RPGM Holdcraft Chronicles: Aki [Ch. 6] [Seez]
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That's like telling me I should be happy with a Well-done steak dinner because I love steak.
I know these stories require suspension of disbelief and am willing to do so.
Just pointing out some things I've noticed.
Edit: started playing again from the guy turning into a shemale... I forgot this guy was the typical blind and oblivious NTR MC
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It’s a few people expressing their dissatisfaction with how the story has gone. It has happened every update. Not much I can do about that. I’ve found that it is still worth looking at because there are comments that have a snippet of information that is useful. Nothing that would make me make major changes but people will take things differently than I thought they would and keeping that in mind can be helpful.
At the end of the day, it’s very much a vocal minority in here. For every 5-10 people that are grumpy about something I have about 150+ people signing up for free membership because they want more updates. For this update in particular I had a pretty decent jump in monetary support. So much so that I may move to doing this full time in the coming months.
People are far more likely to make negative comments than positive, especially in a forum setting. Just remember guys, it’s a porn game. Don’t take it too seriously. Thank you all for playing! If you come back that’s great! If not, I hope you find something to your tastes!
Don't worry brother, there will always be negative comments, but there will always be many more positive comments.
I'll apologize for being grumpy and admit you're right about negative comments.
Let me say this: Keep going. The game is hot, I like it.
I just can't help myself and empathize/look to deeply into the characters. (I do this with every media)
I guess I like being a critic too much.
Thank you for making this game, I've wanted a good futa NTR game for a while and got too excited
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love the game please dont change anything keep up the great work
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Hey it’s no big deal. It’s nice that people want to look at the game with a critical eye. It means they care to some degree. But I’m really not writing this to be taken too seriously. It’s here to hit a couple fetishes for those who want it and to give me practice in game dev.
There are some very valid criticisms in here that I totally agree with. I’ll talk about two of them and give my reasoning for why things are the way they are.
- It’s not really a game/No choices/Linear/No mechanics
- When I started I had no clue what I was doing. I wanted to keep it as simple as possible to make the update/chapter experience as good for the user as possible. So I wrote a simple linear story to get the job done. I understand the engine well enough now that I could go back and add mechanics and make it well enough. The problem is that my code was so shitty at the start that to make those changes it would be very very time consuming. So much so that I would basically have to remake it from scratch. That doesn’t even take into account the narrative changes that would be required. I don’t think anyone here actually wants to wait 5 months for me to rebuild everything with minimal differences and add no new content.
- Narrative is too sped up
- Yeah that is totally fair. The main reason it is this way is because I’m really trying to keep this game small. My goal is to make two small games for learning purposes and then make a much larger project that utilizes everything I’ve learned. If I were to make this game pacing better the game would have to have at least 5 more chapters, probably more and that would make the game way too big.
- The other side to this is that I think some people in here tend to forget that the vast majority of people are here for the porn. I’d bet money that more than half of the players read 20% of the dialogue tops and skim/skip the rest. So yeah all the scenes going forward are full of debauchery. This really shouldn’t be a surprise…
There are a lot of other comments I could address but many of those are based on assumptions/misconceptions or their personal preferences. It’s just not worth it to respond to those.
Just remember there is more to the story. We are only half way through after all. I hope everyone looks forward to more!
Creator Seez
Just played your game for the first time and it is EXCELLENT! The pacing was good and the animation top-notch. The prologue shows that that Saki has a certain perverse nature to her and that becomes more apparent when her mother is introduced, so there really isn't any issue with the corruption aspect of it.
I do admit that I agree with one thing in this thread that could've been better: Jake's training. The transformation is great and it's in line with what Saki wishes and it's also a desire of Jake to have better proportion but consigning him to a future where he just "watches" Saki get fucked by Nichole while Elaina has him on a dildo is pretty "hot", but he should be allowed to explore his newfound sexuality, rather than having the Holdcrafts control him, I believe that would make the story and transformation more organic and erotic.
