You could have made this a lot better by making it a lot shorter. We don't need to keep replaying "oh no, the dog is acting more dominant and becoming more aggressive! Better "calm it down!"" A half-dozen times in a row. We also don't need characters going "surely they're not going to do X" after we see them do X a dozen times. It's boring, and it gets people to just hold down the skip button to finally get to something new. It doesn't help that the game is huge in size, and seems like it was either written in part or whole by AI.
Speaking of, almost every single scene that starts with "The she suddenly remembers Ann" should be removed. Either show the whole flashback and set up the rest of the story, or delete the rest of it past the first couple flashback scenes. The rest jerk you around and stop the story from ever progressing one way or the other, and at a point I was skipping all of them because I did not care for the story to take breaks when it almost seemed like it was going somewhere.