A comment & suggestion to the grope action in its current form,
The other actions all have the MC and Girl facing each other and based on height they compensate either way to make the face off occur. Which makes them "connect and engaged".
The grope differs from this as they do not face each other and imho could be perceived as making the actors appear a bit disjointed compared to the other actions.
Examples,
The cute shortie
It works very well for Yvette. She is short and ends up looking directly at the MC. Her arm meant to cradle his head cant reach, but instead does a decent proxy of appearing to stroke his chin or neck.
It also seems due to her lacking height that she is leaning into him, connecting further.
Both are engaged with each other in the action. They appear as a "whole" so to speak.
The lady we would see even around corners (no Ivy concussions here)
Natasha is also quite short, but quite short enough to achieve Yvette's result when using the same posture.
She manages to get the arm around his head but looks up, free of him. They appear disjointed. He is engaged but she looks a bit like she is wondering if there is pizza for dinner at the buffet.
Legs start down there, Heaven stops waaay up there
Jessica, Jennifer, Alice and Amy runs largely along Natasha's line but being higher more or less break entirely free and simply look clear and up, free of the MC (though when I see Jennifer's I cannot help but imagine that she is looking at a light bulb she needs to change in the bar
sorry but I do
)
Suggestion
Natasha could probably look at the MC, though he'd be unable to look at her.
Would result in a higher connect though.
The higher girls probably would have trouble looking at the MC (except to search if he has a bald spot
) but maybe they would seem more engaged if they had their eyes closed or half closed with a smile, closed due to enjoying the pleasure of the grope
Disclaimer
Erm. I'll be the first to admit that I couldnt draw or do a render to win a million. So this is not a critique.
Buuut it simply struck me as a gut reaction when I saw Yvette's and compared to the others (unfair of course, Yvette being Yvette and the others not being Yvette
).
But given that the gropes are only completed for a subset of girls, thought I'd pitch an idea, that hopefully was in the realm of minor-change-so-might-not-totally-bad idea?