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yossa999

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This is going to be one of my most soppy posts ever, but I don't want the MC to just have sex with Charlotte. I want them to make love. It needs to be a part of their journey of love and connection, not just sex. Charlotte is one of only a few LI's that make me feel this way.
I don't see anything soppy, in my opinion, it was clear to anyone who played without a skip from the very beginning that one shouldn't expect miracles of bedroom acrobatics from Charlotte. It seems to be clear that for her, possible sex is more an act of complete trust and connection with her partner and a sign that she has dealt with her psychological problems. It is unlikely that she will jump into bed simply because she is too horny.
 

Joshy92

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This is going to be one of my most soppy posts ever, but I don't want the MC to just have sex with Charlotte. I want them to make love. It needs to be a part of their journey of love and connection, not just sex. Charlotte is one of only a few LI's that make me feel this way.
I feel the same way about Emma. I would rather it be making love not just sex.
 

HillsideVN

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I have a non-modest question.

And when will be the end of the story, in about two-three, or five years?
Don't know. More than two years, less than five.

Anybody who isn't enjoying the story now is likely to become increasingly frustrated as our relationship with Charlotte develops. It won't be without its challenges, and the closer we get to her, the more she will vacillate.
 

Justaphase

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Don't know. More than two years, less than five.

Anybody who isn't enjoying the story now is likely to become increasingly frustrated as our relationship with Charlotte develops. It won't be without its challenges, and the closer we get to her, the more she will vacillate.
Charlotte is worth the time and effort. Considering her past, things are already progressing quite quickly. Her feeling secure enough to embrace and kiss the MC, letting him massage her feet and legs.
I do hope that they get to the stage of cuddling in bed though soon, I think it could really help them both. The MC needs a promotion from bodyguard to bodypillow.
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rudy007

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Don't know. More than two years, less than five.

Anybody who isn't enjoying the story now is likely to become increasingly frustrated as our relationship with Charlotte develops. It won't be without its challenges, and the closer we get to her, the more she will vacillate.
As much I'm interested in Charlotte's story, I hope for a good Suzi story. As a LI she had a fraction of time developing feelings for MC. I hope now we get some time with her, A day or two with her alone could make a difference. She's into him, but her explosive attitude come always into her way...
 

HillsideVN

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As much I'm interested in Charlotte's story, I hope for a good Suzi story. As a LI she had a fraction of time developing feelings for MC. I hope now we get some time with her, A day or two with her alone could make a difference. She's into him, but her explosive attitude come always into her way...
I've tried to make each relationship with the different love interests unique. With Suzi, it will obviously be quite tempestuous. The attraction and tension are there, so it won't take long to develop into something physical. The question is whether it will ever become more than that. Given her ambitions, that seems unlikely.
 

rudy007

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I've tried to make each relationship with the different love interests unique. With Suzi, it will obviously be quite tempestuous. The attraction and tension are there, so it won't take long to develop into something physical. The question is whether it will ever become more than that. Given her ambitions, that seems unlikely.
They two in bed could bring them even closer... To an emergency room.... They could even be in the same room in hospital... Very explosive duo... :ROFLMAO::LOL:
 
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xapican

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May 11, 2020
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I've tried to make each relationship with the different love interests unique. With Suzi, it will obviously be quite tempestuous. The attraction and tension are there, so it won't take long to develop into something physical. The question is whether it will ever become more than that. Given her ambitions, that seems unlikely.
I think, it is up to you, the Suzi branch has potential to become an intersting and challenging path.
plus she has a vast fanbase, it would be something totally different to the other branches, given her fiery temper.
the downside is that it would need more work and thoughts, and carefull elaboration of the story.
 

filosoff89

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May 28, 2020
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I've tried to make each relationship with the different love interests unique. With Suzi, it will obviously be quite tempestuous. The attraction and tension are there, so it won't take long to develop into something physical. The question is whether it will ever become more than that. Given her ambitions, that seems unlikely.
The question is how it will be. Both are staring at each other (kitchen scene), but there is no development. He's afraid to even think about it. She completely denies this attraction. Hannah will confirm it. Dead end. None of them will dare to make the first move. Unless the pressure rises to the red zone.
 

xapican

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The question is how it will be. Both are staring at each other (kitchen scene), but there is no development. He's afraid to even think about it. She completely denies this attraction. Hannah will confirm it. Dead end. None of them will dare to make the first move. Unless the pressure rises to the red zone.
That is what, makes this path interesting in my opinion, the sexual tension is there and rising,
 

filosoff89

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I think, it is up to you, the Suzi branch has potential to become an intersting and challenging path.
plus she has a vast fanbase, it would be something totally different to the other branches, given her fiery temper.
the downside is that it would need more work and thoughts, and carefull elaboration of the story.
There are only two problems on this path: the mother and the sister. Aunt Lucy would certainly approve this relationship. But Charlotte and Emma won't agree. Emma will be jealous. Charlotte won't like the age difference. Actually, it would be fun. Imagine: Suzi comes to her mother and says that this caveman is now her boyfriend (and therefore her lover).:eek: A heart attack is guaranteed.:D:D
 

xapican

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There are only two problems on this path: the mother and the sister. Aunt Lucy would certainly approve this relationship. But Charlotte and Emma won't agree. Emma will be jealous. Charlotte won't like the age difference. Actually, it would be fun. Imagine: Suzi comes to her mother and says that this caveman is now her boyfriend (and therefore her lover).:eek: A heart attack is guaranteed.:D:D
Duhhh! that it's why it would be an interesting path ?? :D:D
 

JJ1960

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I've tried to make each relationship with the different love interests unique. With Suzi, it will obviously be quite tempestuous. The attraction and tension are there, so it won't take long to develop into something physical. The question is whether it will ever become more than that. Given her ambitions, that seems unlikely.
I can just imagine their first time. Suzi is going to treat it like a competition.

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filosoff89

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That is what, makes this path interesting in my opinion, the sexual tension is there and rising,
They had already seen each other almost naked. In that damn kitchen. Natural development: strip them completely. The question is who to undress. It seems to me that it would be more logical to undress HIM. In the shower, for example. Suzi needs to see in reality what she is giving up. Perhaps this will encourage her to take more active action. It's obvious she hasn't had a lover in a long time.;):LOL:
 
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