VN - Ren'Py - Homelander [Ch.4 P2] [JabbonkGames]

Love the story so far! Keep up the good work. Hard to believe it's your first game. Only complaint is the time between updates but I do understand you may be working on it solo and also life exists outside of the Internet too lol.

Good game

Love the characters.
Love the romance.
The graphics are pretty damn good. There are a few animations.

This is a story I would love to follow and see more.

@Jabbonk Thanks for the game! I hope all goes well with game development.

Love the queen, love the soldiers.
Genuinely hope for more development with Selena. I forget what the tutoring student's mother's name was. But my WORD is she the perfect MILF!!

The blacksmith is an ABSOLUTE UNIT!!!

In an interesting way, it looks like we'll meet the mc's mother. I'm not sure why the mc's father and brothers were taken out like that. They should be at least half or a quarter as special as the mc.

I recommend this! I like the game.

There isn't a lot to say, as there isn't a lot that stands out. The girls are mediocre, (and all their names are similar and I'm bad with names and I don't know who anyone is.) The sex scenes are underwhelming, the plot and writing are not special. I don't regret playing to the end up v0.03b, but I didn't get much out of it.
The only thing the game actually does wrong is the scene(s) with the queen; given her power and status, she needs to make it very clear to the protagonist that this is an offer, and he can say no without repercussions. Alternatively, he could be flirted with and teased until he shows clear interest. Otherwise it's sexual assault. Imagine if the genders were reversed...
Also, what's the deal with those two girls turning into sleepwalking (or not walking) sluts? It's, at best, poor writing. There are much better ways to have the protagonist figure out that they're interested.

One of the best ive played. I had no expectations going into this but holy shit. The characters are a hair away from being too "bimbo-ie" but I think they just pass. 10/10. 200 word requirement ignore this

Story 5/5
Renders 3/5
Animations 2/5
World 5/5
Audio 3/5

Overall great game. I like MC giga chad, not some weak wimp.
I really like the story. Sex scenes are ok, animations are average at most.
Renders are not the best, but not terrible either. Face expressions are strange sometimes.
I cannot wait for next update! Keep a good work. I ll gladly buy this game

10/10 from me. The game has an awesome fleshed out game world with interesting characters with different personalitys and sometimes even races.
I usually dont play the visual novel type games which tell a linear story but this one is actually really good.

You will have to start a romance with the princess and her mother. I dont care. Its fun and interesting. But i see a lot of people dropping the review score because they dont like that. So here is your official warning if you cant read descriptions.

If you still decide to play this game: SUCK IT UP AND STOP WHINING !

.03 Version

I love good writing. I love great backstories and plot lines. THIS STORY HAS BOTH. Deep thought went into this story. It is clearly written by someone that should or could be a novelist. (Yet, chose to do the harder route of creating a game).

Not a fan of FF sized boobs. Most Devs are either really into them or think every male on this planet is into them. No...unless it concerns "Hucows", No. This Dev delivers multiple body sizes shapes and heights. From A cups to MOOO!

Characters are diverse and wildly different from each other. Each has a backstory. So far the two LI's I like the most, have not been made available. But the Dev hints that it will be possible. Of those that are available, you can choose if they are trans/futa or all women in the beginning. Brilliant idea. In my play through there are two trans/futas available to start a fling with.

I'm not a render expert, other than playing AVNS for the last three years from F95. That being said, the people, back grounds, scenery, and effects are fantastic.

Jabbonk this is going to be an epic story! Please stick with it!!! You have loyal fans!

This is a MUST see, even in it's current form. I got lost in the story but I think it was 3-4 hours at this stage. Enjoy!!!

This game has good writing and even better renders! I found each of the girls we've seen so far quite endearing and sexy as well. This story is still in its early stages, but it seems to be shaping up into something quite interesting. Overall a great start and I can't wait to get more of it!

The game has been good and disappointing at the same time.
The story has been nice so far, but the forced romance/sex with some characters doesnt sit well with me.
Specially with ariana. Her character is pretty bland and i dont like the fact that she has to give permission to MC to date other people rather than on his own accord.
I hope the dev can actually redesign that part and let the players choose. I skipped so much of the game, because the scene was ariana was so unnecessarily long and boring.
Giving three stars only because of miranda and the queen.

It feels a little unfair to rate it so poorly having quit the game in the middle of chapter two.

I was really excited when the game told me that all romances would be optional at the beginning of the game and entirely distraught when the game initiated a romantic relationship and sexual encounter with Ariana without player input. I would even go along with it since the rest of the story was fairly enjoyable up until that point but Ariana is the one character I'd actually say "No" to. A dullard and a bore and (to my subjective standards) the least attractive of the characters.

Might try to cringe myself past the forced sex scene at some point to see if the story gets better but agency is what I look for in games as a medium.

Played up to on V0.0.3b on all woman version. Ive been trying to get into this game for a long time but postponed it because it used to say sandbox was planned and all that kind of stuff. I really hate myself for not liking this game, i have a soft spot for blondes and ive got a feeling i will like most of the content here but i hate the way its delivered.

Good stuff: Blondes!
Good Lore and writing in general, dialogues are believable and suited for characters personalities.
Game begins with the Mc being a kid and follows through until hes grow up, i liked this format instead of the classic flash backs setups.

To be improved: The way the lore is delivered, it would be better a more progressive approach instead of a massive info dump specially when you are talking about Races, places and people we dont know and probably wont come up into play until way later.
Music and sound would obviously improve the experience.

