VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Hero to Villain [Ep.2] [Repla]

From the developer notes what I understood is he made this for his passion. But actually the game is good. You probably saw these type of stories in animes or movies. But for a adult visual novel game it's not usual. I really enjoyed playing this game. I'm always into superpowers. But in other games they will superpowers for corrupting girls. I'm glad this dev didn't use that. Game play is short. Dev don't abandon the game

Also I'm not looking for corrupting the girls and lewd scenes. I'm more into romance. In the next updates I'm looking for superpower stuff like more fights

Edit : seems like the game is abandoned

Man.....this game has such potential. Renders, characters, plot and animations are good, but the english is really bad, both spelling and grammar. Sure, english isn't my native language either, but I have no idea what some characters are even talking about or what they're trying to say. The script itself lacks alot of emotion, just bad writing in general (probably due to the lack of english). Single choices like "Go back to the hospital", "Go to school", "Go to the toilet", "Go home" and so on, doesn't have to be there. It can just be said or be a thought by the MC since it doesn't make a difference anyway and some of it already are. Like "I should go to the livingroom and talk to dad", then the choice appears "Go to the Livingroom" doesn't make much sence. Other than that the game is great and I wish the dev all the best.

Honestly, I wanted to give this a lower rating, but I don't want to discourage a developer.

This game's English needs a lot of work. Definitely at least a proofreader. I can forgive some Engrish but there are sentences that flat out don't make any sense. There's a lot of "u" used in sentences in place of you, as well, which I find particularly grating. It's nice that the developer has a devnote asking for feedback, but frankly there's so many mistakes that he's better off with just getting someone to proofread before he releases rather than putting the burden on the people playing the game.

The plot is... pretty basic to say the least. You're just kinda given a really half-assed intro before you start meeting characters. Bullying people without superpowers is a big portion of the plot. Typical revenge & stick it to the man plotline here, like a cheap wuxia novel or manhua. I kept getting deja vu while playing because it felt like I was re-reading a manhwa I'd already read.

There's a lot of edgy moments in this game. If you can get through a playthrough without cringing I'll be pretty impressed.

With a proofreader and more effort giving the plot some life, this can be a good game, but where it is now, I just don't think it's worth the time.

as of ver 0.2 I really think this is a great start for a game ,
from this point on there will be spoilers as I explain why:

well fist and formost this game has a lot of intesting conpets that while not original per say the use of them toghter is: you have riencanation but insted of being born in an isekai (which is pretty overused concept) you get in your world in a diffrent body, you are also an underdog rising from a place of powerlessness to greatness (not yet but you will), the best concept for me is the grey morility hinted in the beginnig by the hero expiriancing beatreyal, which makes an intersting point of "what if the good is actually bad?" and makes you wonder.
secondly the graphics and models are pretty great and the music is pretty catchy so there is that
thirdly i really like how the black spirit is actually between helper and protagonist as he is mystirous but fun to play with.
lastly the english can be a bit of a turn off but as is it minor flaw i belive it will change in time. good luck and have fun with this game

Awesome Visual Novel with interesting plot and many interesting characters , I really enjoyed playing it , eagerly waiting on future updates .

Added to watchlist will see how the story goes .
Kudos dev , keep it up man .

Overall for me
Plot - 5/5
Art / Characters - 5 /5
Animations - 4/ 5

Good game, very beautiful character models ,also sexy as hell, specially Karen and the teacher, the beginning storyline is fine , environment buid solid and nature , promising to be one of the best game in here in the future. Good work Author, keep it up!

Oh Dude... This has a lot of potential, a great story and I really like that the mc is angry and powerful, but, speaking of the details of the game also has a lot to improve, I would recommend extending the dialogues, for a better transition between scenes, I feel that the scene changes are too hard, I liked the designs of the other characters but they are too many and I suppose you will include more in the future, this game being a VN will not give you the space to put many characters, I would recommend focus on those who influence the story and the others leave them in the background by far. Yes, it is just a porn game, but you have the opportunity to make it profitable and memorable, people like fights and sex and add the stories of revenge and super powers. Anyway I hope to see the development of this game and the best of luck (sorry for my English, but I hope the idea is understood at least).

This game is fuckin dope! It's gotta nice reincarnation manhwa feel and a really cool story so far. I hope you get to choose between being a villain and a hero because I'm tryna go full Vader on some hoes! 10/10 so far