Maxirox

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
She would a great main LI with MC and her relationship with her daughter by knowing that MC and her daughter are in love, you can make her fall in love with MC like his willingness to help others and His Dad can't satisfy Linda always away on buisness trip or some other ways as stated by others above erectile dysfunction and other way which would be great we are in chapter 15 but nothing with LINDA till now, that's what what fans want and would love to see MC make love to her and make her his in next chapter 16. Thank you for taking feedback from fans.
 

S1nsational

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
Being forced or not is entirely avoidable depending on time frame.
Trying to get her and MC together while in the human world would feel rushed.

But there's no way for MC to stay in the human world long term. Many of the people he loves and cares about live in the magical world and couldn't ever hope to live in the human world. So of course even beyond the liberation plan MC would have to move to that world. MCs harem from the human world would all delightedly follow him to the other world.

So Linda has to face to reality that her son and daughter are both going to leave for another world, and that she might never see them again, or only very rarely once they're gone. That or she'd have to move with them.

If Linda's husband doesn't migrate along with the rest of the family, Linda's dynamic with MC could easily being to be changed once everyone is living in the magic world.

The only potential problems I can see with his is how long you intent the story to be and where it would end.

If you only have MC and his harem migrate after the liberation and towards to end of the game, then yea you wouldn't be able to really build much of a romantic relationship between her and MC.
 

hpshi

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
hmm that is a tough one but i do think she should be a love interest due to high demand and due to the fact that i suspect you wish to keep the real mom as a mom without turning her into a love interest (although to be fair it would be easier then Linda as she has no husband and came from another world, one of which rules can be that incest is not frowned upon, should you decide to write it that way), as to making Linda a love interest, the hard part is getting the dad out of the way, that can be done by either:
1. splitting them up - say he is against Layla and the mc getting together and Linda is supportive which grows to a conflict which airs out everything, and they divorce, which makes linda avalible, should the mc step into the role.

2. cuck him - he realize he cant preform as he used to and when the mc confess that he knows they are not the real parents the dad comes up with the idea to experiment and plead with his son to try and help. i would suggest a blindfold scene followed by sharing and then either giving the players the choice between having the dad stay or leave the room, or that by having seeing another man fuck his wife he start to realize he is gay (i mean it has happened before soo..).

3. kill him - i personally don't like this option as a kind dad who's alive is rare in those games, but you can do it and it could impact more then the family's dynamics, it could have a lasting effect on the plot, the mc's character and worldview (say for example he begins to see his relationships differently now he knows the weight of loss), and highlight the dangers of bringing other humans to the other world (as i imagine it would take place there, by turgon).

it is important to note that in each scenario linda would probaby need to be written diffrantly as she is affected by the outcome (i think the option that involves the least change is the divorce one) but anyway that is my advice (and hope)
 

Sugoda77

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
Almost every VN struggles the balance with too many love interests. I think this game is stacked as it is, especially after the introduction of his twin sister Rose. There's still several women in the other dimension like Paz he's never got with as well as the blonde elf he fooled around with but never had sex. That feels like years ago that happened and still no payoff with that.

Then there's the other class mates in his world. I certainly wouldn't mind an encounter with Linda but would just love more time with Miriel and Layla.
 

Een Vieze Vent

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
Isn't easy? just kill off the fake dad like any normal decent harem dev would do.

Also make the REAL mom redeem herself so Herrera, Norman Knight, Chandler aka Ned, BT, Crimsonfiend will love her.

Also don't pull a Max's Life.
 

herreraaa

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
It's a haremcest game
You don't need a REAL reason to make her a LI, so

- Make stepdad gay
- Make stepdad suggest stepmom should open her mind for the idea since he's a limp dick

It shouldn't be difficult since the NO NTR rule is already gone with MC elf friend(banging a girl he likes) and blacksmith's husband
 
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Acerius

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
Hey, since you're open to ideas, I had a thought on how to handle the Linda and MC situation without it feeling like a messy betrayal. The trick is to give the MC a secret, justifiable reason to act.

