VN Ren'Py Hotwife Ashley [Ch.6 v0.4] [respirit]

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respirit

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Trasher2018 said:
Ok -.- this is a quite ugly and clearly a training piece.

Dont know why there are reviews that say the renders are good in any way.

The models are ugly (the wife is okish) and the quality is horrible ...
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The writing is ... there and the story ... is there too? ..

Why does she act so cold to her husband even before there is any sharing or cuckolding?
"I cant let you penetrate me tonight, I have to work early, but you can cum on my tits." - what? o_O
Then there are several pointless - single choices like "eat", "work", "go home" ... why?

This game is highly overrated - I think even the dev knows that. It's his first game and you can see that on every aspect. But that is ok - you cant get better without trying. So keep up the work and maybe your next game will be better and I can enjoy that more.
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Thanks for your feedback, although i don't make a nice first impression on you and you clearly didn't like this project. :) I am aware that this is a beginner job compared to other games. That's why I'm doing more research to improve myself and believe me I'm working hard. You can be sure that with every update, I'll make the game a little bit better. Those bad renderings bothered me a lot, I already have a plan to update them in the next update and I'm working on it. I hope you enjoy some of the next updates, I wish you a good day and thanks for your honest feedback. :)
 
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The game won't start. I don't get why but I try to open it and the renpy window appears and then closes.
 
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markoolio said:
The game won't start. I don't get why but I try to open it and the renpy window appears and then closes.
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I am sorry to hear that. There must be a problem with your hardware. Make sure you download the correct version and i would like to point out that the "compressed" version has not been published by me.
 
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markoolio said:
The game won't start. I don't get why but I try to open it and the renpy window appears and then closes.
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I have been able to play normally, probably is something to do with your computer. Have you unistalled or installed something who may lead to an error? Are other renpy games giving the same error or just this one?
 
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Wife is FUGLY. It's ok when IRL you're half drunk and will plow any pussy but not possible to fap to this. And it's not even well written or thought out. And before dev gets bhz, this is constructive criticism. Make a good product and I'll surely pledge.
 
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respirit said:
And i look forward for feedbacks. :)
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Not bad. First chapter was abit rough with visuals but i've read your improveing the first chapter which is great. I kinda like the not as attractive wife packing afew pounds look. Generally don't see many games that risk a less attractive model for the main love interest, reminds me of "My Emily" in that regard. Not the only thing that reminds me of My Emily. The posting images and BBC dildo living room scene in particular.

Curious if you took inspiration from My Emily?
Finally we might have a worthy successor as long as animations stay like chapter 2 or keep getting better and improve as you go.

Cant wait to see whats in store. Being a Hotwifing game will we be seeing or be able to get Ashley a ankle bracelet at some point to add to that fetish or is that a tough ask with accessory model clipping right now?

Keep it up and good luck.
 
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Big Black Banana said:
Not bad. First chapter was abit rough with visuals but i've read your improveing the first chapter which is great. I kinda like the not as attractive wife packing afew pounds look. Generally don't see many games that risk a less attractive model for the main love interest, reminds me of "My Emily" in that regard. Not the only thing that reminds me of My Emily. The posting images and BBC dildo living room scene in particular.

Curious if you took inspiration from My Emily?
Finally we might have a worthy successor as long as animations stay like chapter 2 or keep getting better and improve as you go.

Cant wait to see whats in store. Being a Hotwifing game will we be seeing or be able to get Ashley a ankle bracelet at some point to add to that fetish or is that a tough ask with accessory model clipping right now?

Keep it up and good luck.
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Thanks for your kind feedback, my answer is yes, many people wanted me to play "My Emily". So i did and it inspired me in some ways. Glad you liked it.

ant007 said:
Is there any news about the update of this great game?
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In the next update, %80 of the renders from the first chapter will be re-rendered and there will be additional content so it takes some time. Thanks for your patience.
 
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respirit said:
In the next update, %80 of the renders from the first chapter will be re-rendered and there will be additional content so it takes some time. Thanks for your patience.
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Good news (the pics was a bit grainy), so i suppose that there will be to start a new game, right?
 
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Chapter 2 v1.0

- Chapter 2 completed.
- Rasheed's model has been replaced for a better one.
- Most bad renders in Chapter 1 have been re-rendered and replaced with new ones.
- Some minor typos have been fixed.
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Hi,
Nice improvement over v0.6 - keep on this path ;)

-Technically and if you continue on the Hotwife exclusive path - this game is NOT Ntr.

site definition: Ntr [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]

Considering the husband wants his wife to have other partners there is no jealousy hence no Ntr.

(there would be Ntr if you were to add another path for the husband's attitude toward his wife's lovers - like if he asked her to stop and she would refuse - or if she said she would stop and actually would not.)

(I love nitpicking)
;)
 
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Chelielz said:
Hi,
Nice improvement over v0.6 - keep on this path ;)

-Technically and if you continue on the Hotwife exclusive path - this game is NOT Ntr.

site definition: Ntr [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]

Considering the husband wants his wife to have other partners there is no jealousy hence no Ntr.

(there would be Ntr if you were to add another path for the husband's attitude toward his wife's lovers - like if he asked her to stop and she would refuse - or if she said she would stop and actually would not.)

(I love nitpicking)
;)
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Thank you for your feedback. I'm sure my content counts as NTR since "Cuckold" or a few more detailed tags count as "NTR". I can say that MC, as a fantasy, enjoys the jealousy his wife creates for him, and he seeks to see it. This is obvious from the beginning of the story and we will see this more clearly in the rest of the story. Thanks for your feedback again anyway.
 
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is this a game where you can choose if you want to be sub or dom? am a sub my self :) am soory for bothering you :)
 
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Here is the Italian translation
of Hotwife Ashley [Ch.4 v1.0 Public]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana
di un fan Hotwife Ashley [Ch.4 v1.0 Public]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

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Here is the Italian translation
of Hotwife Ashley [Ch.4 v0.8 Public]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana
di un fan Hotwife Ashley [Ch.4 v0.8 Public]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

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