Nice story, I would like some more choices about the story itself though.
I mean choices not about "love interests" but about for instance killing those fuckers or at least not letting them go with just ONE punch in the gut (even Suzi would do much more than that) and not even taking the paparazzi's camera, phone(s) and not taking back the money he got by blackmailing for instance. (I would love just killing them all btw

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Choices for instance about maybe "losing points" with Charlotte, but taking things in his own hands about security.. for instance he should really check at least all the windows and doors and that the alarm is actually working everyday before sleeping.
The house itself is a nightmare from the point of view of security but that's a common issues in anglosaxon countries so there is nothing to say against it, it's realistic.
(walls that could be taken down by sneezing too strongly, windows everywhere, doors that could as well not being there and so on...

No seriously, I bet even a little child could easily, even if noisely, break and enter in most of those houses in less than a minute)