Loving this so far but have one complaint. No matter how you choose the characteristics of the girls they all have very large breasts. I was hoping to find 1 or 2 with more petite breasts but no such luck. Just met Joy on the island and got to choose who gets to the island next. Since I really can't choose by breast size I am now using the face so I chose Amy cuz she has a very exotic look. Any plans to introduce any smaller breasted girls to the game since you can only have a certain number at one time on the island?
Ren'Py Holiday Island [v0.4.5.1] [darkhound1]
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The game, IMHO, is much more than strip poker. It is essentially an interactions discovery game. On your phone, look at interactions. It will tell you which interactions you have not yet managed to discover and then figure out the right combinations of stats, outfits, situations (and sometimes drugs) it takes to discover them. Rollover text gives you clues.
The strip poker is a means to gain favor (and maybe discover a couple of interactions in the process).
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Here are the contestants and winners from one that just ran:
Group A:
Ivy vs Lacey --> Selected Ivy
Jessica vs Ivy --> Selected Ivy
Lacey vs Jessica --> Selected Lacey (*grin* I know that you would have picked Jessica)
Winner was Lacey, 2nd place Ivy (Ivy should have won, 2 votes, with Lacey in second, 1 vote).
Group B:
Heather vs Alice --> Selected Heather
Desire vs Heather --> Selected Heather
Alice vs Desire --> Selected Alice
Winner was Heather, 2nd place Desire (Heather should have and did win, but Alice should have won second 1 vote).
Semi-Finals and Finals seem to consistently work correctly.
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Yes, I believe the smallest are Lacey and Delizia who are supposed to be DD and E, respectively.
Hi, yes I'm german. Most of the time my english is good enough, but surely not native quality. I also have a friend (native americn) who helps me out with some corrections or improvements of phrases. But just like when editing a book, you never catch it all.
So thanks for the findings and the corrections.
- aloof from stage -> right, corrected that, sounded strange anyway
- some days -> it's only one for both -> changed it to "for a few days"
- waist hips -> well I'm not a complete moron
It was a copy&paste error - it has to be "hips size" - spotting -> I'm not changing that. Even if it is the better AE, probably 99% on non native english ppl will not understand it. It just sounds strange to me too.
- Hmmmm -> yeah well I just hit the keyboard to create these... Just joking, removed the H in front
- How are you talking to -> Haven't thought when I was writing it, changed it
- *smirks* -> In most cases it means smug looking which is what the intention is. I probably overdid it a little and used it where it really doesn't work well. I will correct some of them when I stumble uppon it.
Intialization of contest points was missing before the contest. So there was some leftover from previous contests that influenced the result. Fixed it for the next update.
The girls do not change their appearance. You choices influence which girls will be on the island.
It is big breast game. There is no option for small in the selections. It's Full / Large / Huge for breast sizes. So that's what you get.
Three girls are considered Full:
Lacey - DD
Brenda - E
Delizia - E
One of the "Large" girls doesn't look that big in game as well.
Renée - F/G
All the others have large or huge breasts.
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Thank you it workt.
I got an error from natasha when she is doing room service and she lets you play with her breasts.
Yeah shit, I forgot the file again...
You can get it with instructions where to copy it from this post:
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Only use the file: Natasha_event_room_service6.jpg - not the other ones - the other ones are old!
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It's looking great. *smug look* will probably work in place of *smirk* in many of those cases.Hi, yes I'm german. Most of the time my english is good enough, but surely not native quality. I also have a friend (native americn) who helps me out with some corrections or improvements of phrases. But just like when editing a book, you never catch it all.
So thanks for the findings and the corrections.
- aloof from stage -> right, corrected that, sounded strange anyway
- some days -> it's only one for both -> changed it to "for a few days"
- waist hips -> well I'm not a complete moron
- spotting -> I'm not changing that. Even if it is the better AE, probably 99% on non native english ppl will not understand it. It just sounds strange to me too.
- Hmmmm -> yeah well I just hit the keyboard to create these... Just joking, removed the H in front
- How are you talking to -> Haven't thought when I was writing it, changed it
- *smirks* -> In most cases it means smug looking which is what the intention is. I probably overdid it a little and used it where it really doesn't work well. I will correct some of them when I stumble uppon it.
Another one is "Aerobics". We generally use Yoga for the activity that's being depicted. Aerobics generally refers to things to increase respiration rate like running in place, jumping, lunging, jumping-jacks. Yoga is stretching, strengthening, and balance.
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A few new typo finds:
0.1.1.1: Alice’s Third Weight training event:
Alice: “*hmmm* I havnnn’t eveeen staaated yet.”
Replace staaaated with staaarted. If her mouth is full and she can't get the r sound, you can go with staaahted yet. You can let haven’t slide or fix it.
MC: “I only helped with the trainning Alice. You did all the work yourself.”
Replace “trainning Alice” with “training, Alice” unless you want him to be speaking to her in the third person.
