Holiday Island [v0.1.4] [darkhound1] - General discussions and information

[Wilson NE]

What about Brenda's personal story? family, origins, social status, how she met joy, how she end up in the island, etc...

PS: Hotshots won't be available for the next update... it is still far from being finished. Probably for next one will be ready.

PS2:

Hopefully, it will involve removing clothes when they lose!

What are you talking about? that's not the spirit at all of HI

 

[Bantry]

What about Brenda's personal story? family, origins, social status, how she met joy, how she end up in the island, etc...

Brenda, only child from a lower, middle class family where nothing was given, everything was earned. High school athlete, who lettered in track and swimming. Former medical student who worked nights to raise money to pay her tuition. Met Joy at an upscale Gentleman's Club where she started as a cocktail waitress but quickly became a dancer as the money was better. Her killer athlete's body made the transition easy. (Just wait until you see her pole dance!) She and Joy hit it off as they shared their medical background stories. Joy offered her treatments, but Brenda didn't need them, so Joy offered to pay her tuition if Brenda would come to the island and work as a doctor and maid for two years.

 

[Wilson NE]

Had been revieweing my movies collection and here goes some generic ideas for girls backgrounds. None of these ones suits Brenda in my opinion but here goes anyway.

1.- The girl is from a very humble family. She is still with her very first boyfriend. She loves him but he is as asshole. He convinced her to take advantage of her beauty an enter prostitution to be able to pay his debts. Diferent paths from this point:

- She is still with her boyfriend and the island is part of her new "job".

- She got corrupted by the money and the luxurious life style of her clients and left her boyfriend. She met Joy in a wild party hosted by her for some notorious customers of Hi Inc and ended at the island.

Clearly inspired by Paprika here


2.- She's is an intellectual girl from a rich family. Her life is easy so she may spend all her time reading and going out with men. Almost everynight she came back home with a new guy but this 'slutty' way of life is just a mask that hides a romantic girl who is searching for her matching soul.

I love this background inpired by La collectionneuse but i don't know at all how to fit it with the Joy and the island story xD


3.- She is from a rich family sent abroad for studying medicine by force. She is smart but she indeed failed on her studies and become 'just' a nurse. This is still carrying the shame of that failing and don't want to go back to her country. She had been struggling hard to find the man of her life but no man fulfilled her expectations. Somehow she met Joy and found in the island a way to escape all those frustrations.

I think I've seen too many Mizoguchi movies... only tragic stories comes to my mind when think about women xD

 

[rooney10]

I can see and in fact appreciate the value of a few good back stories and I welcome the level of thought and detail put into all of theses character dev ideas.

But amidst them all...and on a much lighter note btw...let's not lose sight of the fact that one or two emotionally damaged characters w/overzealous sexual addictions (or at least that healthy "oral fixation" already mentioned by many of the existing girls), compounded by substantial daddy issues have been known to open female hearts, minds, orifices, and storylines since the dawn of time.

 

[Wilson NE]

I can see and in fact appreciate the value of a few good back stories and I welcome the level of thought and detail put into all of theses character dev ideas.

But amidst them all...and on a much lighter note btw...let's not lose sight of the fact that one or two emotionally damaged characters w/overzealous sexual addictions (or at least that healthy "oral fixation" already mentioned by many of the existing girls), compounded by substantial daddy issues have been known to open female hearts, minds, orifices, and storylines since the dawn of time.

lol! needed like 5 minutes and 2 different traductors to be able to understand this and still have my doubts

Felt like in

Which contains, by the way, another nice background for a female character but hardly suitable with HI's spirit

 

[Puppet Master]

I think Bantry's got it right for Brenda. Let's build on that.

Brenda: "I'm originally from Little Rock, but I moved to DC for better opportunities. Even though I lost my accent, I never lost the ability to make a killer BBQ chicken and sweet tea."

Brenda: "My athletic skills got me a job pole dancing. I thought I was just doing it for money for college, but I ended up really liking it. Maybe I can do a private dance for you in the red room one night."

