4.10 star(s) 310 Votes

Tremonia

Justice for Finnabair!
Donor
Jun 14, 2020
3,540
11,687
647
Oh, you can definitely tell by her behavior, that she's is interested in him.
Or rather, how she would cut his balls of :HideThePain:
So what? My mother hated my father as they met. They were "enemies" for about two years and now they've their 40th wedding anniversary next year and it was ever true deep love. So it's not uncommon if Suzie felt for MC.
 
Mar 26, 2022
339
661
217
So what? My mother hated my father as they met. They were "enemies" for about two years and now they've their 40th wedding anniversary next year and it was ever true deep love. So it's not uncommon if Suzie felt for MC.
Very touching story about your parents, but I never wrote that she CANNOT fall in love with MC, so I don't know why you are picking on me :unsure:
 
Last edited:

Mamonetti

Active Member
Apr 4, 2020
641
1,178
284


pic 1:
Emma: Move the sofa there, tonight we're going to try a different angle in the live (porn) stream.

pic 2:
Emma (thinking): God, mom looks so hot when she's so sweaty.. I can't wait to try my new strap-on on her.
Charlotte (whispering): Now? Really?
MC (whispering): I can't resist it, your ass is just perfection.
Charlotte (whispering): Yeah, well, thx.. I guess.. You'll have plenty of time for playing with it later at home, ok?
MC (whispering): Don't lie to me, you like it too.. What would Emma think if she found out?
Charlotte (whispering): You..!! *little moan* .. ok, keep going..
MC (whispering): Hehe, I knew my dirty Charlie would love it.

pic 3:
Charlotte: You like it, honey?
Emma: Yeah, it will look great on daddy *giggle*
Charlotte: Ok, I'll put it on this moving hanger.
Emma: Can I use its joystick to move it?
Charlotte: Not so loud, Emma!! W-We'll do the joystick thing later at home, ok?
Emma: Sure mom!
MC (thinking): I can hear you!
 
Last edited:

Tremonia

Justice for Finnabair!
Donor
Jun 14, 2020
3,540
11,687
647
Very touching story about your parents, but I never wrote that she CANNOT fall in love with MC, so I don't know why you are picking on me :unsure:
Please excuse me if I offended you. That wasn't my intention. I think you misunderstood my post.
 

White Lamp

Active Member
Dec 18, 2020
969
2,425
408
The lack of passion is a reflection of my own lack of passion for continuing development due to various struggles I've been having. That's why I just took a month off to try and sort myself out.

After v0.13 has been released I'm going to go back and try to fix some things I'm not happy with, which includes the sex scenes.
I hope you consider a build up and write in some character chemistry in the story telling. I feel like due to the nature of the story its hard but in my experience for sex scenes to do well there has to be lust and/or passion built in between 2 characters. I'm not sure what the solution here is but the problem (sex scene) can't be fixed with simply a redo of the sex scenes if that makes sense.

Now is also a probably a good time to start thinking about what type of "kinks/fetishes" your comfortable with in the game and which characters you assigning them to. Everyone feel free to chip in and say what you want to see:

1. Suzi - role playing (incest F-D/teacher-student/Male or Female Dom/3 some with her friend)
2. Lucy - BDSM
3. Emma - Vanilla (unless her characters evolves in a huge way I don't see anything for her)
4. Charlotte - (same with Emma)
 

jaw1986baby

Chasing Redhead sm0ls
Donor
Jun 2, 2017
2,561
7,654
716
I hope you consider a build up and write in some character chemistry in the story telling. I feel like due to the nature of the story its hard but in my experience for sex scenes to do well there has to be lust and/or passion built in between 2 characters. I'm not sure what the solution here is but the problem (sex scene) can't be fixed with simply a redo of the sex scenes if that makes sense.

Now is also a probably a good time to start thinking about what type of "kinks/fetishes" your comfortable with in the game and which characters you assigning them to. Everyone feel free to chip in and say what you want to see:

1. Suzi - role playing (incest F-D/teacher-student/Male or Female Dom/3 some with her friend)
2. Lucy - BDSM
3. Emma - Vanilla (unless her characters evolves in a huge way I don't see anything for her)
4. Charlotte - (same with Emma)
Lucy and Kaylah both have the lust and passion for the MC. If you are on either route for them it is all over the dialogue. Where there is a lacking is the MC's speech to them. He says a lot of generic things for the flexibility of the player to be into whomever they want. But when that is OK for the main story lines:
-Charlotte is going to interact upon hiring him
-The event where they go and MC protects her while Emma is with Lucy
-Interactions with the "bad guys" etc. etc.
But when it is in conversation with just him and the LI, say Lucy, and not just the ones where they kiss, he should build a bit more interest and passion which I do feel is not here yet. It does make things more complex as you have to call a variable for what path he is determined to be on and call the script for that flavor text in a given scene. But also if you have a variable that can track his path it would be GREAT if the player could see it so they know they made the right choices for the girl they want to pursue......


Whoa that's a lot.


TLDR - MC needs more but else is fine IMO
 
4.10 star(s) 310 Votes