There are some things I recommend though:
1. Pausing the music at certain points. The most prominent example is after Nichole and Saki work on the garden and are relaxing on the bridge. If there had been a pause in regular music and instead had a light ambient music combined with the nature sounds, it would've made a VERY moving scene. Also missing from the nature sounds was the sound of the water flowing under the bridge. I'm pretty sure you can find DRM-free sound on Youtube for that.
2. Time advances should be made more apparent. Rather than saying "A few days later", you can add a clock in the top bar. It would work like: 14 June, 2022 when the even starts and then when you finish the event, the date changes to 17 June, 2022. The reason for this is because it became apparent that some MONTHS had passed after the initial meeting with the Holdcrafts. However you don't really get a grasp of the time changing just by saying "A few days later". This way you can also set a unified timeline for events and would also make things easier to show like pregnancy.
3. LET US PET THE CAT! (Seriously, I excepted it to say meow but then we just glide over it! My disappointment was abysmal!)
4. The game also needs more sex-sfx. I'm not sure if you've planned that for the future or not but adding those sfx makes a hell of a lot of difference. And I'm not just talking about the plap plap or suck suck sfx, but moaning and heavy breathing noises. The scene where Nichole reveals her identity to Saki, and then pushes her dick against her and then give her a dose of what's to come. God damn that was beyond hot! I literally re-loaded just to watch that scene again. Adding sfx to that would've been beyond erotic.
5. Events need to be triggered by timeline. What I mean is rather than opening all the current scenes at once, have scenes be shown in sequence. The example for this is when Saki, Jake, Nichole and Sarina are at the beach, the events are all open and you can view them in ANY sequence. But when you view Jake's POV, it becomes apparent that there is in fact a sequence. I know you want the game to be a sand-boxy "find the scenes" type of game, but for events like these there needs to be a sequence. Secondary "hidden" scenes can all be open in the map after a main event but the primary events need a sequence.
All in all this is game in my top ten and if "this" is your first project, then boy am I in awe of your future accomplishments. The only advice I can give you is this:
Even if you make developing these games as your primary SOI, you must never give in to the wants and demands of your subscribers. They subscribed to you BECAUSE of what YOU produced, not what they demanded you produce, so always keep true to your OWN desire.
Sorry to spring that sentimental talk on you, but I've seen too many promising devs fall victim to this so I just had to say it as your content is top-notch.
Good luck to you, and I'll be providing more feedback for future versions, and in case anything more comes to mind.
Just played your game for the first time and it is EXCELLENT! The pacing was good and the animation top-notch. The prologue shows that that Saki has a certain perverse nature to her and that becomes more apparent when her mother is introduced, so there really isn't any issue with the corruption aspect of it.
I do admit that I agree with one thing in this thread that could've been better: Jake's training. The transformation is great and it's in line with what Saki wishes and it's also a desire of Jake to have better proportion but consigning him to a future where he just "watches" Saki get fucked by Nichole while Elaina has him on a dildo is pretty "hot", but he should be allowed to explore his newfound sexuality, rather than having the Holdcrafts control him, I believe that would make the story and transformation more organic and erotic.
There are some things I recommend though:
1. Pausing the music at certain points. The most prominent example is after Nichole and Saki work on the garden and are relaxing on the bridge. If there had been a pause in regular music and instead had a light ambient music combined with the nature sounds, it would've made a VERY moving scene. Also missing from the nature sounds was the sound of the water flowing under the bridge. I'm pretty sure you can find DRM-free sound on Youtube for that.
2. Time advances should be made more apparent. Rather than saying "A few days later", you can add a clock in the top bar. It would work like: 14 June, 2022 when the even starts and then when you finish the event, the date changes to 17 June, 2022. The reason for this is because it became apparent that some MONTHS had passed after the initial meeting with the Holdcrafts. However you don't really get a grasp of the time changing just by saying "A few days later". This way you can also set a unified timeline for events and would also make things easier to show like pregnancy.