Brenda: "I was pole dancing in an exclusive club in DC one night, when I saw this super hot woman just staring at me. It was Joy! As I was going through the crowd, she booked a private room with me for the entire night. I'm not usually into girls, but for her, I'd make an exception"

Brenda: "The night I met Joy at the club, she talked with me all night about my dream to become a doctor. The next day, Joy called to say that she had gotten me in to John Hopkins in Baltimore and would pay for my education, so long as I got straight A's, which I did."

Brenda: "I was a star runner and swimmer in high school. We should jog on the beach or swim together sometime -- unless you're afraid that I'll beat you."

Brenda: "These girls are alright at volleyball, but only Amy is as good as me. I'd like to take her on one on one, maybe even in the bedroom."

 

[partanen]

I asume Delizia has her background partially done from previous Dark's project...
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The one who hasn't something like that at all and will need to be set soon is Brenda

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[darkhound1]

Hi guys,

I have written down some background for Brenda. I hope you are okay with it:

• She was born and raised in south africa as a single child
• Her father is from a rich family in south africa (nothing illegal)
• Her mother is a former model from the philippines
• Her father and mother met when your father was on holidays on the philippines (it was love at first sight from the father that is) They met at a fashion show. Her father convinced her mother to go out with him. He invited her to visit her in south africa, which she did some weeks later. He paid for the flight, etc.
• Since Brenda was the only child and money was not an issue, she got everything she wanted as a kid
• Brenda is athletic enough, open minded, a bit self-absorbed and also quite intelligent
• She had a wild time with some drugs, lots of guys and sex when she was between 18 and 19. Well, she is good looking with an incredible ass and great tits. That she’s really incredible in bed didn’t hurt either… The longest time she was with 1 guy at that time was 8 weeks!
• Not liking where she was heading. Her mother and father didn’t want her to end up as a spoiled brat (or worse), so they send her to the United States to study at Yale Medical School. At first she was all tears. But after some weeks she started to like doing something productive and meaningful. In Especially in her first year, there were still the occasional parties that went too far. But with time she grew into a young women with some sense of responsibility. She finished her exam at the age of 25.
• She met Joy at a lecture about bioengineering. They talked after the official part was over. Joy seemed to have liked her. Four weeks later she called with a job offer.

 

[Puppet Master]

Thanks, Darkhound1, for the Brenda background.
It's so detailed that I was wondering if you have such detailed information on all the girls.
Is it helpful to you for us to produce "Talk to her" dialogue? What do you think of what we've done so far?
If so, can we get the background of the other girls (without spoilers), so that we can create more accurate dialogue?

 

[darkhound1]

Thanks, Darkhound1, for the Brenda background.
It's so detailed that I was wondering if you have such detailed information on all the girls.
Is it helpful to you for us to produce "Talk to her" dialogue? What do you think of what we've done so far?
If so, can we get the background of the other girls (without spoilers), so that we can create more accurate dialogue?

I have information similar to Brenda's for most of the other girls:
Alice, Aly, Amy, Brenda, Desire, Eva, Faye, Jessica, Natasha, Renée, Yvette

Girls without these information are:
Heather, Delizia, Lacey, Ivy

It won't be easy or maybe impossible to share the information without spoilers. I have to think about it if I want to share it. I think it is a lot more fun if you find out on your own. A lot of the information hasn't been revealed yet in the game.

I also need these information on the girls to have a consistent character build and behavior throughout the game.
If a a pretty clear picture of Heather, just haven't written it down. All the girls with this set of information should also have the "personalized herself chat lines". So they shouldn't talk about how much they love ponies all the time

 

[Bantry]

My background story/information for Delizia. @darkhound1 use any or all as you see fit.

