- Oct 9, 2021
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Played this new update, it was good showcase of corrupt society that's driven by money and nasty politics rather than law and justice. This is good writing w.r.t. ambience.
However, for the Main Character prospective, their is negligible growth or development, as the story is mostly focused on Lloyd family.
It's ok to do that, but as MC now got back to business of protecting "EMMA" and admits that he's out of shape and rusty. Adding a training montage for our MC from his physical fitness transformation to combat, also visiting gun range and updating his gear, should be shown. Maybe, develop some plot with agent fox here and there also while training.
Moreover, elaborate on the "sex scene" with Kayla (sorry if I misremember that model's name) add several more renders to show some action maybe add few sexy poses for the supermodel. Add kissing and fondling scene. Since, that's the only H-scene which is possible without hooking up with Lucy.
Another thing in this update, EMMA got a daddy however her mommy won't share, as made clear previously. I'm more interested in EMMA Lloyd and would choose her over mom Charlotte.
However, for the Main Character prospective, their is negligible growth or development, as the story is mostly focused on Lloyd family.
It's ok to do that, but as MC now got back to business of protecting "EMMA" and admits that he's out of shape and rusty. Adding a training montage for our MC from his physical fitness transformation to combat, also visiting gun range and updating his gear, should be shown. Maybe, develop some plot with agent fox here and there also while training.
Moreover, elaborate on the "sex scene" with Kayla (sorry if I misremember that model's name) add several more renders to show some action maybe add few sexy poses for the supermodel. Add kissing and fondling scene. Since, that's the only H-scene which is possible without hooking up with Lucy.
Another thing in this update, EMMA got a daddy however her mommy won't share, as made clear previously. I'm more interested in EMMA Lloyd and would choose her over mom Charlotte.