Here's the setup: The MC accidentally overhears the dad talking to someone else he's actually in love with. The critical piece of information he learns is that the dad is already planning to ask for a divorce. The dad says he's "waiting for the kids to move out to not break the family dynamics," or that he "will talk to his wife soon to find a solution." This doesn't necessarily mean he's already cheating, just that he's waiting for the right time. He's stuck and doesn't want to hurt Linda or the deep friendship they have developed over the years, as he still loves her platonically.

So, the MC now knows the marriage is basically over, even if Linda doesn't. He sees how lonely she is and decides to show her she's still wanted. Things naturally will heat up between them in secret. This still allows the risky feeling of the secret relationship and excitement for Linda before all is revealed to her, but players will understand the MC isn't truly stealing her away. He's just helping her move on from a relationship that's already finished. He's not breaking up a happy home; he's helping her get ready for a truth that's already on its way.
 

Wolfeszorn

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
Dad is closet gay could be an Option. Their sex life is non existent which could be explained through his interest in men for example.
 
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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
I'm not a developer yet, but I can share my perspective as a player on what we would appreciate in the story.

Emotional to Romantic Transition
First, begin with Linda confiding in the MC about her personal challenges, frustrations, or dreams. This will foster mutual vulnerability and trust between them. Then, develop scenes where Linda feels genuinely understood, appreciated, or supported by the MC in ways her husband no longer provides. Over time, allow Linda’s emotional attachment to evolve naturally into subtle romantic tension. Use moments like meaningful glances, accidental touches, or shared laughter to build intimacy gradually.

Building Toward Physical Connection
Once strong emotional and romantic chemistry has been established, introduce scenes where Linda becomes conscious of her attraction to the MC. This can be revealed through her thoughts, reactions, or even hesitation. It is important to respect her internal conflict, Linda may struggle with guilt or uncertainty, but a gradual mutual attraction and emotional closeness will make any physical intimacy believable and impactful.


This approach is very sensible. Starting with emotional intimacy makes Linda’s romantic involvement with the MC feel genuine, and only then moving toward physical connection creates a much more believable and relatable relationship.

Gradually, as Linda finds herself emotionally closer to the MC, she could begin to experience confusion, excitement, and longing that naturally evolves into romantic feelings. This deepening bond will make any eventual physical connection feel earned and powerful rather than abrupt or contrived.
 

TKdropemoff

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Hi there,
As for Mc, you'll see that everything will become clearer in the next chapter. As for Linda, honestly, we're still evaluating it. Making her an LI won't be easy without making things seem too forced. If you have any suggestions, we'd be happy to listen and consider them. Thank you.
this might sound harsh, but just kill off the fake dad dev?? See this is the reason why the "dead dad" thing is such a running joke when it comes to harem games.. To avoid stuff like this by not making it over complicated. If you are teasing linda, that's just like tossing a steak to a pack of wolves, and not expecting them to eat it.

I for one would love Linda as a LI. Not only does it makes sense, But it is easier to intergrade than you think. You pretty much already got it setup that Linda and her husband is not sexually active...

That the "dad" can't get it up anymore. So you already got the seeds planted. It don't got to be "forced" per say. You can build it up. She is already sexually frustrated as well. Have the MC rail her in, which could also help with her accepting seeing MC being with his "sister" as well. Even tho eventually the mc will have to to tell them they are not related by blood.

But we can cross that bridge when it's time. But till then, you can still use this as moving gear. Also I don't want any "approval" by the husband. That is just sharing at the end of the day. And it can get this great game tagged for that. And like someone else said, dream scenes are a waste of time as well. Also most people don't have an issue with "NETORI" AKA the mc doing the cucking.

Also you can also make the "dad" gay?? Like he is no longer attracted to women as much as he is attracted to men. This could be a reason why their marriage is falling apart, which could lead to them splitting... And the MC can just be the MAN she needs to comfort her and help her get through this tough time she's having. *wink wink*

At the end of the day, It's a harem game.. You don't need to overthink it when it comes to this imo.... That don't mean it cannot make sense.. But you don't need to overcomplicate it.