• Delizia's parents died in a car crash when she was 8. Although born in Spain, which accounts for her dark hair, green eyes and sultry looks, she was raised by her aunt who worked in Las Vegas as a showgirl.
• Delizia learned all about the free sex and party lifestyle growing up, and lost her virginity when she was 16, to an older man who was a trade show promotor.
• Thinking it was true love, she dropped out of high school and had plastic surgery at his request to increase her boobs/cleavage and worked the trade show circuit as a spokeswoman and model for whomever he would hire her out to.
• Five years later he dumped her, snuck out of town and left her with a ton of gambling debts, that became hers as she was still his wife of record. A quick divorce changed her marital status and Delizia was able to continue to work as a model as her main source of income, however she also became an 'escort for hire' at the 'suggestion' of the criminals that owned the debt.
• Two years later and debt free, she met her next husband at the CES (Consumer Electronic Show) when the company he worked for hired her as a model.
• The company, based in Silicon Valley, developed the ground-breaking technology of subdermal implants that monitored personal statistics.
• Delizia thought her life had finally turned for the better, but sadly this husband too, also had a gambling addiction and she quickly divorced him the following year when they were back in Vegas.
• Now in her mid-twenties, divorced twice and wise beyond her years, Delizia was all set to become a model and sex for hire escort again when she met Joy.
• Joy informed Delizia she had tracked her down as she had been given her name when Joy bought the technology for the subdermal implants.
• Delizia's reserved nature and reluctance to open up can be seen as shyness or aloofness, so it wasn't surprising for Joy to find Delizia by herself in the casino.
• Delizia told Joy her entire life story, where upon Joy offered Delizia a job on Holiday Island to inject and monitor the implants as well as train others in their use.
• Delizia immediately agreed.

 

[brianiac]

As I try to get the last of each character's progress, I wonder if there could be an alert option on the phone app that lets the MC know when one of the ladies goes to a specific location. Something like "alert me when Jessica is in Desire's room" or "Yvette is at the pool".

 

[Bantry]

As I try to get the last of each character's progress, I wonder if there could be an alert option on the phone app that lets the MC know when one of the ladies goes to a specific location. Something like "alert me when Jessica is in Desire's room" or "Yvette is at the pool".

You kind of sound like a stalker LOL. Anyway, isn't that ability already in the game? Assuming you have hacked and unlocked all the girls' implants and their locations show in the lower left of your screen. It changes as her location changes. Want to follow/stalk a particular girl? Just highlight her on your phone and follow where she goes.

 

[youarejumpmaster]

wow nice

 

[brianiac]

You kind of sound like a stalker LOL. Anyway, isn't that ability already in the game? Assuming you have hacked and unlocked all the girls' implants and their locations show in the lower left of your screen.

Stalking yes.

I suppose I'm being a little lazy. I'm usually doing something with some other lady while I wait for "Yvette to go to the pool", the phone changes to focus on the other lady.

The dream part of this app would be to tell me when TWO ladies are together for those events where both of them need to be together such as "Faye and Aly are at the beach".

 

[Puppet Master]

Only Faye needs to be on the beach to trigger.

 

[Puppet Master]

Yvette says that Ivy is her friend. I don't know if Yvette is into girls, but if she's into muscle, I'd like to see her and Ivy together. Maybe Ivy could play the male role with a strap on dildo.

 

[light03]

As for Brenda. I am a bit excited because she is my favorite Despite its dark skin color, she doesn't really look like an African. Her face type, green eyes and straight hair are completely uncharacteristic for African women.

 

[brianiac]

I've been playing around with creating "themes" for the picture frames in the MC's new room.

It's easy to find pictures in the progress/achievements app on the phone because of how they're all displayed as thumbnails.

Would it be possible to do something similar with the attachments in the messenger app?

 

[darkhound1]

I've been playing around with creating "themes" for the picture frames in the MC's new room.

It's easy to find pictures in the progress/achievements app on the phone because of how they're all displayed as thumbnails.

Would it be possible to do something similar with the attachments in the messenger app?

Everything you get as a message should be a sexting image. So it should be it in the achievements already.