Really nice game. Do not known if it ill stay like this til the very end as it seems to be a ambitious project by the developer, but until now, few things can be hardly criticized.
But i need to ask, what about Elin? I mean, what is the reason for her existence as a character? Dont take me wrong, i kinda like her but she just feel very odd to me. Take for example Cass, Mother or even Ophelia. All of them has or had objectivies or at least a reason for them in history. Cass is very ambitious and had a entire plotline for her, Ophelia probably are that kinda of character that are really strong and do not know it but is very sickly (kinda like miquella for example if we take the part of ´´not knowing about their power`` off) Mother is probably a super strong mage and clearly have political plans for the realm/empire. But Elin is simply just there existing and complaining about something. I understand that i am talking about a adult game and perhaps she is just there to be hot and get fucked by her brother and in the very end have a thousand of incestuous half elves babies who are supossed to become king or emperor in the future, but still is kinda dificulty to understand her as a character. All the character in the game who are at least what we can call ´´adults`` (we do not known theirs ages to really imply that) have political views and political plots and reasons to do what they do, everyone but Elin.
Once again, i like her. I even thinks she is the ´´main`` love interest for the MC (i known it is a harem game) but i cant just let it go without saying she is kinda lost in the whole plot. I am pretty sure Lazy Monkey has something important for her cooking in the shadows. She has that whole plot about portals, that are specially intriguing if you go with the ´´mage`` path, althought i would not be surprised if it just becomes a multiverse orgy between multiples twin sisters and the MC or even with him and his otherselvs, but i feel kinda worried that she simple will become a important character coming frow nowhere like Deus ex machina.
Anyway, it still in the very beginning of the game so lets see what Lazy Monkey has in storage for us. Until then, really good job. It is kinda of a fresh air here in the F95 and in the adult VN scene nowadays.
Sorry if the english it is not as sharp at it was one day. I barely use it nowadays, especially when it is about writing and not reading or speaking.
But i need to ask, what about Elin? I mean, what is the reason for her existence as a character? Dont take me wrong, i kinda like her but she just feel very odd to me. Take for example Cass, Mother or even Ophelia. All of them has or had objectivies or at least a reason for them in history. Cass is very ambitious and had a entire plotline for her, Ophelia probably are that kinda of character that are really strong and do not know it but is very sickly (kinda like miquella for example if we take the part of ´´not knowing about their power`` off) Mother is probably a super strong mage and clearly have political plans for the realm/empire. But Elin is simply just there existing and complaining about something. I understand that i am talking about a adult game and perhaps she is just there to be hot and get fucked by her brother and in the very end have a thousand of incestuous half elves babies who are supossed to become king or emperor in the future, but still is kinda dificulty to understand her as a character. All the character in the game who are at least what we can call ´´adults`` (we do not known theirs ages to really imply that) have political views and political plots and reasons to do what they do, everyone but Elin.
Once again, i like her. I even thinks she is the ´´main`` love interest for the MC (i known it is a harem game) but i cant just let it go without saying she is kinda lost in the whole plot. I am pretty sure Lazy Monkey has something important for her cooking in the shadows. She has that whole plot about portals, that are specially intriguing if you go with the ´´mage`` path, althought i would not be surprised if it just becomes a multiverse orgy between multiples twin sisters and the MC or even with him and his otherselvs, but i feel kinda worried that she simple will become a important character coming frow nowhere like Deus ex machina.
Anyway, it still in the very beginning of the game so lets see what Lazy Monkey has in storage for us. Until then, really good job. It is kinda of a fresh air here in the F95 and in the adult VN scene nowadays.
Sorry if the english it is not as sharp at it was one day. I barely use it nowadays, especially when it is about writing and not reading or speaking.
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