VN Ren'Py Hillside [v0.15.1] [DarkBlue]

[Joop501]

Please do something that pleases

 

[MrD812]

In one of the famous literary letters there is a principle called Chekhov's rifle which states that every element that appears in the story must be used well, "If there is a rofle on the wall it must be used at some point in the story."DB do that will he showed Charlotte's before concern about if MC killed people in the army, we're talking about a man in her country's army, whatever killed them they are enemies ,Now three fears have become real, the first is the Carter's attack on Emma, which has been a nightmare for her for 11 updates, and the second is that MC is killer as she was worried, and the third is seeing a man killed in front of her. What happened to Charlotte is normal. The shock she received took some time to get over it and I think now she has realized that MC is a good man again She asked him about Emma's kidneys, and his opinion mattered to her. I think in the last scene if MC took a step and kissed her She would have Kissing him back.
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Not so much the story is bad.
The writing is.
Charlie is in no way, shape or form capable of sound reason as written.

 

[J.R.]

Hey thanks for doing this! Also if it's not much could you come up with a solution on how to compress the version for Android as well, the current update in apk form is over 2gb which somehow is unplayable in my device. Would be glad if you could provide assistance

If you don't mind the mod (I for one love it) Koga has an Android port as well here

 

[yossa999]

Can't speak for others, but I'm one of those who extremely disliked the "Calming the Carter" scene.

[...] Disarmed the guy, made him submit. [...]

Oh really? Carter didn't look like he submitted. MC put him in a chokehold, that's true. But he managed to tell the MC to fuck off and then he's like "Hrrr-hrrr". Only this unfortunate misunderstanding prevented him from implementing his honest promise to cut Charlotte into pieces. When Cutter Carter promises something like that, be sure he will get it done.
I would say MC is suspiciously lucky bastard, he not only managed to block the knife with his bare hand, but the cut turned into an innocent scratch. But to me Carter looked like he was full of fire and ready to finish what he started if MC gave him even the slightest chance to free himself.

I believe 90% of people who never killed anyone would feel traumatized after seeing that [...]

Again, it's only my opinion, but Charlotte feeling traumatized and shocked is obviously not what makes this scene annoying. It's totally understandable that she is shocked, scared, dazed and about to pass out. But despite her shock she immediately marked MC as a cold blooded murderer and pulled Emma away from him. Damn! Her brain has failed her but then her guts should tell her that MC is the reason she holds Emma now. He did exchange his life for Emma's a moment before. "You killed him with your bare hands" - she said. Really? That's the problem, bare hands? Okay, it's a problem, lazy ass MC should brought a gun with him and kill Carter in a civilized way.
Agent Fox realized the situation in a second: "You fucking idiot. Now I see why you called me. You need me to protect you from the Hillside's finest before you have an unfortunate accident on some stairs!". Of course there is nothing bad with Carter's death, self defence as it is, but MC is in much more danger now than when he just had a Carter swinging a blade in front of him.
Seems it does ring a bell to Charlotte, she gets her shit together and starts acting to protect him from inevitable "accidental" death. Looks like the initial shock is faded out. And then again, her tough "I can't believe MC killed a policeman, but I have to help him if he's in danger".
Yup. Killed. A policeman. Just out of the blue. Charlie, hasn't you understood yet that your death embodied into that "policeman" and swinged a scythe above the head of yours? And MC is the one who stopped that with his own "bare hands". Because he is an idiot!

Don't get me wrong, I like the game this much, it's one of my faves, but this is just not the best scene of it.

 

[Turki 10]

Not so much the story is bad.
The writing is.
Charlie is in no way, shape or form capable of sound reason as written.

Well for me it is one of the greatest games I have played and writing until now is more than wonderful, and until the last update for me 10/10 Charlotte is the best woman in VN And a unique relationship in this world, the relationship of a father with his daughter with Emma, I see a completely different game but in the end everyone has Different own opinion.

