The game, IMHO, is much more than strip poker. It is essentially an interactions discovery game. On your phone, look at interactions. It will tell you which interactions you have not yet managed to discover and then figure out the right combinations of stats, outfits, situations (and sometimes drugs) it takes to discover them. Rollover text gives you clues.is the game mostly strip poker, don't seem to be able to do much else even with the girls stats maxed?
Here are the contestants and winners from one that just ran:
- Boob comparison event --> thanks, will be fixed with 0.1.2.0
- hack problem --> has already been fixed with 0.1.1.1
- placeholder manneqin images are not a bug. More renders will be added when I have time.
- I was never able to replicate the problem with the butt contest. For me it works correctly every time
- about the Alice third workout never happening - I'm pretty sure it works. The appointments have a random component. Just be patient.
Yes, I believe the smallest are Lacey and Delizia who are supposed to be DD and E, respectively.Loving this so far but have one complaint. No matter how you choose the characteristics of the girls they all have very large breasts. I was hoping to find 1 or 2 with more petite breasts but no such luck. Just met Joy on the island and got to choose who gets to the island next. Since I really can't choose by breast size I am now using the face so I chose Amy cuz she has a very exotic look. Any plans to introduce any smaller breasted girls to the game since you can only have a certain number at one time on the island?
Hi, yes I'm german. Most of the time my english is good enough, but surely not native quality. I also have a friend (native americn) who helps me out with some corrections or improvements of phrases. But just like when editing a book, you never catch it all.Some terms are odd for an American speaker. Apologies if you are a native American speaker or intend a UK English audience. A few phrases suggest another native language. I don’t mean to be a “grammar-nazi” only to help you (darkhound1) create a superior game.
· Faye’s pole dance mentions you standing “aloof from the stage”. Americans only use the term aloof for a distant attitude, not a physical distance. “A bit distant” or “away from the stage” sound better to the American ear. UK English may vary. Also “too bad but sure” might sound better as “If I must”.
· Sperm congestion descriptions mention no sex for “some days”. For a 48 hour event, “a couple of days”, for a 72 hour event, “a few days” sound better and are still vague enough.
· Measurements: We usually say “Waist measurement” rather than “waist hips”. Waist and hips are considered two different measurements.
· We usually refer to helping with the weights as “spotting”. “Can you spot me with the weights?” “Sure, I’d be happy to spot you”. “Are you strong enough to spot me?” “I’m plenty strong enough to spot you.”
· Sperm Congestion (Second Visit):
1) MC: “Hmmmm I want to fuck you [DoctorName].”
Try something like “Mmmmm I want to fuck you, [DoctorName].” (why: Because Hmmmm implies consideration while Mmmmm implies pleasure. Hmm sounds like MC is considering the options. The comma is for syntax.).
2) [Doctor]: “How are you talking to your doctor? I’m sorry, but that’s not the right treatment. *smirks*”
Try something like “Is that any way to talk to your doctor?” (How are you talking to your doctor would be answered by “Well, it’s hard because I have a ball gag in my mouth” or “I’m using my cell phone.”).
Smirk, used throughout the game means to “smile in an irritatingly smug, conceited, or silly way.” Smirk is usually intended to annoy the other person. I don’t think you mean any of that. Expressions that might convey your meaning are “winks” “bats eyelash” “flutters eyelashes” “mischievous look” (*mischief*).
Intialization of contest points was missing before the contest. So there was some leftover from previous contests that influenced the result. Fixed it for the next update.Here are the contestants and winners from one that just ran:
Group A:
Ivy vs Lacey --> Selected Ivy
Jessica vs Ivy --> Selected Ivy
Lacey vs Jessica --> Selected Lacey (*grin* I know that you would have picked Jessica)
Winner was Lacey, 2nd place Ivy (Ivy should have won, 2 votes, with Lacey in second, 1 vote).
Group B:
Heather vs Alice --> Selected Heather
Desire vs Heather --> Selected Heather
Alice vs Desire --> Selected Alice
Winner was Heather, 2nd place Desire (Heather should have and did win, but Alice should have won second 1 vote).
Semi-Finals and Finals seem to consistently work correctly.
The girls do not change their appearance. You choices influence which girls will be on the island.Loving this so far but have one complaint. No matter how you choose the characteristics of the girls they all have very large breasts. I was hoping to find 1 or 2 with more petite breasts but no such luck. Just met Joy on the island and got to choose who gets to the island next. Since I really can't choose by breast size I am now using the face so I chose Amy cuz she has a very exotic look. Any plans to introduce any smaller breasted girls to the game since you can only have a certain number at one time on the island?
Thank you it workt.Open the console and type:
player.add_appointment(6, aly, "Aly_room", 18)
This will add the appointment with Aly again
Yeah shit, I forgot the file again...Loving it all so far. Hope to see more sexual relief options in the near future.
Also I am still getting the Natasha room service error in version 1.1.1 that I though was fixed.
It's looking great. *smug look* will probably work in place of *smirk* in many of those cases.Hi, yes I'm german. Most of the time my english is good enough, but surely not native quality. I also have a friend (native americn) who helps me out with some corrections or improvements of phrases. But just like when editing a book, you never catch it all.
So thanks for the findings and the corrections.
- aloof from stage -> right, corrected that, sounded strange anyway
- some days -> it's only one for both -> changed it to "for a few days"
- waist hips -> well I'm not a complete moron
It was a copy&paste error - it has to be "hips size"
- spotting -> I'm not changing that. Even if it is the better AE, probably 99% on non native english ppl will not understand it. It just sounds strange to me too.
- Hmmmm -> yeah well I just hit the keyboard to create these... Just joking, removed the H in front
- How are you talking to -> Haven't thought when I was writing it, changed it
- *smirks* -> In most cases it means smug looking which is what the intention is. I probably overdid it a little and used it where it really doesn't work well. I will correct some of them when I stumble uppon it.
Thanks, corrected.A few new typo finds:
0.1.1.1: Alice’s Third Weight training event:
Alice: “*hmmm* I havnnn’t eveeen staaated yet.”
Replace staaaated with staaarted. If her mouth is full and she can't get the r sound, you can go with staaahted yet. You can let haven’t slide or fix it.
MC: “I only helped with the trainning Alice. You did all the work yourself.”
Replace “trainning Alice” with “training, Alice” unless you want him to be speaking to her in the third person.
0.1.1.1: Heather’s Cosplay selection event:
Lacey: “All it’s going to do is that he wants to fuck you right one stage…”
Reword: “All it’s going to do is make him want to fuck you right on stage…”
0.1.1.1: Yvette masturbating (you catch her and are nice):
Rock: “That was probably the best kiss every! *smiles*
Replace every with ever.
Nah, the "l" got eaten@darkhound1, on your Patreon page, under bug fixes, I presume it's supposed to read "Amy pool scene"?
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Also, in Amy's weightlifting BJ scene, there are a few places where it slips from second person to first person ("my cock" instead of "your cock").
Yeah, sorry, I meant to put "for example," but obviously I forgot. Thanks much.Nah, the "l" got eaten
Fixed it on the patreon page. I found only one occurence of "my cock". Fixed that one.
Edit: Gave the whole scene a once over and fixed more "my" and some other minor stuff.