Okay. So... Thoughts:
One. Great Desert Punk reference in the beginning. Loved that.
Two: It does seem a bit rushed. You can see this in the lack of an easy way to view stats, the sub quests, and yes, bugs. One particularly annoying bug, and I know others have mentioned it, is the inability to see scenes from Mie's perspective after getting them. The one that annoyed me the most was the one under the warehouse in the trap. When you go back and try to look at it again, well you just can't as far as I can tell.
I AM NOT SAYING ITS A BAD GAME. IN fact I think it's good. THe concentration on one girl is something I almost always enjoy, the post-apocalytic zombie thing is always great. I've loved nearly every NTR game that has that genre. It's simply clear that it was rushed in many ways.
The Sato/Yamashita (I think that's his name; sorry don't have the game open right now) thing was interesting. I would have liked the conversation choices to matter more, but it still gave the game enough flavor.
The different disposition of the people in the first safe zone in comparison to the slums was interesting.
The scenes themselves. Loved all of them. Hidden sex is a great subgenre. The shower scene, both scenes that occur in your bed and the fog scene were amazing.
Clothing changes. Great stuff. More varied maybe would be nice, but not a major thing.
Now, beyond bugs, I think there is a lot of room for more improvement.
I won't talk about the endings yet much. I've only played it through once to the ending, and don't know about the 'normal' and 'good' endings. I would say that the bad ending feels too sudden? Like, why is Mei's hair a different color? and the Cuck's reaction is FAR too placid.
Please take my suggestions with a grain of salt. I am not a programmer, so I have no idea how hard they would be to implement. If anyone knows if becoming a Patreon gives you some say in how the game is shaped in the future, tell me, and I will sign up right away.
NTR side of things:
1. Spread out the scenes and make the stats more visible. You have a phone, but i think that you should be able to see your wife's stats there rather than just messages.
2. (This one I might be wrong about because, as mentioned, many of the scenes from Mei's POV don't appear right in the recollection room). More writing from Mie's perspective comparing the Cuck to Inoshita?
3. More scenes in your house. Naked towel/sex scene in the shower is nice. Naked Apron is better. Really hits the whole Bigger Dick has moved in and taken over thing.
4. Tied into the above. In the corruption play through, it's clear that the wife begins to give the Cuck pills to keep him pliable. I'd like that to be more obvious. Small scenes from her perspective of her setting out the pills, and watching him take them?
5. The wife's hair color clearly changes later in the game. Why? We need to know. Further, enlarging the amount of evidence left behind and the Cuck's reaction to it would be good. - Any man should know what 'the rancid smell' is and what the amount of left over tissues and stuff means.
Actual game aspects:
1. This one is probably the hardest to implement. I would prefer to see the Mei POV scenes the night after they happen, or at least be able to choose to rather than need to see them in the recollection room. It's more immersive. However, just making certain the bugs on this part are fixed could help a lot.
2. The combat and resource gathering is too repetitive. I think I'm going to cheat and give all the characters insane levels of Attack power going through it again. I don't think you can cut down the number of zombies much, but there needs to be a way to make it more interesting.
3. Spread out the game timewise. The wife falls too quickly, you can go through the game too quickly, and the side quests don't impact the gameplay nearly enough, even if they do impact the background world.
4. Inoshita as the main Big Dick is good. It seems, though, that there could be room for at least two others if you want to spread out the game and make it bigger overall. Making Mie's fall different in each case would be very hard, I think.
5. More POV points from the wife's perspective? Maybe instead of needing to look at stats, just have a POV from Mie when the Cuck leaves in the morning? Each time you reach a certain corruption level it changes.
That's my thoughts. Hope to see this game become even better/larger in the future, even if no one looks at my suggestions.
One. Great Desert Punk reference in the beginning. Loved that.
Two: It does seem a bit rushed. You can see this in the lack of an easy way to view stats, the sub quests, and yes, bugs. One particularly annoying bug, and I know others have mentioned it, is the inability to see scenes from Mie's perspective after getting them. The one that annoyed me the most was the one under the warehouse in the trap. When you go back and try to look at it again, well you just can't as far as I can tell.
I AM NOT SAYING ITS A BAD GAME. IN fact I think it's good. THe concentration on one girl is something I almost always enjoy, the post-apocalytic zombie thing is always great. I've loved nearly every NTR game that has that genre. It's simply clear that it was rushed in many ways.
The Sato/Yamashita (I think that's his name; sorry don't have the game open right now) thing was interesting. I would have liked the conversation choices to matter more, but it still gave the game enough flavor.
The different disposition of the people in the first safe zone in comparison to the slums was interesting.
The scenes themselves. Loved all of them. Hidden sex is a great subgenre. The shower scene, both scenes that occur in your bed and the fog scene were amazing.
Clothing changes. Great stuff. More varied maybe would be nice, but not a major thing.
Now, beyond bugs, I think there is a lot of room for more improvement.
I won't talk about the endings yet much. I've only played it through once to the ending, and don't know about the 'normal' and 'good' endings. I would say that the bad ending feels too sudden? Like, why is Mei's hair a different color? and the Cuck's reaction is FAR too placid.
Please take my suggestions with a grain of salt. I am not a programmer, so I have no idea how hard they would be to implement. If anyone knows if becoming a Patreon gives you some say in how the game is shaped in the future, tell me, and I will sign up right away.
NTR side of things:
1. Spread out the scenes and make the stats more visible. You have a phone, but i think that you should be able to see your wife's stats there rather than just messages.
2. (This one I might be wrong about because, as mentioned, many of the scenes from Mei's POV don't appear right in the recollection room). More writing from Mie's perspective comparing the Cuck to Inoshita?
3. More scenes in your house. Naked towel/sex scene in the shower is nice. Naked Apron is better. Really hits the whole Bigger Dick has moved in and taken over thing.
4. Tied into the above. In the corruption play through, it's clear that the wife begins to give the Cuck pills to keep him pliable. I'd like that to be more obvious. Small scenes from her perspective of her setting out the pills, and watching him take them?
5. The wife's hair color clearly changes later in the game. Why? We need to know. Further, enlarging the amount of evidence left behind and the Cuck's reaction to it would be good. - Any man should know what 'the rancid smell' is and what the amount of left over tissues and stuff means.
Actual game aspects:
1. This one is probably the hardest to implement. I would prefer to see the Mei POV scenes the night after they happen, or at least be able to choose to rather than need to see them in the recollection room. It's more immersive. However, just making certain the bugs on this part are fixed could help a lot.
2. The combat and resource gathering is too repetitive. I think I'm going to cheat and give all the characters insane levels of Attack power going through it again. I don't think you can cut down the number of zombies much, but there needs to be a way to make it more interesting.
3. Spread out the game timewise. The wife falls too quickly, you can go through the game too quickly, and the side quests don't impact the gameplay nearly enough, even if they do impact the background world.
4. Inoshita as the main Big Dick is good. It seems, though, that there could be room for at least two others if you want to spread out the game and make it bigger overall. Making Mie's fall different in each case would be very hard, I think.
5. More POV points from the wife's perspective? Maybe instead of needing to look at stats, just have a POV from Mie when the Cuck leaves in the morning? Each time you reach a certain corruption level it changes.
That's my thoughts. Hope to see this game become even better/larger in the future, even if no one looks at my suggestions.
