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Done! Fixes will appear in the next major build.(Not sure if it's a typo or not...) during eve cookies scene (the one where she says, you aren't catching me alive): "Bet she has crumbs in there the rest of the day". Shouldn't it be "I bet she will have?"![]()
Another one when anna catches you and eve playing hide and seek:
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Another one during eve living room kiss:
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Another one during the picnic, it should be anna the first to talk:
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During the painting scene, i think it should be eve saying "forgive me..." not anna
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Not sure which scene it's, but it's during a romantic dinner with anna?:
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During misaki intro:
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Giving misaki a massage:
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It feels like this one is incomplete? happens in the sauna
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Not sure if it's a bug or not, but all girls seems to be fertile at the same time, even though i only ran into eve's period events, and the other's fertility info where "infertile"
Another thing i noticed, during the first scene on rey tf he practically begs you to help him become a girl, but when you have the serum, he screams that he doesn't want it? also, there isn't any event for girl rey yet?
Thanks. Looks like most of those had already been remedied.Just a question with this event:
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She's just 1 week pregnant according to the cheat setting, and she idn't even tell me she was pregnant... shouldn't it happen later? or at least after you know she's pregnant?
When you run into yami looking out the window in the dinning room:
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Also... her gym scene seems to be messed up, you first drink/toss the bottle water to her, and after that she asks you to join her/take the bottle from her bag?
When you said to anna that yami whent crazy and wants to kill you:
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Also it's there something else in the lab appart from rey tf and bubbles ointment? it's a little confusing cause according to the wiki there should be at least a way to adjust the pregnancy speeds
During anna's date:
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I always aspire to be better. I'm glad you're enjoying the game so far, and if you see places where you think there's room for improvement, feel free to point them out. I'm always looking for ways to improve my work and to polish old content.The setting and story has sooo much potential! GateKeeper, you need to work on improving the writing because there's some scenes that just give me a pure headache.
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"Please tell me what to do," Anna says through her tears, "Tell me how to please you, you can do anything you want to me, but please don't hurt my sister."
She clings to you suddenly, her grip almost enough to force the air from your lungs, her crying intensifying as she does so.
Not knowing what else to do, you just hold her as she cries. Eventually, her sobbing slows and her breathing steadies, her grip on you slowly easing. It takes you a moment to realize that she has fallen asleep. "
I didnt believe what i was reading when i read that last word. ASLEEP. She fell asleep.....in the hands of someone she's scared of? come on man! That makes no sense whatsover in the context.
Regardless , it has potential and you seem to be working on it quite a bit so i somewhat hope you'll improve on things like this.
It looks good on you.
You half-expect Yami to glare or snap at you, but instead you catch a hint of a smirk.
YamiFlattery will get you nowhere.
She tenses suddenly, stepping closer to the window with a sudden grim expression.
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(Player)Tch... it’s just Gaia.
She sounds almost disappointed, and as you lean over you see the naked brown-skinned girl prowling the edge of the forest.
Deciding to finally make your presence known, with a small laugh of your own at Anna's expense, you turn the corner. Making your way over to Anna with a huge grin on your face, you get a great view down her cleavage as she just so happens to be bent forward in your direction as she's cleaning the last of the cum that began dripping earlier.
AnnaI take it Eve found out what we had been doing earlier?
You say with a chuckle, growing all the more into an actual laugh at the sight of Anna's blush turning even more crimson from embarrassment.
You’ve placed two of the sausages under your top lip in both corners of your mouth, grinning as wide as possible.
Eve’m a walrus!
One sausage slips from your mouth to your plate, sending a small spatter of syrup and grease onto the table. Eve laughs hysterically behind her hands and you see Anna struggling to suppress a smile of her own.
The concern in Mitsuko's eyes morphs into confusion as you crack a wry smile.
MitsukoSo, does this mean you're falling for me?
She starts to blush as she stands and helps you up off the floor. Her eyes stay glued to the floor, an embarrassed look on her face as you dust yourself off.
Lines repeatedly being spoken by the wrong character.What exactly are these posts? Bug reports? If so, what exactly am I looking for here?
With a playful swat to her bottom, you send her running off in the general direction of the petting zoo.
The moment Eve is out of ear shot, you glance toward a confused looking Anna.
AnnaWhy did you tell her this was my idea? I never even imagined something like this.
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Anna's expression turns thoughtful for several seconds before she nods subtly.
By the time you reach the bounce house, Eve is already inside, screaming excitedly every time she springs into the air.
EveAnna! You've got to come in here! This is amazing!!!
I don't know, I'm probably too big for, . . . that.
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EmployeeIt's fine, you're welcome to join her if you want.
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Anna has barely gotten into the bounce house when Eve jumps again this time jumping as high as she can then slamming into the bottom of the bounce house as hard as possible.
Grinning, Eve talks around a mouth full of pizza, a bit of sauce marring the corner of her mouth.
EvePizza is awesome.
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Anna takes a small bite of her own slice of pizza, clearly savoring it as she chews.
As soon as the words leave her mouth, she embraces you, her head pressed firmly against your chest while she holds you close.
Returning the hug, you allow the moment to linger for far longer than a simple hug should, though somehow it doesn't make things weird.
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You reply as you finally release her.
Reaching out, you playfully swat her on the bottom as she starts to step back. The surprise in her eyes quickly vanishes behind a mischievous grin.
Not convinced that she is completely truthful, you ask her again.
PlayerAnna, tell me the truth.
Player
Eve has it... Please, don't punish her.
Anna says, worry clear in her voice.
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You push the door, so it opens a little more. You can now see Eve clearly, her hand moving up and down her crouch, rubbing your shirt against her pussy.
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Not waiting a second, you begin pounding into her. Eve lays her head onto the pillow, trying to stifle her moans, but her efforts are in vain as you pond her harder.
Lines repeatedly being spoken by the wrong character.
I've also noticed that the new story format is an awkward mash of two styles: novel format and the kind used for something like Ren'Py, or RPGM. Great by themselves, but the writing styles for the two are fundamentally different due to the sentence structure required for Ren'Py/RPGM. Inserting that visual style into a novel format is disruptive to the eye, and it just doesn't work.
It also inserts a lot more scrolling into the game, which is just constant noise from my mouse wheel going 'grrruk grrruk grrruk grrruk', which is irritating.
There are some errors that I didn't see in the A37 build, but somehow exists in the A38 build public version.
The first one is the Submitted Mitsuko Scene 4 (the thunderstorm one). In the A37 build the scene was complete without any problem, but in the A38 build the choice to go back to bed, as well as the two choices after choosing "Take a walk around the mansion" are red and would show missing error after choosing them.
Second one, the sex scene with Anna in the sauna. It doesn't seem to have a proceeding choice after the part when she hears Eve entering the bathing room, and there is no other choice but to choose another location to exit the scene.
Third, there are also some missing texts in the new Dating Eve scene.
Those are what I currently found, will update after finding anything else.