpliment
This isn't exactly Sherlock Holmes story so you get into it pretty quickly. In 30 sec you know what's goin on, you and your sis are sneaking off to a party. Does it really need an intro?
- Mar 7, 2019
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Very very good..Never saw 1.0 . Not rapy at all but rather very luvy in my opinion. Keep it going 
Why is it that 90% of the games that come out, even the ones that look like they might be good, have cows instead of women? I get it that big boobs are enticing for most, I mean, if I had Dee Dee Lynn, for example, I would go crazy, but these characters are just too much, their udders are half the body and so unenticing, why can't games have regular B or C size, what does people see in them? Gross
I do proofreading for this game, and I'm not sure where this version comes from -- in my edited version none of these problems exist. I did leave the question mark ahead of an ellipsis, which is a questionable choice, but removed all instances of ?. and !.
There's always the most common/cliche way in porn games for the MC to return home. The uncle dies in a horrible accident and the MC has to go back to help his family out because he's now the man of the house or because they just have to sell the apartment.
It started well, I prefer the VN version, even if it had less content that the sandbox one, but after that ending I have to agree, I don't see a good way to move the story forward.
Actually, it needs an entire story. Start, middle and end.(Eventually) Not just start in the middle of a convo. The dev is either lazy or as some have said doesn't know what he's doing. This is supposed to be a rewrite. Well, rewrite from the start.
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Glad its VN and not sandbox. Hope it gets a harem tag as well. The ladies are very hot.
The switch from sandbox was a mistake, why even play a game if you don't want to do anything? Just watch porn instead
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So you're saying you corrected all this, and the Dev chose not to use any of your corrections?
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Yeah, I'm fine with a cliche in this story. I am actually hoping the Dad/Uncle dies(The sooner the better), and we can go back because without having Kylee, Amelie and Stephanie with me in the game, it isn't worth playing to me.
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Unless you want to change from the original. The version I just played, it is your uncle, aunt (by marriage) and cousins, which would still be incest. Unless you are wanting it changed to immediate family instead, which I seen a post where someone changed the script to that a few pages ago.