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Cuckolding falls under NTR too. NTR encompass Netorare (lover stolen away), Netorase (cuckolding) and Netori (stealing away the lover)
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Any chance you have the 'extra' saves?
Or is that a public update that just hadn't been added to the front page?
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Wow I just finished playing it. (great props for walkthrought !)Hope you’ll enjoy it!
I've got to congratulate you man !
You made absolutely AMAZING game. It's totaly on the level of original NTRPG games !
And it only gets better and better as you go into further updates.
This is basicaly how I dreamed to make my own game, but just didn't had time and conviction enough to do.
Since you started making it arround the time I was making my plans - did you maybe look at my project idea when decided to make it ? I don't mean it in a bad way - your did AMAZING job.
I cant praise you enough really - I love the game you made - thats why I give you few pointers in which I believe it would be even better.
1. The best problem imho the game you made had - is the begining. There is a distinct lack of information at the start about all the characters (I still dont know who the black skinned girl in the woods supposed to be), and at the begining of the game - you as a player dont feel really engaged into the story. But it gets better !
I understand it is probably how you felt as well and tried to fix it in later updates - when we get much more flashbacks backstories and general time to get to know characters - thats good !
2. I feel dissatisfied a little bit that some of the most important scenes felt omited / happen off screen. I would love to see old Buttler fight/fuck Celestine across the mantion, or see actualy how Eleonora lost her virginity. More showing on screen ;]
Thats about the problems really but here are a few things you could improve on.
1. Consider making the sex scenes themselves a little bit longer - from what I recall NTRPGs sex scenes were a little bit more prolongued, often switching the animation durring scene several times slightly (slowing down, speading up etc) - this makes it feel more natural and sexier, that a simple loop acompanied by 3 lines of text.
Your sex scenes are great - but not quite as amazing - becoue of those things.
2. The more detailed animations of full body figures you add to some scenes are welcome addition - but they need to be integrated into the game to viable, rather than beeing simple pop-up with slow/medium/fast/cum options.
They need to be integrated with the dialogue and everythign to have proper impact. Plus - I have to say Sister face looks bad in some of them ;p
If you want to make something even better in the future - why not try making it something similar to what author of Violated Heroine did. Especialy Katteban version has some amazing sprite sex animations - I believe you could make something like this with your skils !
3. One of the reason why it is hard to come to like and embrace the characters you created at the begining of the game is - they have no faces.
I know it was like that in orignial NTRPG, but it was diffrent becouse it had diffrent setting. Some Face portraits of characters would go A LONG WAY.
I dont know if you seen my project at all - but I used the portraits of my characters made with character generator built into RPG Maker - and the effect was really good IMHO. Having some faces to visualise the characters with really works great deal to make them more enjoyable !
You should try it (or make full standing sprites like VH if you feeling super confident ;p)
But those are just some pointers I give becouse I love your work. You should probably finish the game as it is right now without any mayor changes.
But maybe one you finish it - you could use some of them in another project ? ;]
I would love to see more comming out from you in the future for sure !
A nice shotacon/teen boy NTR incest scenario maybe ;]
Thank you for your amazing work, and keep it up !
Cheers ;]
Thanks a lot, I am really happy to see you've liked it that much : )
I will answer more in details later so I can adress some of the points you've made.
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for you or anyone that'd be interested. I'm sorry this isn't Shotacon, but it isn't exactly my cup of tea. Moreover, Patron is being extremely strict on anything that could be remotely linked to a juvenile-looking character being engaged in acts of sexual nature.Since you're also a Patron (thank you very much for that!), you can also take a look at my Proof of Life posts on my Patreon page to get some news on development and other stuff, if you're interested.
Thanks again!
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I just subbed to you after playing the game as a fair payment for great game you made ;] I dont know if I stay patreon for long, but I though you deserve fair payment for your work.
I dont think shotacon is as much as a problem with your type of games to be honest. With no real graphics to discern who is who - people cant really acuse you of anything. Unless you put it in the title or the main banner.
But if it is not something you personaly like that's somethign people will have to live without ;]
Thanks for replying and good luck once more ;]
Okay, sorry for the delay, I now have more time to answer to your post^^
1. Yes, the backstory issue is something I figured out later. Basically, this being my first game ever, I wanted to do too much and ended up wit too little. With 4 characters, it became quite hard to balance each character's story without it being too boring, so for some of them I had to leave it as it was without much more infos.
This is why next game is going to have less main characters, and more side-chars. However, the side characters are going to have much less backstory, maybe a few lines to understand their role in the game's world, but nothing more in order to make room for the main heroins.
2. I believe there is a misunderstanding there: I don't make the sprites myself (well, only some of the smaller ones), I have them comissioned. Since we're almost at the end of the game, I can't change much, but I'm trying to rethink the way I put them into the game. For example, Update 4 has an option to choose if you want the animation to be manual or automatic, and I'll try to add this feature for every animation in the future.
