Interesting game. I think the Writing is decent and mostly in character which is a big plus. Of course the UI could be better and provide more feedback. Its serviceable as is but it would be nice if instead of a small black arrow on the bottom of your screen (next to a black lamp and couch that blends with it it) when you finish dialogue if instead it was a more noticeable color and more in the center of the screen. Otherwise despite the somewhat shaky basic setup I think you got something solid here. Needs more tightening and a clear UI.
I did very much enjoy the poses you did for the intro sections. Ruby is scared at first so her arms are inward and body hunched, Weiss angrily intrudes on you to assert herself, leaning over your desk into your vision, Blake is very Composed and formal, only breaking her stoic act to drink tea, Yang knows what up and despite her fairly casual facade and desk pose, she make an effort her protect her sister and team by using her sex appeal. This excellent character direction (Along with the decent dialogue fluff) gives me the confidence that you understand the characters and setting which of course is very important. Also I found a lot of the bonus pictures quite cute. You have a decent, solid concept here. Just need needs to be refined and expanded, mainly the UI.
