Man, what a shame! The game has great potential if you're just looking at the visuals, but the writing is all over the place.
The renders look amazing, with lots of detail and beautiful characters. The female MC looks nice as well. You could land a plane on her forehead but otherwise she looks really cute!
"Oh and Inertia..."
- "Yeah?"
"Put some pants on", said Dad, who apparently never wears a shirt.
Unfortunately the story is horrible. And I'm not even talking about the grammar or the conversations, but just the insane tempo at which incoherent and cliche events follow each other.
'Oh hey, this is my step-mom, she's really hot and I secretly like girls! And hey, now I'm going to look for a job and I suddenly find a stranger who wants to take pictures of me! And hey, now I'm doing yoga with my sister and tease a guy who I barely know even though I was super shy two minutes ago!' (Everything actually happens within 5 minutes)
It feels like one of those group assignments in school, where one guy is in charge of the visuals and the other is in charge of the story. And while the visual guy has been working on the assignment for weeks, the story guy wakes up on the morning before it needs to be handed in and quickly scribbles something down on paper...
So if I could give the developer some advice: find another story guy!