Well the art is very good, i read early comments and i will get to that,
1st of all you create a middle eastern woman so don't use "grace" as the name. it messes up everything if you don't want conflicts in it
2nd is that i read ppl encourage you to go out of your comfort zone, i disagree, why changing something already smooth and good, imagine messing things and only you will feel the negative impact, if this isn't your fun and hubby then do it in a way you are pro in it. its like a rapper releasing a rock album if you get my point of view
3rd is that as a western who lived in Islamic country for a while i don't see that plot catchy, i know its unique but i feel smoother version of it would be more pleasant for me at least.
4th, best of luck, wish you success to the hilt