Coding can go very wrong, a tip from a naive guy that knows nothing, keep yourself organized within the files or the bug hunt will be a Nightmare
If you keep scenes to short it will feel as if you have no character development, you have to find the sweet spot between reasonable short and enough story and character development if you want it to give a good player experience.
Most games lake the character development part, for myself I do not like "get out of bed, flirt three times with your sister, then fuck her 20 different ways." not what I want in a game.
Repetitive gameplay is also a factor, I do not mind a bit but if you have to much people will start feeling bored with it very quickly.
But of course that is only my opinion and like I said I wish you good luck and positive responses