VN Ren'Py Holly Smiles at the End [3/5] [DiscipleofVirginia]

[DiscipleOfVirginia]

I was not really going to respond, but when people overtly lie or mischaracterises stuff, I do tend to step in.

So, harmless question, I can't be the only one who thinks all the pissing (watersports), toilet-licking and any other disgusting type of licking stuff

There is no pissplay in this story. There will never be any of that sort of content shown in ANY of my games. Its either extreme carelessness or you lying here.

Dirty talk IS pretty spicy and arousing when done well, I'm a big fan of that too, but the shit said here by those two ugly fuckers, of all ppl lol, in this update alone is a lil too cringe and plain obvious misogynism even Andrew Tate would be uncomfortable reading till the end, IMHO as a fellow porn game and bimbo lover.

Thats... Because the characters you mentioned (Or I assume you mentioned) are misogynists. I wrote them to be misogynistic. This is like me asking Stephen King if he could remove the character of Tom Rogan from "It" because he makes me uncomfortable. I even put in a content warning at the start of the game:



Further more, for you to have gotten to the content you described, that means you played through Gadreel

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But some girls consensually doing stuff, however repulsive you may find it, thats too far?

Let me be clear, you absolutely do not have to play this VN. Or get to a part where you feel it takes you outside your comfort zone, and you stop playing. But I just find it extremely odd, that some ugly bastards talking about rimjobs is somehow worse than an actual demon from hell

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Yet to answer this question:

" should be completely optional and avoidable for every character "

I will be implementing a "Purity" playthrough option at the start of a new game. This will be in 4/5, not this update I am working on currently. This will bypass a lot of the erotica and just focus on the story. I always wanted to do one of these things, so I can implement them later into "Of Birds and Bees" and "Autumn Boulevard"

 

[xXwankerXx]

There is no pissplay in this story. There will never be any of that sort of content shown in ANY of my games. Its either extreme carelessness or you lying here.

How about we calm down a lil bit and you stop with the lying yourself. So, first, I specifically said it was a harmless question, didn't review-bomb the game with 1-star rants on why I don't like it cuz most of the stuff that isn't my cup of tea represents most of the content that's in the game, like some 'critics' normally do, and secondly, both 'wonderful' characters, physical and personality wise, named Tom from HR and Bernette (IIRC) were pretty vocal about what they think of Em-Ber-Lee and her type of women, and honestly dude, they'd make your average reddit incels cringe and facepalm themselves after reading that shit.

The 'amazingly beautiful (on the inside only most likely, never on the outside cuz of... uhh... you know what)' creature Bernette or whatever and her wife were pretty vocal about making Emberlee drink piss, sweat, toilet water and whatever else that almost made my stomach commit suicide. Didn't see any option there on this kinda development, so whether all that shit will happen or not on or off screen in the next updates is why I asked the question and said it should be completely avoidable.

Thats... Because the characters you mentioned (Or I assume you mentioned) are misogynists. I wrote them to be misogynistic.

I even put in a content warning at the start of the game

Please, who even bothers to read that ?? But joke aside, those big ass supernatural, paranormal tags and your usually horror-focused stories are more than specific heads-up about the kinda stuff (characters too) new players should expect to see here... there was no need for any other warnings.

for you to have gotten to the content you described, that means you played through Gadreel

To be honest, I think the killer rapist degenerate bitch is a more ear-friendly option than two ugly freaks taking their frustrations and butthurt out on an obviously braindead whore who probably can't even tell the difference between a dick and a normal sausage.

But some girls consensually doing stuff, however repulsive you may find it, thats too far?

Consensually ?? Oookk, if that's what you consider and wrote it as by figuratively, tho I wouldn't be surprised if you said it was done literally too lol, removing that female character's brain and any ounce of self-esteem she ever had you intended to make that shit sound 'consensual', more so after what those three lunatics said they wanna do to her, then more power to you, but this is where choices are needed so the players decide how disturbing or kinky the story unfolds from there onward.

Let me be clear, you absolutely do not have to play this VN. Or get to a part where you feel it takes you outside your comfort zone, and you stop playing. But I just find it extremely odd, that some ugly bastards talking about rimjobs is somehow worse than an actual demon from hell

Weird, no, clearly not, disgusting, hell yeah. And I don't remember telling you you should NOT do what you want with your story, I only said things like that should be completely optional and avoidable, since there's no mod or WT here to follow for players like me who don't exactly want to hear how two frustrated and absolutely disgusting degenerates and wastes of space on paper and that fictional Earth take their frustrations out on all those bimbo whores they find sooo repulsive BUT won't say no to fucking them, despite how much they supposedly repulse them. That's the whole point of my reply.

