VN Ren'Py Hearts on Parole [v0.3.3] [Magnum]

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5mithers

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Next question MagnumStories : Are you wanting feedback on grammar/spelling/idiom usage/etc.?

Or do you have a translator/spell checker/someone who will come in later to clean all of that up?
 

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Next question MagnumStories : Are you wanting feedback on grammar/spelling/idiom usage/etc.?

Or do you have a translator/spell checker/someone who will come in later to clean all of that up?
I mean if I have typos and such yeah I appreciate being corrected. Sometimes though things are intentionally weird or look odd for character/story telling purposes. Though if you'd want to contribute on that front the discord server is the place for it
 
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Any chance that the foreign languages could get subtitles?
If the languages are apart of spoken dialogue, I've made the creative decision to leave them untranslated for a more immersive experience. But any internal or personal dialogue will have the translations.
 

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Hey so I'm just gonna throw these out here since the itch page is still down and I still see people complaining about the models. Every character has received improvements since the last update drop and will be implemented in the full rework which I have been working on. There will be tweaks and adjustments of course continually. But what you're seeing are pretty much the characters moving forward. If the girls or style aren't for you, fair enough, but I love them all. View attachment 5148095 View attachment 5148097 View attachment 5148098 View attachment 5148099 View attachment 5148100 View attachment 5148101 View attachment 5148103 View attachment 5148106 View attachment 5148107 View attachment 5148109 View attachment 5148111 View attachment 5148112
I like what I see so far, and I am interested in playing, how far away are you from releasing the full rework? Just curious if I should wait for that or just play the most recent update?

Thanks!

P.S., Please feel free to ignore that small penis obsessed idiot, dude literally spams every forum (no joke) asking devs to change their game just for him, because evidently he can't enjoy anything that doesn't cater to his fetish.
 
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MagnumStories

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I like what I see so far, and I am interested in playing, how far away are you from releasing the full rework? Just curious if I should wait for that or just play the most recent update?

Thanks!

P.S., Please feel free to ignore that small penis obsessed idiot, dude literally spams every forum (no joke) asking devs to change their game just for him, because evidently he can't enjoy anything that doesn't cater to his fetish.
It's gonna be a minute. Rendering takes the most amount of time for me. I work a full time job and do this on the side. While the rework will include some altered scenes and dialogue, the story is pretty the same. So I suggest playing now, grind through my godawful original renders (they get better as you continue) then give the rework a play once it's finished.
 
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