not a bad game. writing is decent, though not great. translation is ok too. in English, at least, didn't check the other languages.
seems it will end in the next update, so it's s short game too.
MC is the only virgin in the game. all the girls are pretty experienced. it's not a bad thing in itself, but we all know some members here that will find fault in that
Chloe could have been one, by the way she was presented.
We don't really know what happened between Chloe and MC in the past that drove them apart that much. is it just MC letting himself go into maximum procrastination? Chloe gave up on him and got a boyfriend, and tons of sex before breaking up for no reason except making herself single and sex starved for the plot?
Bella is supposed to have a boyfriend, but we never see him, and she behaves like she is completely single. even as she is part of the harem, she still didn't break up with him... was there some kind of planned netori scene that was cut from the game ?
Same for Annabel (or Annabelle as she is sometimes written as), where is her husband? the "father" of the kids. they never mention him at all. did he leave or is he dead?
honestly, MC was not that fat, and the new him is not that muscular or handsome at all. he just went from "chubby" to "not as chubby as before", there was no reason for Chloe to notice. the new hair style helps a bit, but it's not dramatic.
a change as extreme as in "Masamune-kun's revenge" could have been funnier.
there is no right way. you're just used to one way and hate having to change your habits...
you didn't even go past the first few renders, not even the first scene, or you wouldn't have made that comment about it. and capitalization doesn't matter, even if the dev didn't use it, in Renpy there is an easy way to change capitalization of variables on the fly.
also the difference between mom and mother doesn't matter. it's just personal preference.
you can actually choose what you want. there is not a single shred of doubt as to what the real relationship is between all characters. you can just name it to your own preference. it can limit the writing quality, as it won't allow stylistic freedom and vocabulary changes, but it's not like the average writing quality in incest games is that high anyway.
if the next update is really the last one, then I don't think it will happen.