 

[keefer43]

The story is all about growth and experience. If there is no growth then nothing really happens; nothing will change. The author is setting the pace, we all know where it's going (we all, along with the main characters, have experience), so sit back and enjoy the ride. If we want Charlotte and Emma and Suzi (as well as the MC) to grow and get the "experience" or knowledge we desire the story has to be developed. It shows a point at the beginning which displays how far we need to come, then the dev slowly (or quickly) gets us there. If this was a meet and fuck game nobody would be very happy (we can get that elsewhere) - we all know whatever outcome we want; let's sit back and allow the author of this VN to (eventually) put that in our hands. How many of us want it to be over and done with? Sit down, pour yourself a libation and get comfortable.

 

[Roniered]

I stopped playing it after the 0.10 update and just played it again today. I know there is something odd with Detective Carter since the start, but it still surprised me that he was the villain. Now the MC has bigger enemies, and for me, that was a good storyline. I hope the next updates will be also good.

 

[NewTricks]

Sigh. What would be more annoying? Charlotte reacting the way she did or rather her chirping "Yay! My hero! Let's have babies now!" as they kiss passionately over the recumbent corpse of a dead policeman next to her sobbing daughter?

Personally, I like the game better than the fanfiction that a lot of the posters would rather see.

 

[Dark Prince 19]

If you don't mind the mod (I for one love it) Koga has an Android port as well here

Thanks dude, would have never have found this on my own

 

[The Dark Moonshine]

I stopped playing it after the 0.10 update and just played it again today. I know there is something odd with Detective Carter since the start, but it still surprised me that he was the villain. Now the MC has bigger enemies, and for me, that was a good storyline. I hope the next updates will be also good.

I agree, it was a good twist!

 

[robrize2169]

yeah i got a feeling about Carter after that kid David goes to talk to him about Zak, then he closes the blinds to his office and then the scene ends..

 

[Hellkinglucifer]

yeah i got a feeling about Carter after that kid David goes to talk to him about Zak, then he closes the blinds to his office and then the scene ends..

got a feeling??? LMAO
that scene was as subtle as Carter running around with "Killer Stalker here" stamped on his big forehead.

 

[Ahx]

FAX.

Charlie overreacted. She could have said she didn't like violence and she is even more traumatized but also could have said how she appreciate the mc for saving her and HER child life instead of falling back into "I DON'T TRSUT THIS MAN" attitude that pissed me off. Idc in real life is a currupt cop is a killer and sick person and he is coming after someone you love or your child or gf you wouldn't want that guy gone if you hired a Body guard and he is suppose to do anything to protect the people you love?
He kidnapped your child and holds a knife to her throat then says he is gonna chop your mom up or the woman you protecting and you not gonna want this sick fuck gone? Locking him up knowing how currupt the whole police DP is he would probably be out 24 hours later to hunt you down.

Charlie should be praising the mc instead of getting angry with him that honestly made me completly give up on her.

Put yourself in that situation, would anyone just let someone like that go if he was trying to kill you and your child? FUCK NO. idk how people was raised but no one threatends people I love and I personally would go to jail to protect my love ones.

and I also don't care about charlie past, in fact that should have added more fuel to the fire of her hate with men like that. If it was me I would have want to do it myself.

so yes chalie was wrong point blank period.

It's just bad writing. Instead of saying "Stay away from us!", she should've said "Don't turn your fucking back idiot, they always come back!".

 

[Ottoeight]

Agent Fox is freaking hot
hope we will see content with her in the future

When in the world?

As Vidal just said:

well I don't know if you could find out more information so we can know for sure but I heard that we have two small updates planned

then one big update

and then that's the end

but I could be wrong but that's what I heard

Do you have to reject Lucy to be with charlotte?
because i have a separate save file for each of the girl but it seems like charlotte doenst like me, do i fucked something

Did you get the unofficial bugfixing patch that fixes Charlotte's route? it's "chapter 12 fix" in the first post. Charlotte's route is bugged in 0.12.

 

[znar25]

When in the world?

As Vidal just said:







Did you get the unofficial bugfixing patch that fixes Charlotte's route? it's "chapter 12 fix" in the first post. Charlotte's route is bugged in 0.12.

Attached here again. Hat-tip to the original poster. I really only play the Charlotte path and, it makes it work for Ep12. Regards.

 

[znar25]

Wow...

 

[cxx]

mc to charl: i know few things which would feel even better.

 

[Joop501]

Wow...

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sleeping beauty

 

[Ahx]

Wow...

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That's some hot shit! Beats Kayla's and I almost came.

 

[Vmbamhane]

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