Not so much the story is bad.In one of the famous literary letters there is a principle called Chekhov's rifle which states that every element that appears in the story must be used well, "If there is a rofle on the wall it must be used at some point in the story."DB do that will he showed Charlotte's before concern about if MC killed people in the army, we're talking about a man in her country's army, whatever killed them they are enemies ,Now three fears have become real, the first is the Carter's attack on Emma, which has been a nightmare for her for 11 updates, and the second is that MC is killer as she was worried, and the third is seeing a man killed in front of her. What happened to Charlotte is normal. The shock she received took some time to get over it and I think now she has realized that MC is a good man again She asked him about Emma's kidneys, and his opinion mattered to her. I think in the last scene if MC took a step and kissed her She would have Kissing him back.
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If you don't mind the mod (I for one love it) Koga has an Android port as well hereHey thanks for doing this! Also if it's not much could you come up with a solution on how to compress the version for Android as well, the current update in apk form is over 2gb which somehow is unplayable in my device. Would be glad if you could provide assistance
Oh really? Carter didn't look like he submitted. MC put him in a chokehold, that's true. But he managed to tell the MC to fuck off and then he's like "Hrrr-hrrr". Only this unfortunate misunderstanding prevented him from implementing his honest promise to cut Charlotte into pieces. When Cutter Carter promises something like that, be sure he will get it done.[...] Disarmed the guy, made him submit. [...]
Again, it's only my opinion, but Charlotte feeling traumatized and shocked is obviously not what makes this scene annoying. It's totally understandable that she is shocked, scared, dazed and about to pass out. But despite her shock she immediately marked MC as a cold blooded murderer and pulled Emma away from him. Damn! Her brain has failed her but then her guts should tell her that MC is the reason she holds Emma now. He did exchange his life for Emma's a moment before. "You killed him with your bare hands" - she said. Really? That's the problem, bare hands? Okay, it's a problem, lazy ass MC should brought a gun with him and kill Carter in a civilized way.I believe 90% of people who never killed anyone would feel traumatized after seeing that [...]
Well for me it is one of the greatest games I have played and writing until now is more than wonderful, and until the last update for me 10/10 Charlotte is the best woman in VN And a unique relationship in this world, the relationship of a father with his daughter with Emma, I see a completely different game but in the end everyone has Different own opinion.Not so much the story is bad.
The writing is.
Charlie is in no way, shape or form capable of sound reason as written.
Thanks dude, would have never have found this on my ownIf you don't mind the mod (I for one love it) Koga has an Android port as well here
I agree, it was a good twist!I stopped playing it after the 0.10 update and just played it again today. I know there is something odd with Detective Carter since the start, but it still surprised me that he was the villain. Now the MC has bigger enemies, and for me, that was a good storyline. I hope the next updates will be also good.
got a feeling??? LMAOyeah i got a feeling about Carter after that kid David goes to talk to him about Zak, then he closes the blinds to his office and then the scene ends..
It's just bad writing. Instead of saying "Stay away from us!", she should've said "Don't turn your fucking back idiot, they always come back!".FAX.
Charlie overreacted. She could have said she didn't like violence and she is even more traumatized but also could have said how she appreciate the mc for saving her and HER child life instead of falling back into "I DON'T TRSUT THIS MAN" attitude that pissed me off. Idc in real life is a currupt cop is a killer and sick person and he is coming after someone you love or your child or gf you wouldn't want that guy gone if you hired a Body guard and he is suppose to do anything to protect the people you love?
He kidnapped your child and holds a knife to her throat then says he is gonna chop your mom up or the woman you protecting and you not gonna want this sick fuck gone? Locking him up knowing how currupt the whole police DP is he would probably be out 24 hours later to hunt you down.
Charlie should be praising the mc instead of getting angry with him that honestly made me completly give up on her.
Put yourself in that situation, would anyone just let someone like that go if he was trying to kill you and your child? FUCK NO. idk how people was raised but no one threatends people I love and I personally would go to jail to protect my love ones.
and I also don't care about charlie past, in fact that should have added more fuel to the fire of her hate with men like that. If it was me I would have want to do it myself.
so yes chalie was wrong point blank period.
When in the world?Agent Fox is freaking hot
hope we will see content with her in the future
well I don't know if you could find out more information so we can know for sure but I heard that we have two small updates planned
then one big update
and then that's the end
but I could be wrong but that's what I heard
Did you get the unofficial bugfixing patch that fixes Charlotte's route? it's "chapter 12 fix" in the first post. Charlotte's route is bugged in 0.12.Do you have to reject Lucy to be with charlotte?
because i have a separate save file for each of the girl but it seems like charlotte doenst like me, do i fucked something
Attached here again. Hat-tip to the original poster. I really only play the Charlotte path and, it makes it work for Ep12. Regards.When in the world?
As Vidal just said:
Did you get the unofficial bugfixing patch that fixes Charlotte's route? it's "chapter 12 fix" in the first post. Charlotte's route is bugged in 0.12.
sleeping beauty
That's some hot shit! Beats Kayla's and I almost came.