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Jnx or Jnx idk how it works to tag you. Hope you can see this.
Thank you for taking the time to play ImoTsuyo and write such a review.
I will expand to answer you each point in detail giving my opinion about it.
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Thanks for playing ImoTsuyo, I hope you continue downloading the new versions and that they continue, in a certain way, calling your attention not to leave it.
I appreciate the reply, and insight into what your thoughts are on everything. And I will say, I know full well I will probably be one of the more critical voices toward your project, especially seeing as this will appeal to the wholesome crowd. It's more that I see potential and room for growth rather than giving an "A+" for effort and cute girls. (Which is why most games on this site get high ratings) I'm also a weeb that has watched more anime than god, and even though I like it, I'm tired of the tropes so I complain about it a lot more. And the "White Knight" comment wasn't really a praise, and I hope it's toned down a little in future. But now that you're aware, do with it what you will. The absurdity in adult games is something I'd like everyone to move past, especially in heavy, story-driven experiences like this. Once in a while is fine, but Saigo in this has presented himself as a complete standoffish asshole that only likes his sister. Sure, he beat the bully by my count four times I believe now? But the way he talks to everyone never lets up and I'm sure that's part of the growth he'll have. However the one week he knows everyone doesn't seem enough for people to look past all of the negative character traits he flaunts.
Anyway, critiquing aside, this story has very endearing anime vibes that I like and I'm curious how it all goes so I will check everything out again to see how things progress. I would advise you to think about adding event/title card CGs for things that have already happened though, but I get how much more you'd have to do because of them.
And side note, no, lousy grammar is not better than not reading at all. The translation is this is heavily serviceable, but it still was very rough. I would rather wait 6 months for something translated and localized, because otherwise it feels like a shovelware game pumped out for monthly patreon money. Not saying that's what you do, more that, that is what so many of the "Devs" on here do. Churning out default RenPy UI games, with flipped Daz models, bad google translate engrish, and the story is usually "Lazy guy suddenly attracted to his family and women want his penis." Which I will thank you for having an actual story in your visual NOVEL.
But keep up the good work and hope things go well for you and this project.