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poplarchan
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I'd love to see either Korra or Katara in this art/game. Just thinking randomly.
What's on screenshot? Is that a game?Another one... Another chance for Hinata to prove she is USEFUL!
Aikage: "Hinata, this how Naruto will notice you..."
THX for the share...
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i really like concept, and battle fuck games, but god i just can't... I really can't force myself to play with this kind of art. In one screenshot, Hinata's leg looks like it's broken, Tsunade nipple colors look like tissue necrosis, and i don't trying to insult here. Dev, i guarantee if you take some draw lessons, this will pay off many times over, both financially and in the quality of what you do.
That's Ino not Tsunade, and that's not her nipples. It's the dress she's wearing.
Lastly is Fabpura's art bad? Yes. Is the writing bad? Yes. Is the dialogue bad? Yes. It being bad in every way but for some reason still incredibly hot is like 90% of his games' appeal.
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i was talking about this screenshot, didn't actually play any of his games, when it pops in the site after update,i go to the game page, but can't force myself to try it, and actually i dont have much problem with bad writing, in porn genre, bad writing can be so bad that it became good, but in art... I dunno man, don't feel it
chincheta
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what you see its acceptable, but i think that he deserves some kind of support. the improvement from his first game its very big and atleast he finishes his games and makes good updates not like other creators that are like "1 scene per 1 month update" or when they abbandon their game
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If i may give an advice, i think you should give it a month before putting it into this site. It will make your patreon "more valuable" and frankly you need to prioritize them first tbh. This is coming from a fan of your previous games. Good luck dev
LaylaRegina
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The biggest problem is that the proportions of the bodies he draws are off. There are certain boundaries of what is acceptable and what is absolutely not acceptable, and ignoring human anatomy and proportions falls into the latter category.
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i don't like to defend my art, especially my anatomy. but out of all the examples you chose, you chose one where the anatomy is actually correct. the only reason it looks really weird is because of the FOV.
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it was not example of bad anatomy, but strange nipple color decision, it doesn't look healthy
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i want to say that i really love your art style. its like very characteristic of your games and all of your games are relly good and fun to play
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actually it is not... the leg is in the air, the reason why it looks weird is because of the perspective. i use 3d models as reference and it checks out. i just cranked up the fov to 120, and because the leg is closer to the camera compared to the dude behind, it looks strange.
No, that leg angle IS wrong - and I say this not to insult you but to give feedback. Just because you used a 3d model as reference doesn't mean your art is following the correct perspective grid. You should think of legs as being tubes that connect to ball joints. It's impossible for a femur to bend like in your drawing, the whole limb would have to go either up and to the right or turn about 10 degrees anticlockwise
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femur is not bending. it's in the air. that's why i am saying it looks weird. because we don't see the foot it feels like the leg is bending.
Honestly the artwork is pretty forgivable, I remember when I first played Zems games, A.I.D.A. and their earlier one (I can't remember the name) Their artwork was a little rough in their first game but it got a lot better in their second one. So it's safe to assume that the dev will likely go back and re-draw some scenes as they improve.
Aside from that I'm into the direction this game is going. I'll simply echo the previous posts and say hopefully we get additional characters. It would obviously mean more scenes = more work but variety is never a bad idea, just a matter of is it worth the work.
I would like to say though if additional characters were indeed added, I'd personally like to see Temari and Anko added to the roster. Ultimately though it's up to you, it's your game friend.
Looking forward to more updates!
Aside from that I'm into the direction this game is going. I'll simply echo the previous posts and say hopefully we get additional characters. It would obviously mean more scenes = more work but variety is never a bad idea, just a matter of is it worth the work.
I would like to say though if additional characters were indeed added, I'd personally like to see Temari and Anko added to the roster. Ultimately though it's up to you, it's your game friend.
Looking forward to more updates!