0.1.1.1: Heather’s Cosplay selection event:
Lacey: “All it’s going to do is that he wants to fuck you right one stage…”
Reword: “All it’s going to do is make him want to fuck you right on stage…”
0.1.1.1: Yvette masturbating (you catch her and are nice):
Rock: “That was probably the best kiss every! *smiles*
Replace every with ever.
0.1.1.1: Alice’s Third Weight training event:
Alice: “*hmmm* I havnnn’t eveeen staaated yet.”
Replace staaaated with staaarted. If her mouth is full and she can't get the r sound, you can go with staaahted yet. You can let haven’t slide or fix it.
MC: “I only helped with the trainning Alice. You did all the work yourself.”
Replace “trainning Alice” with “training, Alice” unless you want him to be speaking to her in the third person.
0.1.1.1: Heather’s Cosplay selection event:
Lacey: “All it’s going to do is that he wants to fuck you right one stage…”
Reword: “All it’s going to do is make him want to fuck you right on stage…”
0.1.1.1: Yvette masturbating (you catch her and are nice):
Rock: “That was probably the best kiss every! *smiles*
Replace every with ever.
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@darkhound1, on your Patreon page, under bug fixes, I presume it's supposed to read "Amy pool scene"?
Also, in Amy's weightlifting BJ scene, there are a few places where it slips from second person to first person ("my cock" instead of "your cock").
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Also, in Amy's weightlifting BJ scene, there are a few places where it slips from second person to first person ("my cock" instead of "your cock").
Thanks, corrected.
No I didn't want to speak to her in the third person, or the "the" would be kinda out of place
Nah, the "l" got eaten
Fixed it on the patreon page. I found only one occurence of "my cock". Fixed that one.
Edit: Gave the whole scene a once over and fixed more "my" and some other minor stuff.
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Yeah, sorry, I meant to put "for example," but obviously I forgot. Thanks much.Nah, the "l" got eaten
Fixed it on the patreon page. I found only one occurence of "my cock". Fixed that one.
Edit: Gave the whole scene a once over and fixed more "my" and some other minor stuff.
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Here are more, but fortunately they are, almost, all in one event.
All: In general, whenever you have “<some statement> [PlayerName].”, you can replace add a comma <some statement>, [PlayerName].”
0.1.1.1: Yvette masturbation event
All: In general, whenever you have “<some statement> [PlayerName].”, you can replace add a comma <some statement>, [PlayerName].”
0.1.1.1: Yvette masturbation event
“Open the door some more and put you head inside to get a better view. (You might get caught)”
Replace you with your.
“Tell her you just want to keep her some company”.”
Either replace keep with give (give her some company) or remove some (keep her company).
“Just to keep you some company”
Same as above.
“Quietly leaver her room.”
Replace leaver with leave.
“You open the door some more, push your head through the door slit…”
Replace door slit with door crack or crack. Door slit or slot is generally something one pushed mail through.
“You set her down trying to avoid that she feels you dick all over her body.”
Not clear what this one is saying. It could say two different things so either (1) “You set her down trying to ignore that she’s feeling your dick all over her body.”, or (2) “You set her down trying to avoid stroking your dick all over her body.” Depending on whichever one turns you on.
“The way her huge tits are resisting to be concealed by the robe.”
Either (1) replace resisting with refusing, (2) replace "are resisting to be concealed" with resist concealment", or (3) replace to be with being. Also same change in next line of description.
“…without the training and the constand exposure to all these hot girls on this island.
Replace constand with constant.
“You better don’t play too long or you won’t have much fun with me any more.”
Try “You’d better not play too long or …” but “any more” (anymore) sounds final. You might want “You’d better not play too much or we won’t have fun for long.”
“…leanig forward and pushing out her huge melons.”
Replace leanig with leaning.
Replace you with your.
“Tell her you just want to keep her some company”.”
Either replace keep with give (give her some company) or remove some (keep her company).
“Just to keep you some company”
Same as above.
“Quietly leaver her room.”
Replace leaver with leave.
“You open the door some more, push your head through the door slit…”
Replace door slit with door crack or crack. Door slit or slot is generally something one pushed mail through.
“You set her down trying to avoid that she feels you dick all over her body.”
Not clear what this one is saying. It could say two different things so either (1) “You set her down trying to ignore that she’s feeling your dick all over her body.”, or (2) “You set her down trying to avoid stroking your dick all over her body.” Depending on whichever one turns you on.
“The way her huge tits are resisting to be concealed by the robe.”
Either (1) replace resisting with refusing, (2) replace "are resisting to be concealed" with resist concealment", or (3) replace to be with being. Also same change in next line of description.
“…without the training and the constand exposure to all these hot girls on this island.
Replace constand with constant.
“You better don’t play too long or you won’t have much fun with me any more.”
Try “You’d better not play too long or …” but “any more” (anymore) sounds final. You might want “You’d better not play too much or we won’t have fun for long.”
“…leanig forward and pushing out her huge melons.”
Replace leanig with leaning.
This active/passive stuff is driving me nuts
I know that some of what I wrote didn't sound right, but if I take too long for each and every sentence I won't get anything done. Thanks for the changes and typo corrections. Sounds much better now.