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So again he isn't really good at his job. Considering he worked in hillside before so he should be used to it.We're talking about getting distracted by a super hot woman who's teasing him, a woman he'd never had expected to have within reach. No matter how professional he is, he's a human being which means he's imperfect (we all are).
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Yeah, about that, I fully expected Char to lay down the law on the shopkeeper, going like "How DARE YOU throw my personal security out of the shop. Now, if you expect to keep me as a customer in the future you will do X, Y and Z, and before I forget, this merch will get a nice discount. You are dismissed."And this same guy gets kicked out of shop while protecting two ladies.
Yes that is another route he could have taken to deal with the shop keeper. But I guess it was supposed to be a funny moment. Like i said worse bodyguard ever.Yeah, about that, I fully expected Char to lay down the law on the shopkeeper, going like "How DARE YOU throw my personal security out of the shop. Now, if you expect to keep me as a customer in the future you will do X, Y and Z, and before I forget, this merch will get a nice discount. You are dismissed."![]()
bit like what happened on yellowstone (kelly reilly's pupil was accused from shoplifting and .......).Yeah, about that, I fully expected Char to lay down the law on the shopkeeper, going like "How DARE YOU throw my personal security out of the shop. Now, if you expect to keep me as a customer in the future you will do X, Y and Z, and before I forget, this merch will get a nice discount. You are dismissed."![]()
I understand why you think this way, and some of the points you bring up are valid. The Suzi 'locker room' scene is a bit absurd: of course MC should have either brought Hannah with him/given her the phone to give to Suzi, or waited outside after Suzi was decent. But part of the reason that scene goes like it does is to remind people this is an adult VN. Sometimes, the genre determines what scenes are necessary.Like i said worse bodyguard ever.
Here are the facts of his bodyguard skill:I understand why you think this way, and some of the points you bring up are valid. The Suzi 'locker room' scene is a bit absurd: of course MC should have either brought Hannah with him/given her the phone to give to Suzi, or waited outside after Suzi was decent. But part of the reason that scene goes like it does is to remind people this is an adult VN. Sometimes, the genre determines what scenes are necessary.
I agree that some of MC's actions are not depicting him as a competent bodyguard, but if he were 100% professional, none of the ladies -save Kaylah or Lucy maybe- would be love interests. MC is engaging in unethical and quite possibly dangerous behavior by letting his judgement be compromised by affections for his clients.
This story is at its best when DB is telling a love story. All characters have flaws that are on full display, and it's in spite of those flaws that our characters make personal connections.
To be fair, he has acted competently. His clients are safer with him than without. My point was his "failings" are usually to highlight his personal connection to these characters, not to speak ill of him professionally. It's a good thing MC is not this invincible, infallible, hero with a god-complex; he's a man wounded by past trauma, trying his best to atone for his own perceived failure. That is what makes him relatable.Here are the facts of his bodyguard skill:
Emma comes to no harm from stalker
When she is bullied by teen girls (whom he cannot strike without severe repercussions) he gets Super-destructo Suzi to beat their Thirsty whore asses
Only when a Police Officer (whom he thinks is good) confirms "stalker" is caught (Lie of course) does he let Emma go to her dream date. This is the deception of the criminal cop not his failing as a bodyguard that results in threat to Emma but he STILL has a tracker because he wants to protect Emma.
Any failings of being close to Charli come directly from Charli and her issues with men, not the skill of MC as bodyguard. (He beat down that chad wannabe that was about to rape Kaylah so he is clearly not letting women come to harm on his watch)
Not sure why but there always seem to be a group of incels who hate any MC who does not act as mega-chad (mega CHODE more like) at all times. Which is never a good MC type.
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Hard to take this fella serious...He is such a simp...But he is ideal for this setting nevertheless. (ooh, scaary vein on his forehead, my what a tough guy.
This is definitely not my MC because my MC has only one woman
Suzi doesn't even get content in the bonus materialsView attachment 1892806
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A collection of images that I've posted to the Discord server over the past couple of months. Posted here for people that don't visit the server.
The images are just for fun and aren't canon. Although, I'm sure Charlotte and the MC fooling around in the ocean will happen sometime
Suzi has a picture, but there were probably too many images to choose for DarkBlue. The discord server is freely accessible to look at the pictures and to write in the chat as long as the person behave.Suzi doesn't even get content in the bonus materials![]()