Hello.
The banner made me come. And while I'm not interested in sissification, the result was correct.
The worldbuilding is limited but enough.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is common.
The samples are unequal.
Like I was saying, though the theme isn't for me, the game is well done but very short. Furthermore, the change is coming from the MC and not forced by someone else, which could make me want to try it again at some point.
You're really good at writing, though some sentences are repetitive like here :
or there :
There's no character who has any redeeming quality (the sister, the girlfriend and the bully are all jerks, without talking about Steve). Even the MC is too much.
The images seem well chosen but the difference between the initial image of the MC and the one after transforming is too radical. Something more progressive could have been better.
For the third job as a burger flipper, there's no end of content warning.
By the way, our stats and relationship points should appear somewhere.
Good continuation.
The banner made me come. And while I'm not interested in sissification, the result was correct.
The worldbuilding is limited but enough.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is common.
The samples are unequal.
Like I was saying, though the theme isn't for me, the game is well done but very short. Furthermore, the change is coming from the MC and not forced by someone else, which could make me want to try it again at some point.
You're really good at writing, though some sentences are repetitive like here :
or there :
There's no character who has any redeeming quality (the sister, the girlfriend and the bully are all jerks, without talking about Steve). Even the MC is too much.
The images seem well chosen but the difference between the initial image of the MC and the one after transforming is too radical. Something more progressive could have been better.
For the third job as a burger flipper, there's no end of content warning.
By the way, our stats and relationship points should appear somewhere.
Good continuation.
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