VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Home Trainer - Domestic Corruption [v0.2.1] [Deviant_smite]

Stupid story, but fun and kind of charming ; good writing, good models, good renders, quite fast paced, not struggle or difficulty; definitely a sex game / adult VN with more emphasis on sex than on game and more on adult than on novel. Shame that the dev seems to have vanished.

i forgot ive play this game, yet its abandoned but still good to take a shot
4/5 render n animation
5/5 story - the fun part is just beginning yet its hanging
well thats all i remember, if u like bdsm other stuff of simililar like that u will also love this game

Great game, hits just the right spot. Can't wait for more adventures with those two great girls. Lets push this to the next level Nina deserves it. And Ayleen needs it... bad. Anyway good game 10/10,

V 0.2.1
Seems like a pretty good game BUT i think the corruption tag is missplaced.
The Woman is like a bitch in heat with just enough selfcontroll to not beg for your cock and the girl is allready corrupted and you should merely "guide" her on a "safe" way to explore her kinks.

The only girl which could be corrupted in the future so far could be the one you meet in the cafe.

But still a nice game so far and i hope it doesnt get to far.

this looks really good, thanks, keep on pluggin away. i would like to see the little devient with slightly larger breasts. there have been complaints the she looks childish, but there are a lot of people out there like that, i know a woman who is 43 and looks 19. she looks good to me, who doesn't like Cute? the story is good so far and has promise of a long life. just don't drag it out. make a story with good content and then move on. but be sure it is Your story, don't let 'fans' move you from your vision.

Excellent porn game.

I honestly don't feel I need to go into further detail. The Aunt asks MC to fuck her daughter, this is a line in the game (warning, I used a patch, IDK if this is in vanilla, but the sentiment is there):

"I can't believe I'm sitting here, trying to convince a young guy to have his way with my daughter... Don't be such a pussy!"

And the MC is not a pussy, he's just shocked about the situation. Gets over it very quickly and the fucking starts and it never ends.

And by never ends, I mean it ends not after long because this is still a very early version of the game.

I do love it and can't wait for more!

[Rev @ v0.2.1]

Art's fine; bit too much baby fat on the girl.

Writing's good; good voice, scenario's got enough novelty to not annoy, fluency is readable. Like the characterization.

Porn's fine if light due to early dev release. Appreciate having girl characters with their own interests. Only real grip is the patch: it seems like an unneeded addition grabbed just for extra tags.

TLDR: #watched~

Excellent start, great promise. Good renders and attractive models. MC is a little on the horse-dick end of the scale but forgivable.

I'm looking forward to see where this one goes, I hope the dev can keep up the quality.

The direct approach feels refreshing. The tension is less about how long till they do something and more about how they're going to go about doing them. I'm not completely sold on everyone in the universe being the same level of extremely perverted but still felt fresh and I spent more time than I usually do actually reading the story/dialog.

Very interesting start to this one. Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here. It takes a different approach from most corruption games, but I won't spoil the story of the game here. Here's hoping that the developer continues learning and improving his work.

The potential for this game is absolutely mad, I sincerely hope the Dev is dedicated to the game and can pull it off. Selfishly i hope they avoid NTR but if its avoidable great. So far the game is great despite the little content we have

Renders are good
Story seems good
Characters are already looking great
The MC isn’t a complete twat so far which is a bonus
So far so very good

It certainly has potential, love the models they are very well done it seems like it will open up a lot once the intro is finished looking forward to seeing how the game develops over the coming months and years.

Awesome!
It may lack of freedom of significant choices, such as actions during kinky scenes, but I guess this will come!
Still, awesome scenario and game environement.

Graphics are OK, so the game have great potential!

renders look better than most
the story is very interesting and I'm very interested to see where it goes
I like the fact that Dev has said he will not be including rape and NTR.
I don't know if it's just me but just from its foundation, it has a chance to be a favorite of mine.

Like where this one is going. If there were more content i wouldn't hesitate to give this 5 stars. Nice dialog, good characters and hot models. The daughter can look a little off but is still nice. The premise of the mom letting you dom the daughter is great. Animations too which is a really plus. If you are into Male dom this looks like it could be good. Recommended

This is amazing. One of the best humor i saw in VN, right next to unfinished Milf in Time. I know most of people will think that CGs could've been better, i thought myself the same at the start too, but right now i think even CGs and models are fine, maybe not ideal, but kinda suited for the story.
The "sister" should look like that, a shy and perverted girls, as it would be hard to justify the plot and the idea that she never saw real dick in reallife. The "aunt" also cant be a bombshell, as she cant have any relationship because of all this weird shit happening in her life. So she's beautiful, but not the one who really do her make up for someone else.
So yes, the models are fit here well. Probably there could be some improvements on light and scenes, but seriously, its not the most important part of the VN, the plot are.

Really nice start to the game, it's certainly a different and rarely looked at story. The idea of the parent/guardian encouraging the corruption and the girl being a willing participant.

Looking forward to seeing how this develops and where the story goes.

Interesting start, and definitely a less seen take on the corruption path. This will be interesting to see where it goes.

While currently not having choices to affect the story, the Author has said that this release (0.1.2) is the first half of a prologue. I just hope that rival charity workers don't destroy his efforts...

As of this update
PROS
Renders are nice
Ladies are sexy
Story is good
CONS
A few black screens during conversation at dinner
Overall
This is a good VN so far. Story is very interesting. I'm happy that there wasn't an entire opening with a flashback with what brought the MC to where he is now. I'm looking forward to where things go from here. I recommend giving this one a try. Keep up the good work

There's no much to say about this game yet but it should definitely on your radar for the potential of it.

Renders - Could be better but thy're far from bad.

Models: I really like them 9/10

The few hot scenes in this update were really, really hot 10/10 for me.

Give it a try and see for yourself.