Huh, quite enjoyable overall, and I'm digging the Illusion Koi-fish-whatever art thing (cell shading I assume?). Models are very nice, although I'm an ass man so I guess I'm biased. Mmm Zoe and Sophia...
Story's well done for the most part, and the humor, when present, did its job. I laughed more than I should have at the dig at SolValley's MC being an ugly motherfucker.
One thing that annoyed me though, is the constant "I can't do that with Zoe!" crap the MC and Mila are constantly going on about. I mean, I incestualized (apparently that's actually a word) their relationships (obviously
), but it's really overdone. The MC comments on how nice Zoe's ass is on day 1. There's no point in having an inner-monologue discussion with himself about how wrong it is EVERY fucking time. Makes even less sense after she's been sucking him off. You've crossed the line by that point buddy, may as well embrace it.