HTML Abandoned Hung Kong [v0.1.3] [Puyi]

[JmTrad]

Where is the second book? for the quest and wife of Mr. Downing

idk about the second book but to meet Mr. Downing Wife you need to met him in the school bathroom and later go to the sex toy shop.

 

[Puyi69]

There is some particular phrasing that is really noticeable! The idea of having a political stat also isn't really a common occurrence but it could also be a coincidence lol

Edit: I'd also advise focusing on a fully made event/place with each update rather than trying to sprawl, even if it sounds opposite to an open-world

Nah, you caught me, it's not a coincidence, the political stuff is directly inspired by/lifted from DE and yes, I don't really have that much content planned for near future outside of what is already laid down. I wanna add a nightclub soon, but besides that, the main goal is to add more stuff and storylines for already established characters, make underused places like the Police Station and City Hall functional and serve a bigger purpose (I got storylines planned for them, but they're gonna take more time to implement)

 

[Puyi69]

I like the game so far. Shows promise and potential. I do think that for a sissification game, the MC taking a dildo up the bum and accepting being a slut is too sudden. I would prefer having some kind of build up to that. I also wish the sub character portrait was more attractive instead of being pathetic, but that's just me. Hoping for more SPH content and more dialouge options thar reflect this (As a sub, when you pay for a blowjob, it's generic and not reflective of your playstyle choice)

Also noticed the homage to the Company with Sophia Dee being your mom and the contrasting anime girl serving as the imaginary guide for the game. Will be keeping my eye out for any future updates. Good luck!

Gotta plead "guilty" on The Company, that game is the holy grail of Twine porn games, it's the one I surely spent most time playing, so it felt appropriate. Also, you're not the only one who thinks the change is too sudden, so I'm halving the dominance decrease in the hotfix coming out... today, whenever I'm done changing the gifs into something more compressed .

 

[Sorreah]

Gotta plead "guilty" on The Company, that game is the holy grail of Twine porn games, it's the one I surely spent most time playing, so it felt appropriate. Also, you're not the only one who thinks the change is too sudden, so I'm halving the dominance decrease in the hotfix coming out... today, whenever I'm done changing the gifs into something more compressed .

So random question...uh...how do I get the mom to spank me? Can I do that while keeping a good relationship with her? Cus I kinda wanna be her boy toy and spankings are hot, but I'm not so good at doing things to piss her off (I already found the CD and her adventures and stuff with dad and not dad)

 

[NateGrey]

*sigh* Last time I believed the dev about ntr avoidability. Already in the freaking tutorial with Hinata you get unavoidably cucked. And this whole scene feels dumb af, especially when you start as a fully dom character. All the mood ruined from the start. Don't really see what was the problem to make it as choice whether you even want to know about sub events if you don't intend to play any of them anyway, like me...

So now we have someone complaining they got cucked because their imaginary friend was fucked?

I had a quick play of it, I like the writing and it had some good and interesting scenes. My amount of money got bugged at some point so I couldn't buy anything, and in any case I'm not a big fan of having to click for every mundane thing, like buying and eating food. At the start it seemed like you could pick some background choices, but it just listed all the choices without being able to pick any. I think it was also due to that that I had zero knowledge so got mocked by whoever I ate lunch with All in all seems like a good one, just not sure it's for me due to the high sandbox structure.

 

[Sorreah]

Meanwhile the game:

"As a fragment of your imagination, your relationship with Hinata always reflects your opinion of yourself and your desires. In practical terms, if you are a happy dominant, she will always appear as a loyal friend, whereas if you're a submissive, she will fuck others while denying you".

Seems like you completely missed the point of my "complaint".
idk how it works for you, but I just don't like being lied to...

For someone complaining and quoting things, why are you not quoting the part "its an example to teach you the mechanics of the game" and the whole "getting cucked" portion was to let you know the difference between how scenes play out? You didn't get lied to, you had to sit through a tutorial, and then want to whine on here and misrepresent the experience.