For now however, I'm mainly focusing on comissioning smaller sprites, as the new engine I'm going to use has close to no base sex sprites available.
For some of the sex scenes off-screen, well, it's a matter or preference really. For now, I had more people complaining the there are actually too much scenes shown on screen, and they'd rather they didn't see them to keep some "mystery" element within the NTR, if you see what I mean. Here again, I have to balance out the scenes shown and not shown to try and have something for every player^^
3. I have thought about that for a long time actually, before deciding not to put any faces. It helps player "imagine" the character better when they have only some broad facial features to base themselves on. I'd like to keep a part of imagination in my games and let players decide of the details.
Besides, if I go with portraits one day, I'd rather have them custom made to feel more personal. It depends on the funding, but for now I'm more focused on the sprites and other visual elements.
Hope this answered your different points well enough : )
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Do you expect first of the month update for #5 for the higher tiers like that last two updates? Is the next update the last (or at least the last major content update)? Your PoL #22 post has a lot of stuff about the endings.
Yes, 1st of May for Sergeant and above tiers, and 5th of May for Grunt Tier. Also yes, it should be the last update in terms of content, the following one being more technical (reminiscence room, adding an automatic feature to every animation, etc...), one which I'll work along with developing my new game.
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N_taii having played and liked both NTRPG and NTRPG 2 I wanted to thank you for making this one. I'm definitely gonna pledge for May and maybe once every few months just to support your project a bit. You managed to keep some of NTRPG spirit in your game which is not easy thing to do. I just wanted to mention couple things that are strong points of your game (up to Update 3) and weak ones, just in my opinion.
What I really loved:
- This may come as a surprise, but your writing, and the way you tell the story, I really liek it, dialogue feels smooth, and narrative of our MC you managed to almost nail it.
- Character personalities also hit the nail, at least with me, and the corruption aspect of them, same with them changing clothes to look more revealing/slutty (you got extra point from me on that) Next in the alley you could also do some hairstyle changes up to NTR man liking, maybe even some special accessories NTR man give to them to wear, and they listen and put them on (that's what I like in NTR)
- You said that you are outsourcing sprites to other people, and that probably cost a bit of penny, I really like that you are thinking about investing the money you are getting from patrons into making your game even better, that's commendable and I respect you even more by doing that, hopefully your game(s) will be getting way more recognition with the help of better/more/new sprites.
What I really liked:
- Now, regarding the sprites itself, they are okay-ish, I wish it was more on NTRPG2 or even NTRPG3 level, but that's probably not easy task to do, since you outsource this to other people.
The things that I disliked:
- I only have 2 things I disliked so far, first one being the zoomed in animations, I didn't like the quality of the sprites in those, the whole idea of it is probably okay, but the amount of money you probably have to pay to have a bit of inferior (in my opinion) outcome
- While I said that I loved the clothing changes, it didn't reflect that well in sprites for me, but yeah it's probably not easy to make good sprites.
I'm sorry for bashing the sprites that much, they are by no means bad, but they could be so much better, maybe on this new engine with new game coming out.
From what I see here, we have a really good dev who listens to feedback, and try to keep on improving both himself and the games he's making, kudos to you. I hope you are gonna go forward with doing what you want to do in the games, and not following blindly people opinions when you don't really dig it.
My personal fav fetish is innocent/pure girls turning into sluts while falling in love and being more and more corrupted by the NTR guy, and I can see it happening here even more and more in next two updates.
Anyway, will probably post my impressions after playing Update 4 and 5 in early May, let's see if you nailed it =) And again thanks for all your effort put into making this game.
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Forgot to mention, can't wait for engine change for new game =) Better resolution, mouse movements, and other things, sounds good to me.
What I really loved:
- This may come as a surprise, but your writing, and the way you tell the story, I really liek it, dialogue feels smooth, and narrative of our MC you managed to almost nail it.
- Character personalities also hit the nail, at least with me, and the corruption aspect of them, same with them changing clothes to look more revealing/slutty (you got extra point from me on that
) Next in the alley you could also do some hairstyle changes up to NTR man liking, maybe even some special accessories NTR man give to them to wear, and they listen and put them on (that's what I like in NTR)- You said that you are outsourcing sprites to other people, and that probably cost a bit of penny, I really like that you are thinking about investing the money you are getting from patrons into making your game even better, that's commendable and I respect you even more by doing that, hopefully your game(s) will be getting way more recognition with the help of better/more/new sprites.
What I really liked:
- Now, regarding the sprites itself, they are okay-ish, I wish it was more on NTRPG2 or even NTRPG3 level, but that's probably not easy task to do, since you outsource this to other people.
