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Public version is out.
- Chapter 4 part 1/2
- 800 renderings
- 10 000 words
Have fun!
- Chapter 4 part 1/2
- 800 renderings
- 10 000 words
Have fun!
Is there a H-scene in this update or is there no sexual content yet?
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Thanks. And yes, you're right about the proofreading. I will keep in mind your suggestion to send you a DM. There is also a channel in my discord for reporting grammar errors. I'm not asking to report them all, but just one or two of the most problematic ones might help a lot I think...Great update! I enjoyed the story. You do need a proofreader though. Maybe DM me before release? Please put the "landlady" in one of your future polls as well.
Also, given what happened at the end of this chapter, there's a potential good story arc of Saki viewing her father's ideals in a new light.
You’re totally right. It’s done!And please don't forget about your game page on itch
I see alot of people bitching about the no sex stuff but i actually like the slow approach more. Gives more time for character development and more impactful scenes. Also like the idea of a girl per chapter so nothing feels rushed. Like FALL OF THE ANGELS is a game i really like for its fight scenes and world but i hate the every girl wants to instantly fuck you and theirs like 30 of them which was corney to me and rushed. I think its also smart of the dev to focus on a few girls to give them depth and make the viewer more invested in them rather then add alot of them that all feel and act the same with a different skin. I was worried about the MC being another sailor moon guy like OUT OF TOUCH but after this 1/2 chapter im excited to see how creative the dev makes the MC and his unknown powers. OUT OF TOUCH amazing game just not a fan of bitch MCs who conquer all with power of love and friendship lol. Overall im enjoying this game and best wishes to the dev.