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I think it's a known bug, but Brenda's arrival requires pushing ignore to continue.
I assume it will be fixed in next update.
Brenda's speech may be from her accent, if so ignore these.
Brenda says: "I've heard that you asked for me to com to the island."
"Com" should be "come," and tenses should agree so "I've" should be "I."
Brenda: "And you also know my name. I'm a little impressed." Don't start a sentence with a conjunction, remove "And." If you want what she says to logically connect add "'so": "You also know my name, so I'm a little impressed."
Brenda: "I didn't sleep much. In part that was related to my outfit." Sentence fragment, try: "I didn't sleep much, partly because of my outfit."
Brenda: "Bachelor holiday." In America, this is a "Bachelorette party," in the U.K. "hen party."
I assume it will be fixed in next update.
Brenda's speech may be from her accent, if so ignore these.
Brenda says: "I've heard that you asked for me to com to the island."
"Com" should be "come," and tenses should agree so "I've" should be "I."
Brenda: "And you also know my name. I'm a little impressed." Don't start a sentence with a conjunction, remove "And." If you want what she says to logically connect add "'so": "You also know my name, so I'm a little impressed."
Brenda: "I didn't sleep much. In part that was related to my outfit." Sentence fragment, try: "I didn't sleep much, partly because of my outfit."
Brenda: "Bachelor holiday." In America, this is a "Bachelorette party," in the U.K. "hen party."