Hanny2000
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I can't seem to screenshot the problems but there is a reoccurring error when "random" is talking from about episode 2 line 1085 is where i first noticed it. now i'm in act 3 580 i'm getting it again right around where Charlotte is in the alleyway with her mom
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bro, don't remove the combat system, it's finally something interesting since Astral Lust
, just don't fuck up the balance
, just don't fuck up the balanceI have a few suggestions about your game (not sure if previous posts had made these recommendations already)
1) Fix the exceptions/errors that occur from 0.2 onwards. It was bad enough to almost cause me to quit playing the game.
2) I think you should keep the battle system, but without the sandbox. To do this, you should take a look at how it's done in Inanna Revenge by AtemX. However, if you decide to keep the sandbox then implement the battle system similarly to the game Lust Harem by Xiongmao.
3) Dialog/Grammar was another big critique. If your native language isn't English, you should contact/find someone who is a native English speaker to proofread and correct dialog so that it makes sense. I'm sure someone would be willing to proofread (Hell, I'd even be willing to proofread).
4) H-scenes. For being at least 4-5 updates in, there are i think 3 to 4 scenes, and the majority were dream sequences. Dream sequences are particularly annoying and i would rather wait and get a payoff to the good H-scenes in the story instead of being cucked with a dream sequence.
Overall, i really like the story and premise of the game and I'm interested on how the game develops.
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Mr Kris
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Hey there! Well, maybe instead of a full sandbox, you can do a partial sandbox for specific sections? Kind of like when you can "explore" the Hero Guild HQ. Maybe in some sections to follow heroines' events and even some side events before continue with the main story. Kind of interludes that help to deepen the relationship between the heroines and the mc(? Or to meet new characters or follow some side stories.
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we had a good run, but if this goes sandbox and shitty minigames, I'm out.
the flash back where aiden and what's her name goes to the park kept getting the error rollback or ignore screen.
edit: and Katherine's childhood flashback and her meeting the mc as well.
edit: and Katherine's childhood flashback and her meeting the mc as well.
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I didn't recognize it until the beta test is released, you will see it's fixed it after I release the full version of 0.4.2, thank you!
I will, no worries, I will try to improve it and make it more balance!!bro, don't remove the combat system, it's finally something interesting since Astral Lust
I will see what I can do, need to improve the grammar first xd and the list of suggest is a good one, thank you!!!
I will try to write the story again a little bit, because after all, we have so much characters in the game that we can make relationship with them, thank you btw!!Right now as friend, in the future as girlfriends(?
Hey there! Well, maybe instead of a full sandbox, you can do a partial sandbox for specific sections? Kind of like when you can "explore" the Hero Guild HQ. Maybe in some sections to follow heroines' events and even some side events before continue with the main story. Kind of interludes that help to deepen the relationship between the heroines and the mc(? Or to meet new characters or follow some side stories.
Woodstock_1983
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Then, I'll wait until either it changes or it gets completed. I'm not going to start a new game EVERY update.
Well, you no need to play "new game" in every single new update, because i created a save like this when you continue a new chapter. I will ask the admin who posted this to fix it. xd
(Actually, the reason for the warning above is because Izumii used to fix the code in the old updates, which can lead to errors when you continue play and save automatically. That's why the "Warning" above tells you to play again from the beginning because at the very beginning of the game, Izumii created a save for everyone so that everyone can continue playing the latest updates without any problems.)
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Dude... Astral Lust went to shit and died. Do the opposite of that game.bro, don't remove the combat system, it's finally something interesting since Astral Lust
Seriously though... sandbox sucks & combat systems are only worthwhile if they're fun, immersive and connected to the story. It's silly when an MC can solo a dragon or demon lord in combat, but somehow gets his ass wupped by a group of random soldiers during a story scene.
Other then that... be careful of character bloat & silly harem logic. More girls = less screen time for each girl.okayDude... Astral Lust went to shit and died. Do the opposite of that game.
Seriously though... sandbox sucks & combat systems are only worthwhile if they're fun, immersive and connected to the story. It's silly when an MC can solo a dragon or demon lord in combat, but somehow gets his ass wupped by a group of random soldiers during a story scene.