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It is part of the quest to help Jennifer's friend with photos. Search here or in the Guide for starting that quest. That wardrobe is only for that achievement.
Ren'Py Holiday Island [v0.4.5.1] [darkhound1]
- Thread starter Pepé Le Pew
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Hehe, I'll take that one out my next batch:
In the scene where Jennifer shows you the photo studio:
"I'm so happy Joy did that for me. It's like a dream come true."
would be better as
"I'm so happy Joy did this for me. It's like a dream come true."
During Aly's pool pose scene:
"I just remember something about one of my former boyfriends..."
should be
"I just remembered something about one of my former boyfriends..."
and:"What's ot like for a girl to have breasts the size of yours?"
should be
"What's it like for a girl to have breasts the size of yours?"
and:"The workout (and maybe me turning 18) had another effect too."
should be
"The workouts (and maybe me turning 18) had another effect too."
and (granted, I'm being a little picky with this one):"Her talking about her tits in unison with the presentation of her huge knockers turns you on quite a bit."
would be better as
"Her talking about her huge knockers combined with the presentation of them turns you on quite a bit."
"presentation" would probably be best replaced by "sight" or maybe "display"
During Natasha's return to the island scene:
"Feeling more secure, he was really looking or more like googling... *chuckles*"
should be:
"Feeling more secure, he was really looking or more like goggling... *chuckles*"
and:"Before I talked to him..."
would be better as
"Before I said to him..."
and:"Since he was at a loss for words at the moment, I didn't give him time to recover..."
would be better as
"Since he was at a loss for words at that moment, I didn't give him time to recover..."
During Renee's drink at the bar scene:
"There was this agency... Busty Escorts and they only had superrich and well-selected clients..."
Would be better as
"There was this agency... Busty Escorts and they only had super-rich and well-selected clients..."
and (this one might be a generic one; this is just where I spotted it):"What do you think why you were offered this job on the Island, Renee?"
would be better as (there's a pile of variants for this, so here's just a couple)
"Why do you think you were offered this job on the Island, Renee?"
or
"What do you think was the reason you were offered this job on the Island, Renee?"
During drinks at the bar scene:
"You know [girl], I fell for you from the moment I first saw you on the island."
would be better as
"You know [girl], I fell for you the moment I first saw you on the island."
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Let's point some others I've noticed :
During Amy Yoga workout.
"Can we move one? ..."
It should be "Can we move ON?"
While speaking to Mercedes by the pool.
"I supposed that makes sense"
"I suppose that ..."
First time you find Delizia asleep while studying,
"No! Imean, of you're attractive..."
"No! I mean, you're attractive! ..." English isn't my first laguage, but this "of" gets me confuse.
Amy when drinking with her at the night bar.
"I almost always get want I want ..."
"... get WHAT I want..."
Ok, that's all for now.
And btw thanks a lot for this great game darkhound1
During Amy Yoga workout.
"Can we move one? ..."
It should be "Can we move ON?"
While speaking to Mercedes by the pool.
"I supposed that makes sense"
"I suppose that ..."
First time you find Delizia asleep while studying,
"No! Imean, of you're attractive..."
"No! I mean, you're attractive! ..." English isn't my first laguage, but this "of" gets me confuse.
Amy when drinking with her at the night bar.
"I almost always get want I want ..."
"... get WHAT I want..."
Ok, that's all for now.
And btw thanks a lot for this great game darkhound1
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Now that's some cloning I could get behind. Scene from Yvette just ending her topless pole dance. She started out in her pink dress.
Yvette.. After her incident at the bar... All I get is the picture.. Three times now.. What do you need to do for the invitation?
As far as I know it is pure chance and if she doesn't you have to wait for another week. I forced it with this:
- made a save Thursday night before going to sleep (the day change calculates everything)
- made a save first thing Friday morning
- fast forwarded time to 10 PM
- checked for Sara and the pills
- if not load save from Thursday and try again
- if yes load save from Friday and play the day normally until 10 PM is reached. And there she is..,,
Edit: same procedure works later on to get her into the needed dresses.
But you do need to progress the quest by reading the hints closely. If you don't do that nothing will work.
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I'm exactly at this point as you are/were. What i've to do to advance furthered? Tried on saturday's talking with jen at night bar and nothing, can't trigger poker scene with her, can't get her to participate on butt/tshirt contest, can't get her on her pink dress...kinda lost right now...
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talk to jennifer in night bar then you can progress, after that all hints works fine
https://f95zone.to/threads/holiday-island-v0-3-5-0-darkhound1.3782/post-7713660
after just keep on visit bar till you see her in new dress
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FWIW, I would suggest ogling, gawking, leering, or staring instead of goggling. While goggling is a technically correct usage in this particular context, it seems to be fairly obscure and seldom used.
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p.s. - I also found another typo:
When you hover the pointer over the 6th Achievement for Delizia on the MC's phone, it says, "When Desire returns after her exam, you celebrate by having sex in the gym", but it should say Delizia.
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