3. LET US PET THE CAT! (Seriously, I excepted it to say meow but then we just glide over it! My disappointment was abysmal!)
4. The game also needs more sex-sfx. I'm not sure if you've planned that for the future or not but adding those sfx makes a hell of a lot of difference. And I'm not just talking about the plap plap or suck suck sfx, but moaning and heavy breathing noises. The scene where Nichole reveals her identity to Saki, and then pushes her dick against her and then give her a dose of what's to come. God damn that was beyond hot! I literally re-loaded just to watch that scene again. Adding sfx to that would've been beyond erotic.
5. Events need to be triggered by timeline. What I mean is rather than opening all the current scenes at once, have scenes be shown in sequence. The example for this is when Saki, Jake, Nichole and Sarina are at the beach, the events are all open and you can view them in ANY sequence. But when you view Jake's POV, it becomes apparent that there is in fact a sequence. I know you want the game to be a sand-boxy "find the scenes" type of game, but for events like these there needs to be a sequence. Secondary "hidden" scenes can all be open in the map after a main event but the primary events need a sequence.
All in all this is game in my top ten and if "this" is your first project, then boy am I in awe of your future accomplishments. The only advice I can give you is this:
Even if you make developing these games as your primary SOI, you must never give in to the wants and demands of your subscribers. They subscribed to you BECAUSE of what YOU produced, not what they demanded you produce, so always keep true to your OWN desire.
Sorry to spring that sentimental talk on you, but I've seen too many promising devs fall victim to this so I just had to say it as your content is top-notch.
Good luck to you, and I'll be providing more feedback for future versions, and in case anything more comes to mind.
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- Sound design is something I really need to work on. I'll add what you've written here to my notes.
- That's an example of a feature that I really like but would probably take too much time to implement. I like this enough though that I may actually do this.
- You got it. Just don't get stuck behind him.
- Yeah this is on my todo list.
- I both agree and disagree. The game is already very linear. Making that change would take it too far. I try to write the scenes in such a way where the order is ambiguous. But you are correct that there is in fact a true order to all of the events. I feel like adding the clock would fix this in of itself though. You could still experience the events in any order but it would be apparent what the order actually is.
I really like this game, and enjoy every update so far, I do see where are some people coming from. Devs idea of making 2 smaller games in order to learn stuff is understandable and I can see that the future bigger game u gonna make is potentionally gonna be great.
And I really DO LOVE the Mc's husband turning into futa. I don't know why but the husband futa transformation makes the recent update my favourite.
I understand that the main point is probably the wife ( player character ) but the husband needs a lot of scenes, I would love that!
And I really DO LOVE the Mc's husband turning into futa. I don't know why but the husband futa transformation makes the recent update my favourite.
I understand that the main point is probably the wife ( player character ) but the husband needs a lot of scenes, I would love that!
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hi, havent played the last few updates but judging from the comments id like to ask something:
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Since his new girlfriend is trying to help him grow a pussy I'm guessing he's gonna be getting fucked. It'd be kind of a waste otherwise. Was hoping that was what was gonna happen with him at the beach but I get it, gotta build up to that.
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Don't worry. Jake will see some action soon.
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People are far more likely to post when dissatisfied, so I'm here to do my part and say I like the Jake mtf(uta) route.
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Hopefully it's with Aki right before Nicole plows her in front of him.
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I gotta second this! I want to say please don't be dissuaded from this path! The Jake transformation is fun, it fits the story well and I can't wait to see become a wonderful bottom
Hey Seez, regarding sound design, I have one game that (for me at least), has one of the best sound designs. MIST. It was also that dev's first game and the finished version was superb! It ranks at top 3 on my list so you might wanna check it out when you have the time. It might give you some inspiration and ideas.
Edit: Sorry, not their first game but it's still one of their best.
I waited a bit for some futa on male to get added and just content in general to add up. Looks like it's about time to give this a go. I'm looking forward to seeing how the game has developed.
I myself would love for him to be more of a bottom than top but let's see what you are gonna cook <3