VN Ren'Py Heart Problems [v0.10] [Xenorav]

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Sweetluvd

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Feb 5, 2019
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Oh God, this game is so fuckin' dope. So much content in v0.8. Can't wait to see the moment that MC fuck his mom.
 
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2LAOD

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I feel like this is prob an inside joke...
But I'm Psure the mc dick gets bigger every update. Wouldn't surprise me. They did it with powergirl.

Also geez I'm kinda tired of Amelie teasing so damn much. I can't imagine what's it's gonna take to push to the edge besides near death of mc.

I hope the harem ending isn't bs also. Or even worse a zero harem option. Speaking of which, it would be a Pdeep cut it Mia's mom was the uncle mistress the whole time. Shes gone a lot too. + She is no stranger to crossing lines btn loved ones. I think Mia knows her bf sleeps with her mom. Would be cool to get a warped view of sex bcuz of it in her story.

Amazing visuals tho. .8 rocked my world.

EDIT:hoping and begging 4 preggo. Plz it would perfect
 
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MrMax

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Just did a full playthrough ch1 - 8 and... nobody here has a problem with how schizo the mc (and even the girls) come off? Almost no acknowledgement that sex scenes happened with other girls until a few lines in ch8. It's "I love you, you're the only one for me" with Amelie and then almost the same in the next scene with Kaylee. Stephanie's personality varies between a bratty teen and... someone who still needs a booster seat - it's very off-putting, especially since the domination route hinted at in ch1 vanished completely. And Amelie's courtship is basically "are you ok? you're pretty! can I rub up on you" on repeat for the entire game. She says "no more, we need to be careful" only to forget being careful 5 min later because... we need more plot.
It's gotten better in ch8 with MC at least realizing the crazy shit he's doing + getting a job (21 yr old bumming around at home is weird) and I hope it improves because the writing is pretty grounded and good, it's just that the characters come across as 2d most of the time (no pun intended)
 
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MrMax said:
Just did a full playthrough ch1 - 8 and... nobody here has a problem with how schizo the mc (and even the girls) come off? Almost no acknowledgement that sex scenes happened with other girls until a few lines in ch8. It's "I love you, you're the only one for me" with Amelie and then almost the same in the next scene with Kaylee. Stephanie's personality varies between a bratty teen and... someone who still needs a booster seat - it's very off-putting, especially since the domination route hinted at in ch1 vanished completely. And Amelie's courtship is basically "are you ok? you're pretty! can I rub up on you" on repeat for the entire game. She says "no more, we need to be careful" only to forget being careful 5 min later because... we need more plot.
It's gotten better in ch8 with MC at least realizing the crazy shit he's doing + getting a job (21 yr old bumming around at home is weird) and I hope it improves because the writing is pretty grounded and good, it's just that the characters come across as 2d most of the time (no pun intended)
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I actually have started a Thread for a Re-Write of the game, I've completed Chapter One and I believe an Admin has placed a link to it on the games main page (Extra's Sections below the screenshots?).

I'm attempting to flesh out the characters more and iron out certain elements as I come across them while also adding some humour, but also make the moments that calls for it hit a little harder.

I agree that the game has a solid foundation to build on, I just think it needs that English first language touch to bring even more out of it.

Give it a go, let me know what you think. I'm certainly open to feedback and I hope you might enjoy the direction I've gone with it so far!
 
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