The things that I disliked:
- I only have 2 things I disliked so far, first one being the zoomed in animations, I didn't like the quality of the sprites in those, the whole idea of it is probably okay, but the amount of money you probably have to pay to have a bit of inferior (in my opinion) outcome
- While I said that I loved the clothing changes, it didn't reflect that well in sprites for me, but yeah it's probably not easy to make good sprites.
I'm sorry for bashing the sprites that much, they are by no means bad, but they could be so much better, maybe on this new engine with new game coming out.
From what I see here, we have a really good dev who listens to feedback, and try to keep on improving both himself and the games he's making, kudos to you. I hope you are gonna go forward with doing what you want to do in the games, and not following blindly people opinions when you don't really dig it.
My personal fav fetish is innocent/pure girls turning into sluts while falling in love and being more and more corrupted by the NTR guy, and I can see it happening here even more and more in next two updates.
Anyway, will probably post my impressions after playing Update 4 and 5 in early May, let's see if you nailed it =) And again thanks for all your effort put into making this game.
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Forgot to mention, can't wait for engine change for new game =) Better resolution, mouse movements, and other things, sounds good to me.
just finished the game up to part 3,as i progress through my legs started getting cold and my heart started to feel hurt
as if i was there spectating the people, can handle mild and below ntr but this is too excruciating for my petty life.
make me think again if i want to marry or even getting to know with a woman.......I'M TOO PATHETIC orz
very nice game nevertheless,will not play it again and will deleted it afterward though.Recommended for people who like a good ntr-based game.
i want to play other h game that have sprite animated like this game but not sure where to find a good one.
any suggestion?as long the game have similar animated sprite that okay.
PS-i started playing the game at 5.00 a.m until 3.30 p.m in front of a full powered cold blasting fan while being sleep deprived since i was up at 2.00 p.m yesterday hence the cold leg and the heartburn.
as if i was there spectating the people, can handle mild and below ntr but this is too excruciating for my petty life.
make me think again if i want to marry or even getting to know with a woman.......I'M TOO PATHETIC orz
very nice game nevertheless,will not play it again and will deleted it afterward though.Recommended for people who like a good ntr-based game.
i want to play other h game that have sprite animated like this game but not sure where to find a good one.
any suggestion?as long the game have similar animated sprite that okay.
PS-i started playing the game at 5.00 a.m until 3.30 p.m in front of a full powered cold blasting fan while being sleep deprived since i was up at 2.00 p.m yesterday hence the cold leg and the heartburn.
Thanks for the feedback, it's, as always, much appreciated!
I'm glad you liked the writing. Since English isn't my mother tongue, I often struggle with the wording. I hope I don't come off as arrogant by saying that I think my English is fine, but it'll never be on par with native speakers, that''s for sure.
I usually read my text twice or even thrice, until I'm satisfied. It's not perfect, and there are always typos slipping through, but I'm glad it's still decent enough for people to enjoy it^^
The clothing part I added it after I got feeback from people who said they'd like me to implement it, and I'm glad I did.
Yes, the bigger animations are kinda costy, but I comissioned them for 3 reasons: 1)to not have a carbon copy of NTRPG, and make something that'd feel a bit more personal, 2)to give people the monthly option to have something to vote on my Patreon, 3)to show people that, before making a profit, I'd like to make a good game, because I'm far more interested in making something that people would enjoy rather than making tons of money (although I do have this dream in the back of my head that I could make a living out of it).
However, I'll definitely rethink those animations in my next game, and wether I'll implement them at all. For me, the most important part us the smaller sprites. This is why I decided to go with another engine, where the sprites are 48x48 pixels instead of 32x32 pixels. I have to comission all of the base sex sprites + the main chars sprites, but I'm sure it'll be worth it in the long run. I'm thinking about hiring someone to improve the base maps, but I'll see if I can fit it in my budget^^
I don't know if you've seen my
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's concept on my Patreon, but there are some examples of the new sprites on it. I think they're an improvement compared to HC-1.I'll take what you wrote in consideration, however, I've taken the decision to reduce the amount of main characters in my next game to give them a better background and a more developed corruption process, so the amount of personalities and types of NTR might be limited^^
Anyway, thanks again for your message!
The game will have a good ending though
But I perfectly understand that this game isn't for everyone.
As for pixel games recommandations, here's a copy-paste of another comment I made:
"Well, there are a lot of them in Japanese, but most aren't translated. There are then original NTRPG games by Hanataka (translated). Agunosto(アグノーストス) is making games very similar to NTRPG, especially his first one, but I don't think they've been translated yet. FusshidaraTei
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) features, if I remember well, features a nephew (male MC) having sex with his aunt and her two daugthers, really well done. That's about all I can think of right now. "Hope you can find what you're looking for !
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It makes me a little sad that chapter 2 will have all new characters with an all new story. It makes sense that there won't be much else to do with these characters, but I was hoping they'd still have a part to play in the new story. Hopefully they'll get a cameo at least!
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