So now we have someone complaining they got cucked because their imaginary friend was fucked?

I had a quick play of it, I like the writing and it had some good and interesting scenes. My amount of money got bugged at some point so I couldn't buy anything, and in any case I'm not a big fan of having to click for every mundane thing, like buying and eating food. At the start it seemed like you could pick some background choices, but it just listed all the choices without being able to pick any. I think it was also due to that that I had zero knowledge so got mocked by whoever I ate lunch with All in all seems like a good one, just not sure it's for me due to the high sandbox structure.

^this, dev, you really need to add an option to buy multiple amounts of food. Especially if we have to cook recipes and stuff. If I'm going to be cooking recipes, I'm gonna want enough ingredients for a week. At least make a "buy 1 weeks worth of ingredients" or something button if you can't do a manual quantity entry.

 

[riadhloch]

The problem's on my part, sorry, I miswrote the code. I'll be releasing a hotfix in a couple of hours that will fix it, along with the EUHKSA problem.

There's another job bug. If the player works at Botha, once they finish their day they end up at Zhang Chicken & Noodles as if they were working in the kitchen there, not at the player's father's company.

 

[Puyi69]

There's another job bug. If the player works at Botha, once they finish their day they end up at Zhang Chicken & Noodles as if they were working in the kitchen there, not at the player's father's company.

Oh, thanks, how did I miss that. Thanks for pointing it out!

 

[Puyi69]

So now we have someone complaining they got cucked because their imaginary friend was fucked?

I had a quick play of it, I like the writing and it had some good and interesting scenes. My amount of money got bugged at some point so I couldn't buy anything, and in any case I'm not a big fan of having to click for every mundane thing, like buying and eating food. At the start it seemed like you could pick some background choices, but it just listed all the choices without being able to pick any. I think it was also due to that that I had zero knowledge so got mocked by whoever I ate lunch with All in all seems like a good one, just not sure it's for me due to the high sandbox structure.

Hi, glad you liked it, could you please tell me what bugged the amount of money? I'm working on a hotfix right now.

 

[Puyi69]

*sigh* Last time I believed the dev about ntr avoidability. Already in the freaking tutorial with Hinata you get unavoidably cucked. And this whole scene feels dumb af, especially when you start as a fully dom character. All the mood ruined from the start. Don't really see what was the problem to make it as choice whether you even want to know about sub events if you don't intend to play any of them anyway, like me...

It's a dream on a plane, no one gets cucked for real, and only serves to show how both sex scenes work. Also, there's an option to skip the sex tutorial entirely for this exact reason, so that no one has to go through something they don't want (it's the only "sex scene", in the loosest possible sense of that word, in the game where your dominance and other stats don't affect how it plays out). So just go ahead and skip it, and I promise you, if you keep your dominance high and other stats in check, no one will touch your partner in the whole game again.

Also, minor point, but Hinata isn't meant at any point to be your girlfriend, or be taken as such - she just showcases a sex scene where you're not in charge (that's why, if you've noticed, you're not actually humiliated in the scene like a cuckold or some other sub would). She's just there to explain stuff during the tutorial, and then disappears for good.

 

[Sorreah]

Because it doesn't make any difference for me.

The cause of what's happening doesn't change the fact of it's happening. And I'm not sure how I can "misrepresent" my own experience. You're forgetting that people may have various experiences of the same event depending on their mindset, perception ect.

For me it felt pretty much like: I was told one thing, then for whatever reason it turned out to be a lie... You had it other way, I get it, lucky for you, enjoy the game...

Guy, there is no lie. You're waaaaaaaay too sensitive. The TUTORIAL literally tells you this is the Dom scene, this is what is expected to happen during a dom scene, how you have to do things for the scene to get you "skills" and "points". Then, it gave you the Sub example, how it plays out differently, how you're the one being acted on instead of the actor. There isn't choices, but what you do to earn points in that mode.

