Personally I was very satisfied with how it was written since unlike most femdom it felt a lot more natural, like despite her actions there were still undertones of affection in them. At least that's what I felt.I mean, let's talk about it. I'd love to go back and add a more dominating MC that can turn the tables on Kiaria. I love circling back and adding smaller details/more choices to previous content where able. I wanted to do it for Kiaria's scene from the moment we wrote it, but time hasn't really allowed the opportunity.
That said, I'll try to have a second look at it and see what can be done.