- Aug 16, 2017
- 499
- 534
the dream sequence of fucking the sister was good.
the dialogue is pretty well written aside from some spelling and word mistakes.
at one point the MC was talking instead of the maid which was odd and the text changed format. kills the continuity....don't hire this dev to film ya movie
its not half bad but I didn't find any evidence of group sex, lesbian or titfuck despite the tags. must be in some choices I missed cos theres no way someone would tag it unless the content is actually here right?
the dialogue is pretty well written aside from some spelling and word mistakes.
at one point the MC was talking instead of the maid which was odd and the text changed format. kills the continuity....don't hire this dev to film ya movie
its not half bad but I didn't find any evidence of group sex, lesbian or titfuck despite the tags. must be in some choices I missed cos theres no way someone would tag it unless the content is actually here right?