I will be implementing a "Purity" playthrough option at the start of a new game. This will be in 4/5, not this update I am working on currently. This will bypass a lot of the erotica and just focus on the story. I always wanted to do one of these things, so I can implement them later into "Of Birds and Bees" and "Autumn Boulevard"

Could've said that a lil earlier and spared both of us losing a few precious minutes of our time. But no, you don't have to stick to shit like actual 'purity' in a horror-themed porn game with crazy sex demons, braindead bimbos, shady ugly bastards and all that shit for obvious reasons, the only thing I wanted to find out is whether or not questionable stuff like what I already pointed out will be in the story and if it'll be optional or not.

Don't know what kinda feedback you usually get for stories like this, but you should stop generalizing and thinking that everyone, with no exception, who questions some of your decisions or what's said/done in the story wants to troll you or hurt your business, cuz speaking for myself, that's not my intention. I only wanted a few answers regarding this stuff to see if I'll keep playing the game or just delete it and move on.

 

[DiscipleOfVirginia]

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[DiscipleOfVirginia]

Besides female streamers, I also wanted to say, that I am very close to finishing all the renders for the Alpha release. So Gooning is no more allowed


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[PinkNova]

New preview I can show everyone:

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DiscipleOfVirginia, I wanted to ask do you have a place with your world lore? I got a bit lost in the last two updates of Of Birds and Bees, so was asking if there's like a website you made, or something with the world lore?

 

[DiscipleOfVirginia]

DiscipleOfVirginia, I wanted to ask do you have a place with your world lore? I got a bit lost in the last two updates of Of Birds and Bees, so was asking if there's like a website you made, or something with the world lore?

In Of Birds and Bees, there is a lore section within the game ^^ On my youtube are all the Mr Vain infomercials, except the quickfacts that I have to upload.

Been thinking of doing a Wiki lmao

 

[PinkNova]

In Of Birds and Bees, there is a lore section within the game ^^ On my youtube are all the Mr Vain infomercials, except the quickfacts that I have to upload.

Been thinking of doing a Wiki lmao

I wouldn't be against it, I was completely lost in AB at one point, but the game was hot so I kept playing, lol.

 

[PinkNova]

In Of Birds and Bees, there is a lore section within the game ^^ On my youtube are all the Mr Vain infomercials, except the quickfacts that I have to upload.

Been thinking of doing a Wiki lmao

Hey, I watched the Mr. Vain videos and read a bit on Of Birds and Bees, my only question is. Who is Lucille from Autumn Boulevard? I mean I know the other angels, (Uriel is my favorite) when reading them in Of Hallowed, Unhallowed, and Things Inbetween, but I couldn't place Lucille, since she didn't seem to fit the Vasals. Is she the Dragon/Morningstar? If so I'm a bit confused there, since you referred to the Dragon as male in Of Birds and Bees, lol. Just trying to understand the lore is all.^^

 

[DiscipleOfVirginia]

Hey, I watched the Mr. Vain videos and read a bit on Of Birds and Bees, my only question is. Who is Lucille from Autumn Boulevard? I mean I know the other angels, (Uriel is my favorite) when reading them in Of Hallowed, Unhallowed, and Things Inbetween, but I couldn't place Lucille, since she didn't seem to fit the Vasals. Is she the Dragon/Morningstar? If so I'm a bit confused there, since you referred to the Dragon as male in Of Birds and Bees, lol. Just trying to understand the lore is all.^^

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[PinkNova]

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[DiscipleOfVirginia]

New preview I posted on Twittex for next update:

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I will also mention, I am aiming to have the Alpha of 3/5 out this week, but I cannot make any promise

 

[PinkNova]

New preview I posted on Twittex for next update:

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I will also mention, I am aiming to have the Alpha of 3/5 out this week, but I cannot make any promise

GeeDee!~ My future owner, and totally NOT some ugly fat man, lol.

 

[retadrddoge]

I just finished the game and damn this game good i hope next update u show us how mc crush turn into bimbo it would be cool flashbacks and thx for game

 

[DiscipleOfVirginia]

This is the Alpha Release of "Holly Smiles at The End [3/5]" ^^ Please note, that I haven't done the animations for this update yet, nor GeeDee's hypno voice lines. Yet everything else is there

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[DiscipleOfVirginia]

Note that this version do not include the animations, and the GeeDee hypno tracks, those are currently being made ^^

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[DiscipleOfVirginia]

I posted a general info on my patreon, free for all. I want to do more free posts, but Patreon does not like nudity in the previews lmao

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[DiscipleOfVirginia]

Available now for +15 Patreon. Next release is v3 Full with all the animations and GD voice track (As this one, does not have either)

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[DrmedKane]

Cant wait what will happen to Butt-Pillow Is she in the next version?

 

[DiscipleOfVirginia]

Cant wait what will happen to Butt-Pillow Is she in the next version?

she is in concord next update

 

[DiscipleOfVirginia]

General info, publicly available on my Patreon ^^ Jist of it, I am still working on the infomercial, when that is done, I can put everything together

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