Bad stuff: Characters are boring and generic, they lack depth and quirkiness.
Forced romance on said boring characters, i wouldnt mind as much if it were a sexual thing but i had to skip cringy lines and lines about how much the MC likes "X" character while i as a player have 0 interest.

TL;DR: I would rate this 4/10, i wont try this again unless some rework is done regarding choices and player input. This looks like a game where the dev has most of the story on his mind and while the Worldbuilding is good the game is falls flat and is standard on every other aspect. Personally i didnt find it engaging enough but was interested up to the point when the forced romance and scenes started rolling, that was the end for me.
Wish the dev good luck tho, there isnt such a thing as too much long hair blondes so cheers to that.

This for up to v0.03b... Renders are nice. The model for the women are beautiful especially the glowup after the timeskip for a certain character. The plot is good (dnd/wow/midieval fanatsy-esque) Mc's dick is almost bigger than some characters are tall so that'll be funny when those scenes ever come around.The amount of content so far is a few hours which is also nice. Cant wait for more

v0.03b

Pretty good VN. It covers quite a few of my kinks and still has a decent story. Wish some of the character models hadn't changed like they did but nothing's ever going to hit on 100% of what I want and it didn't take too much away. It's still pretty new so it hasn't reached donating level for me yet but if it makes it a few more updates without things going to hell then I'm definitely in.

A mildly interesting plot.
Very few choices and not really sure that they matter.
Forced sex scenes, which is the biggest bummer because it takes a while for the story to get to this point so I've already wasted a couple hours to find out this game isn't for me.
Decent renders.

Version: 0.03

Rating: 7.5/10 (Subject to change through versions)

This game is a good bit of fun. If you like harem games then I would implore you try it out. The premise of the story is silly and tropey with MC being overpowered but once you settle in and if you can overlook that the story does get more interesting.

Characters look decent and are pretty well fleshed out for the content in the game currently. You are starting to learn backstories and begin relationships with multiple LI's. It must be said I have no connection with any LI's yet but it's still early days.

Romance for me personally is non existent here but I'm interested to see how it progress'. Being told by the main LI that they want you to fuck other people whilst they watch, on the same day you confess feelings for eachother is a MASSIVE putoff for me. Harem+Romance doesn't work for me, especially how they do it in VN's. If you deny the harem you deny yourself content and very rarely do these games add extra content if you decide to go down a 1 LI romance path. Making the story and romance, feel like a wet fart (as dev has to make equal content for all LI's)

Conclusion:

With that said, I am now approaching this as a harem game only, with no intentions of romance and trying not to let dev's decision affect my rating as truthfully it is disappointing. The game is still fun and worth a play, I am interested to see where it goes and the lore/world building is pretty cool.

My suggestion to combat my personal issues would be add a choice where Ari asks MC "Did you like what you did with the Queen" If you say NO, it engages her romance path where you are "loyal to her" perhaps you can optionally cheat later? If you say YES then it engages her voyeur dialogue the same as it currently is. Of course the story is written in a way that this would mess with it, which is a shame. Maybe it's my traditional/boring brain but that isn't my idea of romance.

Second post ever. This guy has talent. The story is rich, the characters are well developed, and the naughty is well done. I liked this guys work so much I became a patron,

You all should really check out this guys first little gem. Looking forward to what he has in store for us every subsequent release or other future projects.

The game is fantastic, just give it a shot! Renders are really well done, the girls are all hot. The story actually has some thought put behind it and the lore and magic makes sense. Plenty of options to basically customize your preferred kinks for each girl, to a point. But its just so rare to get options in general, can never go wrong with more options. Oh and lest I forget, the dialouge is real damn good as well, which is a big selling point for me as well.

An easy 5 star. Really hot models with a great variety paired with a really in depth world and a storyline that is clearly going to be very big. I really really hope the dev can keep it going because what is there so far is phenomenal.

If you like a story rich game, with good lore, then this is the game for you. I like that the game gives you the option for either girls only, or for trans/other option to gives the player the choice in this mater, and no NTR is a huge plus as all the girls so far are lovely and extremely likeable. The thing I enjoy most about the game is the length per chapter, giving players a ton of content and building chemistry with the love interest and progressing through the plot of this universe. The graphics of the game is very nice and smooth, the characters are insanely beautiful as well.

There are only two real issues for me with this game that could seem minor to others, and still find this to overall be a solid 4/5.

The first issue which really is a small nothing burger, the audio at times seemed the overlaps and was really bad at times, having more audio/music would be a benefit. The second thing, and the main reason I don't give this a 5 is, there is a lack of options through the game, an giving less control of how the MC interacts with the characters, and can have multiple interactions with no choices for us to pick from and enhance the gaming experience. Having options to have consequences/rewards for choices would make this a near perfect game for me, and I'm sure others would agree as well.

Overall I love this game, and I do love the story and lore, as a nerd who love medieval themed anything. I wish the dev good luck moving forward and hope the game continues to grow and be even better moving forward.

This a hidden gem of a game! The writing is very well done with an interesting plotline, good character development and an interesting story. I'm impressed with the pacing of both the story and the liaisons between MC and LI's. Renders are good, with some room for improvement, but if I'm being honest it actually works well with the setting for this story. Hard to describe that one I know, but it works. Very enjoyable game that leaves me wanting more after each episode so far.