VN Ren'Py Hoping for a Brighter Future [Ep.3 v0.1] [Fuuccck]

[YogSothoth1982]

Fuuccck

So Gabi and her scene are definitely mandatory?

 

[katabasi]

update this week?

 

[Yukinaoki]

Fuuccck will there be changes or improvements in the dialogue? I mean I noticed some sentences are rough and I understand perfectly since I can see in the files that your first language is Russian. I've been trying to translate the dialogue again from Russian to English and it has taken me 3 days already, because DeepL has a limit on translations per day and I'm not even half way there yet(I'm roughly at line 13700 of the script, since neither English or Russian are my first language). I'm just asking since I want to know if it's worth it for me to keep going or not. I could provide the file with the dialogue I changed so far.

 

[Fuuccck]

Fuuccck will there be changes or improvements in the dialogue? I mean I noticed some sentences are rough and I understand perfectly since I can see in the files that your first language is Russian. I've been trying to translate the dialogue again from Russian to English and it has taken me 3 days already, because DeepL has a limit on translations per day and I'm not even half way there yet(I'm roughly at line 13700 of the script, since neither English or Russian are my first language). I'm just asking since I want to know if it's worth it for me to keep going or not. I could provide the file with the dialogue I changed so far.

Yes, there will be changes. One kind person will help me correct errors in English translation.
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Yeah, share it. I'll try to translate it into your language.
Or are you correcting the English translation the same way?))

 

[Fuuccck]

update this week?

Looks like it)

 

[Yukinaoki]

Yes, there will be changes. One kind person will help me correct errors in English translation.
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Yeah, share it. I'll try to translate it into your language.
Or are you correcting the English translation the same way?))

Here's the file then, I was correcting the english yes, but since I'm not a localizer and I was using deepl, I'm constricted in a way since deepl has a daily limit for translations. I didn't get to half way anyway, it would take me another month? Maybe? And by then you would probably release the next chapter and I wouldn't have time for it. Also, in the script file there was(for my knowledge) 2 instances where the russian and english dialogue was mixed, so when you play the game in english the russian dialogue appears, in my file I fixed the first one, but I remember there's another instance where that happens. Since has you said you'll have help in correcting/translating I'll stop then.
Thanks for replying btw.

 

[DDDay]

Looks like it)

Doesn't look like it

 

[Fuuccck]

Doesn't look like it

I opened the post on Patreon. But there is no correction of the English language. My translation is probably terrible)

 

[xizaaR]

No one has posted the link so I guess I will do it then.

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[soemantri9]

Damn... From the comment the game really bad eh?

 

[Reheake]

Damn, that's too much text to justify having a toilet whore in mc's life. I expected her to be made shunned or the story rewritten, but not tons of text why she's like that, still unconvincing by the way. Why is mc attached to a slut and willing to take on problems with a dude who was going to fuck her but didn't but still wants to fuck her and now it's mc's problem. WTF. Plus every update start over, no thanks.

Черт, это слишком много текста, чтобы оправдать наличие туалетной шлюхи в жизни mc. Я ожидал что ее сделают избегаемой или перепишут историю, но не тонны текста почему она такая, все еще неубедительно, кстати. Почему mc привязывается к шлюхе и готов взять на себя проблемы с чуваком, который собирался ее трахнуть, но не трахнул, но все еще хочет трахнуть и теперь это проблема mc. WTF. Плюс каждое обновление начинать сначала, нет спасибо.

 

[IDontGetWomen]

Is there a way to override game's like this and activate rollback? Not having it is just such a dumb decision from devs.

 

[ImariKurumi]

Man, the premise and story is crazy but i'm looking forward to more. Guess i'm a freak too.

 

[ktemanuel]

spanish link

 

[SASHAKAMEN]

Damn, that's too much text to justify having a toilet whore in mc's life. I expected her to be made shunned or the story rewritten, but not tons of text why she's like that, still unconvincing by the way. Why is mc attached to a slut and willing to take on problems with a dude who was going to fuck her but didn't but still wants to fuck her and now it's mc's problem. WTF. Plus every update start over, no thanks.

Черт, это слишком много текста, чтобы оправдать наличие туалетной шлюхи в жизни mc. Я ожидал что ее сделают избегаемой или перепишут историю, но не тонны текста почему она такая, все еще неубедительно, кстати. Почему mc привязывается к шлюхе и готов взять на себя проблемы с чуваком, который собирался ее трахнуть, но не трахнул, но все еще хочет трахнуть и теперь это проблема mc. WTF. Плюс каждое обновление начинать сначала, нет спасибо.

problem is mc such a pushover towards some characters,hope in next updates we can make him unwilling cuck

Да слабохарактерный какой то гг, надеюсь хоть в следующих обновах можно будет паренька ее еще больше унизить снимая с ними порно что б он просто сидел в углу и наблюдал

 

[Lancaster Kingsman]

Is the protagonist a straight man or does he go in the direction of gay things (sucking dick, giving ass or cross-dressing as a woman)?

 

[Adoringfan]

Is there a family tree somewhere? From what I am understanding the aunt of the mc has 3 baby daddies, according to the little sister's trash talking. I assumed that they were all his cousins, but the mc refers to Amelia as the sister of Lily, who is his sister. Later, Tiffany asks about Kenny and calls him her brother. Is this one of those weird things lost in translation, where gender and certain pronouns get mixed up sometimes?

 

[tehmasta]

can't reject the bathroom whore? second boyfriend, for real? i thought telling her she's a whore would get rid of her not turn mc into a simp for some random whore he met half an hour ago.
i liked this game before but man, what a dissapointment. there goes another one from my watchlist.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Actually, mine can.