You couldn't handle a tutorial telling you mechanics. end of story. It's 100% misrepresentation to say you were lied to without saying "btw, this is a tutorial explaining how the game works through examples".

Edit: for real, if you can't handle a tutorial that explained a mechanic that you never had to concern yourself with there after because you are "that macho", just leave the site completely. You need therapy, not porn.

 

[Puyi69]

So random question...uh...how do I get the mom to spank me? Can I do that while keeping a good relationship with her? Cus I kinda wanna be her boy toy and spankings are hot, but I'm not so good at doing things to piss her off (I already found the CD and her adventures and stuff with dad and not dad)

Sorry, not possible - yet. There's another storyline with her coming up (already wrote it, but it's gonna take time to implement), but as of now, you can only get spanked when you piss her off.

 

[riadhloch]

Oh, thanks, how did I miss that. Thanks for pointing it out!

Certainly.

Also, there doesn't seem to be a way to quit the prostitute job. In fact, if I may make a request: let the player work all four jobs simultaneously? It'll break up the grind by allowing for flexibility and fewer clicks to swap between jobs.

 

[Puyi69]

Thanks for the answer. I know you can skip it, but that's kinda the point. I liked the idea of banging your imaginary friend. When I first seen her, I was like: "Hmm, I wonder if I somehow get to fuck her". And then when you get to do that, you "get cucked" or whatever you wanna call it, right after. As I said in my first post, it just ruins the whole dom mood for me, and if it was a choice instead to skip only the sub part of tutorial it would be better, imao.

p.s. btw if she disappears for good after the intro, then why she even has a profile in the notebook and what was that about her reflecting your opinion of yourself, your desires, and etc.?

I've got an idea on how to implement her later (specifically through dreams and maybe drugs), but none of that is in the game yet. So basically, it's groundwork for later.

 

[NateGrey]

Hi, glad you liked it, could you please tell me what bugged the amount of money? I'm working on a hotfix right now.

Sorry, I can't exactly recall. I remember I received some money (not the 500 from the parents, and not from an actual job) and that made the amount mess up.

 

[putzseila]

I think the best advice we can give you for your first project is to be careful not to explore everything at once. The main thing that differentiates a good game from just any game is the depth of the plot and characters.
The fact that you're already willing to listen to us is already a very positive aspect of the project's success (don't worry too much about unfounded criticism).
Good luck with the project, I'll be following it closely.

 

[Sorreah]

Just chill, dude... Are you sure I'm the one who needs therapy?

I'm not the one crying over a tutorial. I'm a hardcore sub, yet I had to sit through a scene where I had to rough fuck her, should I be outraged and crying about being lied to?

 

[Puyi69]

Certainly.

Also, there doesn't seem to be a way to quit the prostitute job. In fact, if I may make a request: let the player work all four jobs simultaneously? It'll break up the grind by allowing for flexibility and fewer clicks to swap between jobs.

That's right, there's isn't supposed to be one yet - the idea is that once you've got mixed up with the Triads, in whatever capacity, you cannot leave. And about the request, I might rework the job system later, not ruling that out, but for now, I want to keep it as it is for the sake of some semblance of realism - apart from prostitution, you can leave any of them and then get them back again, so that it won't limit you.

 

[Sorreah]

Well, Idk about being outraged and crying, but you definitely can just post a comment that you don't like it and suggest an alternative. This is what feedback is about.
I agree my first post sounds a bit rude because... well because I was a little annoyed and frustrated.
You prob won't understand as sub, but It sometimes can be really hard to find a game when you can just relax and play dom without "optional" sub and cuck stuff being pushed in you face constantly...

You're way wrong, but you sound better at least and are communicating better here, so I'll leave here. I hope things work out for you, honestly.

 

[Danny tofu]

I think leaving the Church Job is bugged