My review of up to v20
I had this game for like awhile before I cam back to play it again. Stopped when I was introduce to Trevor. Some things I noticed when playing to game for a few days which can be improved on.
First I thought this VN was a linear story with branching paths based on the options you pick since it was goin like that for a few days (in game) and if the game dev say it has a great story like SL and other games but it turned into a point and grind fest and figuring out what to do and go on the map.
the Betting game that is to make money is so repetitive due to the face you can only bet 10 or 20 and in this game most Items cost 50 or more.
The next thing was the gigolo gig. Each one was paying 25 and when you see them again and now you want to give them a different service you can charge up to 100 but they would flatly decline, which makes not sense since they was introduced as wealthy ladies. Now you have hookers in the street ally and they charge 100 and the high class one ask for 150
Author/Dev of this game If the Character Aiko is the make the player feel sorry for her and try to make her feel that not everyone is a piece of shit and also treating her like a sex toy by doing non sexual. Then why would you make another character try to blackmail her and also the MC. why is MC jerking off to her while giving her a massage when she does not want to be treated like a sex toy and somehow she get turn on by this act
Another thing that was weird is the same scenes with the different characters. I understand that the Dev have flesh out the female character you are talking to but they just change a few words. Ok great example is when you invite the 5 ladies that you can invite to drink with you. The bartender gives the same banter when your lady friend goes to the customers. when your lady friend comes back you shouldn't have to choose whether to keep flirting with the bartender or go back and talk to your
date. Most bartenders will know when to stop and let you get back to talking to your date. Secondly if she really wants to go out with you or hook up with you they will find a way to ask you before date comes back or when you are about to leave ( when you pay your tab they will write there number on the back of the recipe ) Thirdly If the Bartender see you with a different woman coming around the same time every other day. wouldn't they make a flirty comment abut that. Now the club scene for each woman is so dumb due to the fact it was the same gym doing and saying the same shit
Also why did the Dev Called Mindy a Bimbo, I don't think he understand what that means. Sure she is naive but other than that her introduction she was wearing a modest outfit and her trope is chewing gum that's it. She is not hyper feminized nor wear scantly clad outfits
The graphics got way better during the later parts of the game. This is why I don't understand . The MC you play as changed meaning the character model was changing throughout the scenes. Go back a fix that. I remember one part where your character is kissing and his forehead was warped. It is nothing wrong with finding creative way of hiding the MC face, but you do have to keep the model consistent. Aka the hair style, Facial features ( even if its someone hiding his face, eating ass, etc) and the MC Dick.
The MC Dick throughout the Story has been changing. Most Guys that play these VN games are mainly looking at the hot ladies and storytelling, but it does come a point where you are going to see the MC dick so you can see the sex scene. In this game they fixed the weird Uncut dick 10 inch model ( slab of clay ) that was seen a few times in the beginning of the game. After the improvement how it looks and changed the size to around 7-8 inches also reduce the girth. They did a scene where the dick got smaller around 4-5 inches, and it feels like the animation of certain scenes is still using the old rig of the 10 inch.
Go back and insert the new models of the Characters so it will look like a smooth flow. Like how does Aiko have black hair at the beginning of the story then next thing you know she has blue hair,
For those who read my review and rant, thank you