The writing in this is very wooden. Heck, characters are introduced with their 3 sizes ... one, as if you couldn't see their build?! It's a visual novel ...
Two, as if it's pertinent to their characterization down to scientific precision (same with the cock). Like, yeah, you might describe a character as slim or curvy or any combination of things, but you don't have to get out the measuring band.
And frankly all of the writing gives this sorta vibe, somehow.
Otherwise not really much to say. Art feels nicely dynamic, I guess.