I've been reading this title through a few updates and I think I'm done. Even though the only sex I saw in this AVN is Lucy fingering herself at the hot tub I kept following along because I liked the story and I'm a white knight kind of guy.
That being said I find this story to be very, very slow. Even that might be ok if it were all meat and potatoes but from my perspective way too much time, frames and renders are wasted reinforcing the idea that Emma loves MC, the MC loves Emma. MC will protect her and she feels safe. You could easily do a run at the beach in a single panel/render. Same for being at the park or painting her room. So much energy that could have been put into bulking up the plot or maybe doing some more sex seen seems to be wasted.
Just one persons perspective and, as I said, there was enough to like for me to hang in there for a while. Good luck with your project!