Havenless_
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Always a win when a dev switches from kinetic novel to choice based novel.
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Battle Brother Anon
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If MC is poor, doesn't seem to eat much, and spends most of his free time walking, how is he so fat? Does dude just have the world's worst thyroid problem?
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Surprisingly good game! Good graphics, interesting but down to Earth plot, good flow, well written, likeable main character, good lewd scenes... It's unexpected how good this game is! I look forward to chapter 2! Speaking of that, it's also surprising that it only has one chapter, and only came out literally 2 days ago, considering how much content it already has. It's impressive! And that cliffhanger was exciting, too. Definitely a 5/5 game for me!
p.s. Sorry for poor wording, am writing this while tired.
p.s. Sorry for poor wording, am writing this while tired.
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Landerk
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Just another way to say teen, like 13-17 I think.im i just stupid, what is hebe?
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So, as a part of the "Story" focused crowd, I'm going to reserve my rating since the game is so early, and just leave some genuine constructive feedback, as well some personal opinions because this story hit a bit close to home.
I feel like some of this goes without saying, or I should let the Dev cook, but this is the first game from them I'm playing.
Of course, I say none of this expecting posh literary excellence from an AVN (Even though the horniest of AVNs can have the deepest characters and stories). But these are just some things to keep in mind early so there won't be so much backpedaling or late changes/add-ons that should've been made much earlier. I don't want to tell the dev how to make their game, but I feel like a lot of games go off the rails because no one says what's wrong or what can be improved.
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Of course, I say none of this expecting posh literary excellence from an AVN (Even though the horniest of AVNs can have the deepest characters and stories). But these are just some things to keep in mind early so there won't be so much backpedaling or late changes/add-ons that should've been made much earlier. I don't want to tell the dev how to make their game, but I feel like a lot of games go off the rails because no one says what's wrong or what can be improved.
I'm not sure what hebe means. Definitely first time I've heard it being used to describe characters in game anyways. I have no issues with any of the female characters, but I would probably add a age disclaimer to the game for those that are hung up on that.
I would also point out that vampires that appear young have a longer lifespan than humans and while they may appear young their actual age is typically alot older. They could be around for hundreds or thousands of years. Just something for those to consider.
The MC character change with looks was a surprise, but not an unwelcome one for me. So no complaints from me on that regard.
I hope Kina gets some sort of redemption instead of being used as a blood bag or whatever Irina has planned for her.
Eric on the other hand. Definitely not a likable character and I hope he suffers alot. He actually deserves whatever misfortune he gets for his despicable treatment and abuse of those around him.
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"Choices will increase along the way."
Zero multiplied by as much as we want stills equals zero.
So there a gameplay concept issue at the core. Need an intro rework.
It's probably intentional, and a change from the usual Alpha Chad with a 2-foot magic dick that opens with a fuck scene. He doesn't stay a fat/ugly nerd and there are a few other AVNs where the MC starts off as unattractive, a loser or an asshole. I do hope the choice comes up to where he finishes his turning though at some point. I have a feeling otherwise he will be locked out of a lot of the LI options if they are vampires and there won't be a way to fuck everyone in the same playthrough.
age bracket after loli, aka teen. Under 13 = loli, 13-17 hebe, 18+ needs no tag, but technically 18-20 is ephebe.im i just stupid, what is hebe?
well, I'm a fat loser in real life, I don't want to play as one too, at least not for long. In this what was there kinda had to be there to set up the story.
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NTR equals "another dick". But when its "another pussy" even without MC's involvement - it is actually known as "making things even better"
This was a super good start.
As always - good luck to dev and i hope this title wont die at 0.2
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Not that it matters much here, as on this site anything prepubescence gets banned, so loli does fine and most people know what it is.
Awesome game! loved the graphics and the story, need more chapters ASAP!! thanks lament for making those GOOD games
Does anyoneknows more games with an "Hebe" tag? liked a lot.
Does anyoneknows more games with an "Hebe" tag? liked a lot.