VN Ren'Py I Think I Might Be a Little Bit Psycho [v0.1.3] [Twisted]

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Lol00000

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Well If the MC becomes a real pyscho the tags "blackmail" "bdsm" "male domination" "sleep sex" "sexual harassment" "rape" it will have to be added
 

Overlord070

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This has real potential, I like that we are basically a voice in MCs head and can push him in either direction and he sometimes he questions or berates the voice's decisions.

Gabby isn't as ugly as the preview pic suggested, poor choice of pic there, though she does look a bit too targaryen; the mom really looks like an older sister, which I'm aware it's on purpose to sell her "youthfulness" have a bit of mixed feelings on that since this is a common trope in a lot of these games but regardless she is hot AF. Good music choice throughout, btw, very chill.

In lieu of no animations, having an option to change to multiple angles is nice, I've not seen it done too much.

Question regarding the tags, does the dating sim mean we can only choose 1 love interest to progress per save? Hope male domination can also be considered and that sharing and future cuck stuff remains optional

Lastly, I think someone has already said so, but these tags and patreon are a no-go. As soon as you gain a little traction they will ban you. Taboo content + rape/blackmail is banned on there.
 
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MagicMan753

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Feedback for Dark&Twisted :

- I feel like still too many choices after playing from beginning again. There does feel a bit less for what was added, but it was a short section. I feel like if you can do some slight rework to choices in episode 1 it would be great, you have to click like 5-6 choices to peek on mom feel like 2 could work here maybe 3, you have to do another 5-6 for do you want to enter sister's room, and lift shirt, could be like 2 maybe 3. So on for classroom, and many scenes with choices. Just hope you can correct this. I love having choices, but it feels like too much and a chore, its just a bit too much.

- I do feel like the dick is a bit too big, I would prefer it to be a couple inches shorter, cause when I first saw it I was like what, that is his dick. I expected big, but it just feels a bit too big to me.

-For the sex scene, I don't think selected pov is the best, I think it would work better if it could just rotate as you click forward and it automatically go through the sex scene instead of stopping for switch pov. Which brings me to my next point, I think there should be more sex talk, feels too quiet, its click continue, girl says one thing, then click continue or switch povs. Basically I think instead of pov, have a natural flowing sex scene with talking during by characters, just do what you do with other scenes but with sex.

I think that is it, I am just trying to give helpful feedback, I know its ultimately up to you and I will respect your decision, but I hope you take this feedback and make some changes. I just want the best for this game cause it is interesting, and there are so many beautiful girls I can't wait to romance.
 

Ag414

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Dark&Twisted Why there is lactation but no pregnancy tag in the planned tags? Promise pregnancy in the planned tags especially with the mother and sister[doesn't matter if it's the game's one of the endings or anywhere in the future] and I am in.
 
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Dark&Twisted

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Nov 13, 2024
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This has real potential, I like that we are basically a voice in MCs head and can push him in either direction and he sometimes he questions or berates the voice's decisions.

Gabby isn't as ugly as the preview pic suggested, poor choice of pic there, though she does look a bit too targaryen; the mom really looks like an older sister, which I'm aware it's on purpose to sell her "youthfulness" have a bit of mixed feelings on that since this is a common trope in a lot of these games but regardless she is hot AF. Good much choice throughout, btw, very chill.

In lieu of no animations, having an option to change to multiple angles is nice, I've not seen it done too much.

Question regarding the tags, does the dating sim mean we can only choose 1 love interest to progress per save? Hope male domination can also be considered and that sharing and future cuck stuff remains optional

Lastly, I think someone has already said so, but these tags and patreon are a no-go. As soon as you gain a little traction they will ban you. Taboo content + rape/blackmail is banned on there.
About the dating sim - no that's not what it means, but depending on the path you chose already, you could have seen some conflicting thoughts and choices about having sex with the unknown MILF, because you may have been dating June.

About the planned tags: I solemnly swear my game will not contain any of these planned tags - I fully intend to honor Patreon's rules, I don't know where those planned tags came from, but I have no control whatsoever on fan made patches to the game.

I also created a subscribestar account, but have not gained support there yet.
 
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Dark&Twisted

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Feedback for Dark&Twisted :

- I feel like still too many choices after playing from beginning again. There does feel a bit less for what was added, but it was a short section. I feel like if you can do some slight rework to choices in episode 1 it would be great, you have to click like 5-6 choices to peek on mom feel like 2 could work here maybe 3, you have to do another 5-6 for do you want to enter sister's room, and lift shirt, could be like 2 maybe 3. So on for classroom, and many scenes with choices. Just hope you can correct this. I love having choices, but it feels like too much and a chore, its just a bit too much.

- I do feel like the dick is a bit too big, I would prefer it to be a couple inches shorter, cause when I first saw it I was like what, that is his dick. I expected big, but it just feels a bit too big to me.

-For the sex scene, I don't think selected pov is the best, I think it would work better if it could just rotate as you click forward and it automatically go through the sex scene instead of stopping for switch pov. Which brings me to my next point, I think there should be more sex talk, feels too quiet, its click continue, girl says one thing, then click continue or switch povs. Basically I think instead of pov, have a natural flowing sex scene with talking during by characters, just do what you do with other scenes but with sex.

I think that is it, I am just trying to give helpful feedback, I know its ultimately up to you and I will respect your decision, but I hope you take this feedback and make some changes. I just want the best for this game cause it is interesting, and there are so many beautiful girls I can't wait to romance.
Too many choices? Really???
I did a quick check, I only have 68 choices in episode 1. If anything I should add one more.
Kidding aside, I do want to give many choices, but playing through it a couple times I agree the two instances you mentioned I probably overdid.

I also agree with the two other points you make. This initial sex scene wasn't really that essential to the story though, so I didn't put too much work into it. I'll definitely do better for the next ones!
 

Overlord070

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Jan 21, 2021
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Feedback for Dark&Twisted :

- I feel like still too many choices after playing from beginning again. There does feel a bit less for what was added, but it was a short section. I feel like if you can do some slight rework to choices in episode 1 it would be great, you have to click like 5-6 choices to peek on mom feel like 2 could work here maybe 3, you have to do another 5-6 for do you want to enter sister's room, and lift shirt, could be like 2 maybe 3. So on for classroom, and many scenes with choices. Just hope you can correct this. I love having choices, but it feels like too much and a chore, its just a bit too much.
I feel like this is fine in the beginning, making those decisions isn't particularly normal and MC is still "sane" but as the game progresses most likely it will reduce the amount of times the "voice" has to convince him.

About the planned tags: I solemnly swear my game will not contain any of these planned tags - I fully intend to honor Patreon's rules, I don't know where those planned tags came from, but I have no control whatsoever on fan made patches to the game.
Gotcha, my bad, it seems like it's a legitimate mix-up. Unfortunately, you just can't control what people patch or mod into your game :(

About the dating sim - no that's not what it means, but depending on the path you chose already, you could have seen some conflicting thoughts and choices about having sex with the unknown MILF, because you may have been dating June.
Right on my save, MC is dating June and banged the milf but she didn't seem like a main love interest that why I asked.
Anyways, good luck with the game!
 

Echoesinthedarkness

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There will be plenty of options to max out your psycho score. Not every single choice you make needs to be the psycho one.
yes, but when I choose to share I get -psycho so to actually progress psycho I need to make two more relevant choices. so I imagine progressing both sharing and psycho will require some metagame lol
 
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