What an incredible game so far Nitrolith. Great writing, realistic complex characters and an engaging story. I have honestly struggled to put it down, it’s been that engrossing. You have serious talent and should be very proud of your work.
I see that you’ve mentioned previously that there will be several endings for each heroine, as well as a harem and a bad ending. Is Lavinia considered a heroine who will have her own unique ending? I ask because she doesn’t have a status page so it doesn’t feel like she is right now. She practically forced herself onto Mars and didn’t give him much choice in starting the relationship, but now they are considered together she has taken a more passive role. I would love to see an ending where Mars slowly falls for her and she gets to finally live her dream of happiness after a life of pure misery. I know you’ve planned an ending with Lavinia and Cecille together, but to deny her an ending solely for herself would be almost criminal, her level of loyalty and love for Mars matches Sera’s for Erin (at least initially) so she thoroughly deserves it in my opinion. I implore you to consider doing a pure Lavinia ending, assuming that’s not already in your scope.
I’m patiently looking forward to the next update and seeing where the story leads. The fact that you have a clear plan in place and you’re not winging it really makes me excited, I doubt the endings will be disappointing considering just how wonderful a job you’ve done thus far. The fact that you’ve made this all by yourself only increases it’s magnificence. Thank you for creating such an engaging and enjoyable game and keep up the fantastic work.
I see that you’ve mentioned previously that there will be several endings for each heroine, as well as a harem and a bad ending. Is Lavinia considered a heroine who will have her own unique ending? I ask because she doesn’t have a status page so it doesn’t feel like she is right now. She practically forced herself onto Mars and didn’t give him much choice in starting the relationship, but now they are considered together she has taken a more passive role. I would love to see an ending where Mars slowly falls for her and she gets to finally live her dream of happiness after a life of pure misery. I know you’ve planned an ending with Lavinia and Cecille together, but to deny her an ending solely for herself would be almost criminal, her level of loyalty and love for Mars matches Sera’s for Erin (at least initially) so she thoroughly deserves it in my opinion. I implore you to consider doing a pure Lavinia ending, assuming that’s not already in your scope.
I’m patiently looking forward to the next update and seeing where the story leads. The fact that you have a clear plan in place and you’re not winging it really makes me excited, I doubt the endings will be disappointing considering just how wonderful a job you’ve done thus far. The fact that you’ve made this all by yourself only increases it’s magnificence. Thank you for creating such an engaging and enjoyable game and keep up the fantastic work.
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