Since you are asking for suggestions, I hope you highly consider making her apart of MC's harem... She is too hot and will be a waste imo.
 

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No to killing off the dad and no to making him gay. What would that do to Layla? Or the Mom? Or the MC for that matter, he grew up with that man as his father that he could not see. As far as the game has informed us, they are a very happy family. Now the Dad having ED, or a hormonal imbalance from his vasectomy, or just the decrease in testosterone as he has aged and he has lost interest in sexual relations as a whole, not just with his wife could be an option. No "I have been cheating with a man", or a woman and "I want a divorce" stuff. That still hurts the members of the family.

The parents know that they are not the MC's real parents. Maybe when his real mom and sister get introduced to the family and the relationship with Layla and all the other girls come out, there can be a magic world reason why all the girls have fallen for him, some mystical reason he needs to breed all these women for the good of the world, Layla's mom could come clean about her urges toward her "son" too and the dad can admit that he cannot satisfy her the way she needs and let them be together sexually. For the good of both worlds, of course.

The MC was born to save the world, which is why he has been hunted and hidden in another world until he grew old enough to put his magic cock to use.
 
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S1nsational

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No to killing off the dad and no to making him gay. What would that do to Layla? Or the Mom? Or the MC for that matter, he grew up with that man as his father that he could not see. As far as the game has informed us, they are a very happy family. Now the Dad having ED, or a hormonal imbalance from his vasectomy, or just the decrease in testosterone as he has aged and he has lost interest in sexual relations as a whole, not just with his wife could be an option. No "I have been cheating with a man", or a woman and "I want a divorce" stuff. That still hurts the members of the family.

The parents know that they are not the MC's real parents. Maybe when his real mom and sister get introduced to the family and the relationship with Layla and all the other girls come out, there can be a magic world reason why all the girls have fallen for him, some mystical reason he needs to breed all these women for the good of the world, Layla's mom could come clean about her urges toward her "son" too and the dad can admit that he cannot satisfy her the way she needs and let them be together sexually. For the good of both worlds, of course.

The MC was born to save the world, which is why he has been hunted and hidden in another world until he grew old enough to put his magic cock to use.
The dad being gay wouldn't be a problem for the rest of the family at all. It'd cause a divorce sure, but an amicable one. The dad didn't cheat and only realized we was gay later in life. The mom isn't at fault and learns it has nothing to do with her not be attractive anymore etc. The children are adults, they're not going to be hurt by their parents splitting up when it'd make both of them happier.

MC wasn't born for any reason. He was just born.
 

Malbolzcha

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i'm confused by the ending dialog this chapter. mc asks himself if he should tell layla that they're not really siblings. i could swear earlier in the game she was talking to her friends about liking him and it was ok cause they werent really related but poeple would still think its weird cause every1 thinks that they are
 

cosmicv1

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Hey, this game looks interesting. I just have a question, how is the harem like in this game? At this point in the game, do the women know that they are in a harem and accepts that they are in a harem? Is there actual romantic relationship progress and does the Mc take the time to keep his harem happy with them knowing that they are in a harem? I don't mind at all if the game is a slow burn or not, I just don't want to read about constant relationship drama that never gets solve.

I want it to actually feel like a real harem, where the Mc has official multiple girlfriends at the same time. It's just not to my taste when a harem game has the Mc be annoyingly dense about the women's feelings, or that the Mc be with multiple love interests and the love interests never interacts with each other and the Mc never mentions that he is with other women, or there's no actual romance and just sex. I especially just find it a bore when the Mc can't deal with the jealously of the love interests and it's just constant drama and fighting. I just don't find the love interests having constant jealous spats with each other entertaining at all. I also really hate it when harem games just has a bunch of casual sex or friends with benefits and little to no romance, I don't care for sex scenes at all, I'd rather actual romance progression.
 
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