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Elduriel

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They did better than some others I've read, but the big ones that stood out to me were "jumper" instead of sweater and "swimming costume" instead of swimsuit, but that one seemed like a translation oddity. I don't think even the Brits say that, is the dev not a native speaker? If not then I'm even more impressed with the translation because I haven't noticed certain weird grammar mistakes that many translated AVNs make.
it's definitely not a translation
 

cxx

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The entire VN is shot through with British stuff. Especially evident in the the lingo. It is as if a fictitious Hollywood-like place existed somewhere between Surrey and Chelsea. Yet having California's weather.
could be jamaica.
 

HillsideVN

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They did better than some others I've read, but the big ones that stood out to me were "jumper" instead of sweater...
To be honest, I thought I had previously corrected all instances of "jumper", but obviously not. I will do so after the next update has been finished.

and "swimming costume" instead of swimsuit, but that one seemed like a translation oddity. I don't think even the Brits say that, is the dev not a native speaker?
I'm English and it is commonly used in British English.
 

StingerWolf

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I feel this update will be great. :) Now that Suzi is in the game too and Emma is not a retarded 5 year old, this game is really on track. What a time to be alive. :)
 
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xapican

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They did better than some others I've read, but the big ones that stood out to me were "jumper" instead of sweater and "swimming costume" instead of swimsuit, but that one seemed like a translation oddity. I don't think even the Brits say that, is the dev not a native speaker? If not then I'm even more impressed with the translation because I haven't noticed certain weird grammar mistakes that many translated AVNs make.
In spanish the sweater is called "Jumper" and as for "swimming costume" it is google translation, (just copy and paste the following: traje de baño )
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minibaer12

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To be honest, I thought I had previously corrected all instances of "jumper", but obviously not. I will do so after the next update has been finished.


I'm English and it is commonly used in British English.
HillsideVN it must be a great feeling when your followers are in such dire need that they start a debate about "slangs"?

People, people, people... I'm not British, but I can bet my ass that the English talk completely differently to the Scottish and they use different words than the Welsh. We don't even want to talk about the Irish, they use different words, purely out of protest. :ROFLMAO:

Even British English is different from American English.

Please leave the “church in the village”.

It's HIS story and he tells it to us as "his beak has grown"!!!
 

MOL-X

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The game is good, although there are hardly any sex scenes. I played on the charlotte route, which makes sense.
 

White Lamp

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To be honest, I thought I had previously corrected all instances of "jumper", but obviously not. I will do so after the next update has been finished.


I'm English and it is commonly used in British English.
lol who cares, we know what you mean. Just focus on making new content.
 
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minibaer12

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Some people will already know me from another thread where I go wilder when it comes to routes.

One thing in advance: Kaylah, Agent Fox and whoever else comes along don't play a role at all. My MC simply replies: "Thanks for your interest and goodbye!" My only interest is in the Lloyds.

Of the obligatory 4 single-Lloyds routes, I still have the "professional" route, where I don't build up a relationship with the Lloyds. You never know what the developer has in mind. But by far my favorite route is the imaniginary “Lloyds Harem Route”. My MC wants to be a “good friend” to all 4 Lloyds (Charlotte at the top). I get all the points the MC can get, regardless of which Lloyd! Pure need for harmony!

Only with this route do I have a save = 14 pieces at each end of an EP
 
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