Hey again
Fallen Eros. I sent you a DM on Twitter about the proofreading. I'll also ask here though if it's easier for you to respond. I'd ask on Discord, but you only allow DMs from friends, and I refuse to link my phone to Discord for various reasons. I hope this works instead.
Started going through the game from the start to get everything, and was wondering how thorough you wanted me to be. I definitely mean no offense, and I do hope you don't take any from this. There are however are a lot of minor phrasing issues here and there. They don't really impact legibility, but they do definitely sound "odd" for a native English speaker. I also don't intend to "Put words in your mouth." so to speak. I was specifically asking if you would like suggestions for such errors, or to just fix the most egregious spelling and or grammar errors. One would obviously be a lot more work involved for both of us, and I'm not too keen on wasting either of our time. Let me know what you think. Having worked professionally as a proofreader I might be going way overboard. Occupational hazard. lol.